Ah, I was literally just hoping after today's episode that you'd write something on jealous/possessive Shravan and here it is! Absolutely loved it! <3 How I wish all that anger and frustration in him would culminate into something like this :P
As always, the romance is totally on point - loved seeing him take control like this and not back down, as well as the fact that he knows how his touch affects Sumo.
I really enjoyed reading him actually directly demand why she allows Aditya to help her and not him, and how she answered him back directly as well - they REALLY need more verbal communication between them in the show. And the title is totally apt for this one-shot because it brings all Shravan's possessiveness and jealous down to one word - MINE (or rather, his/hers) He wants to claim her as his own, yet he can't do that when he's not sure if she feels the same way. Her telling him the s stands for Shravan puts all his doubts to rest. I really loved how you tied in that scene of her doing her mehendi saying "Shravan ki Sumo, Sumo ka Shravan" - that was beautiful and fit in so perfectly!
And aha, the bit where he bought her that new lehenga was great, that's definitely something I can see him doing, he can be such a child in some ways - and he'd definitely want her to wear something of his selection, not Aditya's. And, of course, the ending was perfect because he literally marked her as his own and it just finished the whole thing off so well.
Keep writing! (and enduring my long reviews ahaha)
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