KaSu FF || i will wait for you || chapter-6 updated

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello people...m not good at writing stories but still i tried...well this is my 1st FF
Its gud or bad ...plz feel free to comment..i'll try to improve next time


Sumona finished setting down the plates of food. She placed a pair of knives, spoons, and forks, as well as napkins by the plates and glanced over at the clock. kapil should be home any minute now.' She walked over to the door and smiled, hearing the door unlock. The door swung open to reveal kapil walking in, loosening his tie while carrying his black suit. He looked up to see sumona but walked passed her, throwing his suit into her arms. "Hang it up." He ordered as he took off his shoes and set them nicely by the stair steps. Sumona smile slowly disappeared, but she obeyed and hung his suit in the closet nearby the door. It was just a daily routine after all.so sumona was used to this "Did you eat? She asked ..I cooked dinner." kapil didn't answer and just walked over to the kitchen. Sumona sighed, ignoring the silent answer and followed him. It's been like this for 2 years anyways. They got married unexpectedly...from last 8 years they were close friends and now strangers. But although he was heartless, for some strange reason, he never ask anything not even about what happend all day bt she came to love him. She didn't understand how, she didn't understand why, but she did. He was her husband and she was expected to spend her entire life with him from now on anyways.



They both sat quietly, not uttering a

word to each other. Every dinner meal

was like this. Quiet, awkward, and

silent ...kapil almost acted as if she

wasn't even there as alwayz ...even if she did try to start up a conversation.

"So...how was ur work today?"sumona

forced another smile at him.

kapil stayed quiet and was just kept

eating.

"...it was probably good, huh? You'll

go to sleep early today right?"

Again, she asked...he didn't

answer.

Sumona felt like she was having a

conversation with herself.

"..kappu.." She placed down her

fork and pushed her plate of food away

slightly. "...tomorrow's Saturday.

Kahi bahar chale? Like a restaurant or something?"

kapil only gave her an icy glare,

clearly indicating that he didn't want to

go anywhere tomorrow with her. He

took the napkin and patted his mouth

gently before getting up.

"Clean this up and wash the dishes."

He replied before walking out of the

kitchen and going upstairs sumona stared

down at the table sadly

and stood up, proceeding to clean up

the dishes.

After she was done washing the

dishes, she went up to their bedroom

to see kapil already sound asleep.

Sumona went into her closet, changing

into a simple, small white dress. She

crawled on the bed an adjusted the

blankets.

kapil's eyes fluttered and once he

saw her, he glared. "...will you be a

little more quiet?" He turned the other

way from her and let out an irritated

sigh.

"sorry" sumona muttered and

gently laid down, pulling the blankets

up to her shoulders.

It was warm. Although, she felt so

cold. Was this how she was going to

spend the rest of her life? It was dark

and lonely. he never asked her how she is..or she needs anything more then what he think, and she

knew he would never come to love

her. Was this really the end of

everything? Being married to kapil

and living with no love, no

compassion?

Sumona's breathing was quivering.

During the first nights of their

marriage, she would cry silently to

herself. But she stopped that habit a

year ago, knowing she couldn't do

anything about this marriage. She hugged herself and looked sorrowfully into the darkness of their bedroom. Sumona's eyes glanced over to kapil

and she turned around so that she

faced him.

He stirred a little, and turned around to

face her, too. But he was still asleep.

Sumona gazed at him, observing his

facial features and soft breathing. He

had the perfect looks, and had a wife

waiting for him everyday at home.

Anybody would think that he had the

perfect life. He had everything.

She wondered for so many times,

why she loved him. He didn't care for

her, he didn't worry for her, he didn't

love her. He would never be the

husband she wished for but why he has changed a lot..she talked to herself.

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Posted: 7 years ago
hello dear !!
it's very first dark kasu ff on tkss forum ...am very excited to know wht happns next
do update soon !!
all the best
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey nice concept... u will get better as u write and read more... keep trying 😉
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This is a completely diff FF than the ones people usually write..im interested to know why Kapil's behavior has changed..maybe out of jealousy? Something happened with Sumona that has made him think sumona is in the marriage unwillingly? Its just a guess. Cant wait for the next update! 
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Chapter-2

