Swadarsh SS ~ Checkmate ~ Part 5, Page 10, 15th Oct - Page 4

Aimsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

Please update soon dear we are waiting eagerly for the next update pls

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aimsha
Thanks for such an awesome update priti it was amazing and really enjoyed reading it will wait for the next update eagerly pls update soon and thanks once again dear

Thank you Aimsha.

I hope you enjoy the next part too. I will update it in a bit

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Dumpling
Ahuja n simmi total surprise package.loved simmi being so concerned about swadheenta...n ahuja giving her a shoulder to grieve which appa shd have done but...

Thanx for PM

Thank you. In the end on the show, we saw that Simmi was so much more mature than everyone gave her credit. She was genuinely nice and understanding. I think she could have been like the one that I have tried to portray here. Had anyone tried sharing even a little bit of doubt with her, she would have supported Swadheenta right from the beginning. I feel that way.

I am glad you enjoyed it

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hi dear,😊
Priti, ri8??😳
It was such an awesome update!!!!👏 Wow!! Adarsh's friends Paddy and Ajay r helping them.😃 Even Simmi, Ahuja uncle and Radhika r with them in their plan.😃😃 Eagerly waiting for the next part.😉 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Hi Aheli.. Yup, I am Priti

Thank you for liking the update.

I actually updated the name from Ajay to Suraj. I got mixed up. His assistant's name was Suraj.. 😆

I am updating the next part today. Do let me know your thoughts.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: kennashreign
This was a really good update. You brought e dry one together well. It is really nice to see se adherents have so much support. Update soon

Thanks. The show was really realistic from the beginning. The two things that were hard for me to digest were

1. Swadheenta doing everything by herself. It was a really big problem and it was an impossible feat for anyone to manage everything on their own.

2. Adarsh was in such a good position to help her professionally. He did nothing

This story is my attempt to fix these two "errors" (for lack of a better word 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat
👏 wow! Its beautiful..
Surprise to know about Simmi &Ahuja..
Waiting for next..Thanks A lot for PM 🤗

Thanks Sana. I am updating the next part shortly. Hopefully you will enjoy it 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: olsen_124
It was a awesome update Priti.Unbelievable.Loved it.👏👏👏

Thanx for the PM
Update Soon

Thank you Bonny! I am glad you are liking it. I enjoy your stories, so it feels special to know from you that you are liking my narrations.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.
superb update

Thank you 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Stylikson
unresd on page 1

😆

Yes, I saw your comment. Thanks Megs...

Have you read the 2nd part as well? Anyways, posting Part 3 today!

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Aheli

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Hi Aheli.. Yup, I am Priti

Thank you for liking the update.

I actually updated the name from Ajay to Suraj. I got mixed up. His assistant's name was Suraj.. 😆

I am updating the next part today. Do let me know your thoughts.

Oh! Don't worry about the mixed up Priti.😆 Yeah, Adarsh's assistant was Suraj, but here by reading Ajay's name, I thought him to be any other friend of Adarsh, just for this story.😳 Will wait for ur update dear.😃

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