FF: Journey from Ms. to Mrs.? - (pt. 3 , pg 6 - 26.7.2016) - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
First part u update . I fall in love with the story.. just brilliant..
superbly u penned down..
waiting for the next update .. hope u will do asap..
and plz pm me for the next time
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

First part u update . I fall in love with the story.. just brilliant..
superbly u penned down..
waiting for the next update .. hope u will do asap..
and plz pm me for the next time



Hi!

Glad you liked the story! Will update next part by Saturday.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ashwin😕..muje laga Ram honge
koi bhi aaye shaadi toh Ram Kapoor se hi hogi😉
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
waiting for next update..
continue asap...
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Posted: 7 years ago
waiting. waiting. jaldi Karo na
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 3

Priya parks her car in her parking lot and takes a deep breath... uff..  and talks to herself...

lets do it Priya... once more...

Priya opens the door... and enters Sharma house...

Ayesha: dii.. aap aagayii ... kamal hai aaj aap khud itne jaldi aagayi.. maa ne aapko ek baar bhi call nahi kiya...

Priya: haa ayesha aaj kaam jaldi khatam ho gaya... aur roz roz.. maa ka lecture... sorry daant khaani nahi chahiye.. what say.. and winks at ayesha...

Ayesha: haa that's right dii.. waise.. acha laga aapko thoda excited hote dekh..

Priya: smiles and says excited... aur main... no ways... and thinks... Waise hoon toh sahi... dekhte hai.. aaj kismet  kya khel dikhati hai...

Shipra: priya ... tu aagyi? Chalo acha hai.. ayesha,... jaa di ko parlour leke jaa... thoda... dhang se tayar karke laa..

Priya: maa.. whats this... nonsense... ladka aa raha hai dekhne... main koi miss world ke contest nahi jaa rahi...

Shipra; rehne de priya... tere liye  rishta dhundna.. koi contest vontest se kam nahi hai... bas... bhagwaan kare.. ye ladka tujhe pasand karle...

Priya; maa... main koi parlour varlour nahi jaa rahi... hoon.. agar tum mujhe force karogi toh... main...

Shipra; toh main kya? Mujhe koi lekin vekin nahi sunna...

Priya; lekin maa...

Shipra: ayesha... leke jaa is priya ko...

Ayesha; pulls priya with her... chalo diii.. isse pehle... hitler ka bhoot maa me ghus jaaye... chalo..

@ parlor...

Ayesha: diii.. ladka dikhne me acha hai... fair.. and handsome... aur haa... padha likha bhi hai...

Priya; with cucumber on her eyes... says hmm...

Ayesha: waise dii... aapko kaisa ladka chahiye?

Priya: ayesha... tu phir shuru ho gayi,...

Ayesha: dii... please batao naa...

Priya with  her eyes still closed... ladka dikhne me chahe jaisa bhi ho.. kaala... mota... lamba.. I don't mind... lekin... intelligent hona chahiye...  badon ko maan samaan dene waala... auraton ko izzat denewaala ho.. aur haaa... equally treat karta ho...Jo sach ka saath de... aur zarurat padhne par... thoda gussa bhi karne waala ho... apne career ke saath.. apne partner ke career ko bhi utna hi... value de... meri family ko apni family ke tarah treat kare...aur haa

Ayesha; ab aur kya diii?

Priya: mujhe apna dost samjhe...

Parlor lady: didi... seedha seedha bol dijiye... ke aapko.. sri ram chahiye...

Ayesha: starts giggling...

Priya; removes cucumber and gives an angry stare to the young girl and says... what?

Parlor girl: who... dusra scissor chahiye and leaves from there...

Ayesha: laughs loudly.. . sri ram.. and starts singing hey raam... hey raam... tu hi bigade,,, tu hi saware...

Priya: ayesha.. ab thapad khayegi tu... and starts laughing with her... and says.. sri ram... and both laugh again...

Ayesha; I just hope ke.. ye ashwin kumar... me sabhi sri ramji ke gun ho...

Priya: ab tu thapad hi khayegi.. mujhese...

Ayesha; arre... dii... aap toh serious ho gayi... main sachh me keh rahi hoon... bhagwan kare... usme who saare gun ho jo aaap dhund rahi hai... and shows her fingers crossed...

Priya; smiles and says... fingers crossed... and hugs ayesha...

To be continued...

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Friends,

Sorry for the delay... and for the short post...just penned down and posted the 3rd part... ignore any grammatical and spell  errors...

BALH Rocks⭐️

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update but make it little big
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Posted: 7 years ago
good one. next wala long part Dena
keep posting. BALH n RaYa, RaShi rocks
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very sweet n simple now waiting for next part n hope jaldi ram ki entry ho jaye n raya ka milan bhi