Sumona woke up to see kapil still
sleeping. 'Ah...he must be exhausted
after working for this whole week.'
She made a genuine smile at him
before getting off the bed.
She quickly washed up and
brushed her hair before running
downstairs to make breakfast for him.'Another day, another meal...another lonely, passing day with kapil
"I guess I'll just make something of his favourite
today." She muttered to herself.after doing with the breakfast she gazed around the lonely kitchen.She opened the fridge, poured a glass of orange juice and walked over to the dining table.
She put the plate  and the glass of orange juice down on the table,
along with a napkin she sat down
and waited for
kapil to come downstairs.
kapil slid on a blue, long T-shirt
And a pair of black jeans.
He guessed that she was probably
cooking breakfast already, since he
could smell the aroma of aloo k parathe. He went downstairs to see sumona sitting alone at the dining table, staring out into space.
Quietly, he walked over and sat down next to her. He narrowed his eyes, realizing that there was only one plate of paratha
She smiled at him. "I'm not hungry.
You should eat. I'll go do the laundry
in a bit."
kapil just averted his eyes to the
food and started eating.
She looked at him while he ate...he
was even graceful when he was
eating. Why was he so perfect? She
sighed and stared down at the table
She honestly didn't know how she
stuck with him this long.
kapil glanced at her and noticed her
Different expression. "What's wrong?"
koi problem hai??
Sumons was actually surprised that he
even cared to ask. She looked up at
him, but her hopes died when she saw
no emotion or worry in his eyes.
"...nothing, kapil" aisi koi baat nai
hai
This was the first time she had
avoided a question from him.
Obviously, something was wrong.
"Tell me." He ordered.
She didn't understand how he could
just order her around like that..and
she was actually so weak to obey him
all this time. Quietly, she stood up and
excused herself from the table. Her
heart was thumping...she had never
once ignored kapil's order
Will he be angry with her?
No, of course not. He didn't care
enough for her attitude to irritate him.
She approached the stairs and took
a step up, but she gasped in surprise
when she felt someone grab her wrist.
She turned around to see kapil
giving her that usual cold glare.
"Did you just ignore me?" He said
"No"
She admitted she was afraid of this
side of him. Though he looks cute but looks could kill, she
would probably be dead by now.
"Really, nothing is wrong, kapil"
everything is fine
She said reassuringly.
"...you're lying." He said
Sumona gazed down at the way he was
holding her wrist. Even though it
wasn't in a nice way, she was happy
that he touched her. he never touched
her before even on the day of their
marriage "You really wouldn't care."
Sumona dared to say and looked at him straight
in the eyes,
"If I didn't care, then why would I be
asking?" He hissed.
Sumona's eyebrows went up in
surprise. Does that mean he does
care? It was kind of too hard to
believe. "Because, kapil...you
never cared. Ever."

kapil just narrowed his eyes at her,
as if he was going to hurt her.
Sumona let out a sigh and came
closer to him. She has never, in their
marriage, dared to make the first
move to get closer to him or touch
him. "I'm your wife. But I deserve to
have my own privacy, too. I have
never once told you any of my
problems, and I never will. You have
never told me your problems, and it's
not my place to ask you anything.
Let's just leave it at that." She
faintly smiled at him and
placed a hand on his, gently moving his
hand off her wrist.
"I'll go wash the clothes. You can just
leave the plate there...I'll come later." She simply stated before
going up the stairs.
kapil watched her go and then he
looked down at his hand. It had been
so long since he held her hand,the soft skin..that touch..that feeling..he was all lost in her thought...past memories was all he was thinking about
Kapil-"No kapil..what are u thinking.please come ro sense..u cannot love her AGAIN"

after doing the laundry work
she walked out of the room
to see kapil watching the news.
"Do you want anything?" She
asked, walking over to him.
kapil just shook his head.
Sumona quietly sat down on the couch
across from him.he glanced over
at her, wondering why she didn't sit
right next to him like she usually
does.
".if...you aren't going out with me
today, then...will it be ok if I went out
with some friends?" She asked
hesitantly.
"I don't care." kapil muttered.
'Of course...why will u care' she
thought as she
stood up. "Then, I'll be home by
eight..ok bye sharm...kapil"
He was about to reply to her bye but the word sharma ji got stuck in his mind..he always loved the way she use to call her sharma ji..he wanted to hear that again..he turned around to see her but she already left
"Shreya? Yea, it's sumona
Shreya-hii sumo..kaha hai yaar tu?
Sumo-haha yehi hu yaar acha can you
hangout today? By the coffee cafe near
your apartment? I'll be there in a few
minutes." Sumona replied before
hanging up.
With her life so busy with kapil, she
hadn't had the chance to go out with
her friends anymore. It's been nearly
weeks since she last saw shreya.
After driving down a few more roads
and going through a little traffic, she
finally stopped in front of the cafe. She
spotted shreya sitting right by the glass
window and smiled.

Sumona quickly got out of the car and
entered the cafe. Shreya!" She called
and
grinned when she looked over at her.
Shreya didn't waste any time as she got
up and pulled sumona into a tight hug.
Shreya-"Oh my gosh! How have you been?
You haven't texted or called me in
almost 4 weeks!"
Sumona-"I know, I know. But I asked kapil if
I could go out today, and he said yes,
so I thought I'd just come and hangout
with you for a bit as she hugged her
back.
Shreya-"That's good news! Besides, how is
your marriage going anyways?" They
both sat down across from each other.
Sumona-"...um...it's been fine."
Shreya-"So how have you been?
and hows mr sharma? its been tooo long
we have talked and i know u are very
lucky to have him in ur life..
Sumona- i know...he's like...the
perfect partner..." She smiled
Shreya-ohooo perfect partner hmmm...she teased her
(Sumona didn't want her to be worried about her married life...she felt sorry for not telling the truth)
Shreya-ok so we could watch movies like old times." What say?
Sumona-Hmm..ok done lets go 
While on the way...shreya's phone rang
She checked her phone"Sorry sumo main bhul gayi thi...mom ka msg hai..aaj doctor k sath apointment tha
Sumona-kya baat hai...sab thik hai na
Shreya-ya babe dont worry...bt m soo sorry aaj ka plan cancel karna hoga
Sumona-oh dear...its ok..take care...baad main milte hai they hugged eachother tightly
 sumona-ok health comes first..we'll wait
for u..do visit once
Shreya "Ok, sure i
will...byeee...
kapil glanced up at the time. It was
only 5 o'clock. She won't be home
until another three hours.
But goddamn, time was passing by so
slow without her. He got off the couch
and walked over to the fridge to see if
there was something he could eat.

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Chapter 3
He raised his eyebrows in surprise
when he saw a plate of maggie. It
was his fav food"me and meri maggie"


He took the plate out and set it on the
dining table. kapil narrowed his
eyes when he felt something
underneath the plate. He realized it
was a stickynote and peeled it off and
read it.
"Hi kapil"
Like I said, I'll be gone till 8, so if
you get hungry, I made some
fried rice n vegetables for you.dont eat
too much maggie its unhealthy...
There's also a dish of cup cake in the
oven, so eat
that, too."
It was a simple note. But he was
content with it. He checked in the
oven, and like the note said, there was
a dish of cup cake...it was still
warm.

He wondered how she came to know
all of his favorite things. To be honest,
now that he thought about it," she was
really a good wife.but why she is doing all this..she no more love me..its all because of' he started remembering all about the past
He wondered why she was still with
him, . He knew he was treating her
badly or like he really dont know who she is...he was never the type to be
warm up to someone, even if it was a
girl.
But she was different. No matter
how many times he rejected her offers
to go out to eat, or to go out on a
simple date, no matter how mean he
was towards her, she never mentioned
the thought of leaving him.
'Why is she still here...with me...? I
can't give her anything that she would
want in a husband...' kapil thought...i can not love her the way i use to love her..
She was too good for him. The first
time he saw her, he honestly thought
she was the one for him...the most cute of all...but as we say time and people do change
he admitted that she
was looking damn gorgeous  in her wedding
dress, and as months passed by, she
did whatever she could to be a good
wife.
He knew
I never wanted this marriage after whatever happend..but still she said yes and i couldnt refuse...i wish i did said no to this marriage..he thought
She probably hated him. When he was
eating breakfast this morning, he was
worried that she wasn't eating with
him, but he didn't know how to put his
concern into words...and he ended up
asking her harshly. When
he held her hand to stop her and asked
her what's wrong...he really meant it.
He was surprised that she would brush
him off and avoid the question.
kapil closed his eyes and let out a
frustrated sigh.'what is wrong with me...main aisa kab se ho gaya"
...he was in love with her..aur ab...they act as if they r worst than strangers"
He always loved her but how one can forget that day...she cheated on him...he still do love her...He just didn't
know how to show his feelings. He
couldn't possibly tell her...or he didn't wanted to
It was strange.
But undeniably, he just knew for sure
that he feel something special for her.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Main jaanti thi aisa hi kuch hoga..she cheated on him? With who..uaur kab..aur flashback scene kab dikhaoge..im damn anxious now..pls update soon. This is lovely. Keep it up darling. Love u ❤️
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Originally posted by: UrjaLuvsWahi

Main jaanti thi aisa hi kuch hoga..she cheated on him? With who..uaur kab..aur flashback scene kab dikhaoge..im damn anxious now..pls update soon. This is lovely. Keep it up darling. Love u ❤️

Haule haule Sab kuch ayega darlig hehehe...thank you so much love u too :*
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Originally posted by: dream_catcher

Haule haule Sab kuch ayega darlig hehehe...thank you so much love u too :*

Sab kuch ka kya matlab samjhu main *hides face* 😳😉 acha sorry
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Posted: 7 years ago
Who said you are not good at writing stories ? You are super amazing !!!!!! Truly love this brand new concept & really very very curious to know how & why did she cheat on him. The story is really amazing :) its just grabbing the interest. Loving Sumona as a caring wife and Kappu being arrogant is superbly going waiting for the moment when he will love her again!!!! I would love to read more of this amazing work =D Keep shining :)
Pleashhh Do PM me when you update !

Lots of Pyaar to you & Best of Luck buddy!