FF: Journey from Ms. to Mrs.? - (pt. 3 , pg 6 - 26.7.2016) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Very awesome way to introduction of the story. In this Priya seems to be very different and bindass type of lady who will surely give it back and not sit quite.



Well.. all i can say right now is... lets wait and watch...

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part - 2

Ayesha: dii.. utho di... its 7 am di... get up..

Priya: 5 mins Ayesha... please sone de... abhi 6 baje soyi hoon...

Ayesha: diii... aapke alarm ne ghar ke sabhi ko jaga diya hai... aur aap kumbhkaran ke tarah soyi ho... please utho ... you have to reach office on time and you have to come back home on time... dii... ladke waale aa rahe hai...

Priya: getting up... slowly yawns and sits rubbing her eyes... aaj 12th hai kya?

Ayesha: haa dii... it is 12th jan he maa ne toh sabhi tayari shuru kar di... papa bhi market gaye hai.. sabzi lene... now get up... chalo...

Priya gets  ready... and is having her breakfast while checking her emails...

Shipra; priya please... ab ye kaam chodo.. aur sun... aaj na ladke waale aayenge.. 7 baje.. sham ko.. toh aaj half day leke aa jana

Priya: maa.. main 1 hour jaldi niklungi... no half day and all...ok...

Shipra; priya... jo karna hai kar... lekin tu ghar pe 6 baje aayegi.. aur 7 baje tak tayaar rahegi bas.. aur kuch nahi kehna mujhe..

Ayesha: haa di... aur no argument... is baar main aur papa maa ki side pe hai...

Priya: arre... maine mana thodi kiya.. I just said... I will not take half day...

Sudhir; priya.. jo bhi kar beta.. bas time pe aa jana.. and smiles..

Priya smiles back and says.. ji. Papa

Priya bids bye to everyone and puts her bag in car... and calls her Boss...

Priya; sir... good morning.. priya here...

Boss: yes priya good morning...

Priya: sir.. I was not feeling well today... I would like to take leave today...

Boss; priya all well? Kuch serious hai kya?

Priya; nahi sir... bas thoda stomach upset... hai

Boss: take care.. anyways we don't  have any important meeting today...

Priya: thank you sir... I will take care...

Priya plays music...  and starts driving...

Kuchh kum roshan hai roshani, kuchh kum gili hai baarishein

 Kuchh kum lehraati hai hawa, kuchh kum hai dil mein khwaayishein

 Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise, tere liye hi thehra ho jaise

 Hmm hmm hmm hmm...

 

 Kyun meri saans bhi kuchh bhigi si hai

 Duriyon si huyi najdiki si hai

 Jaane kya yeh baat hai, har subah abb raat hai

 Kuchh kum roshan hai roshani, kuchh kum gili hai baarishein

 Kuchh kum lehraati hai hawa, kuchh kum hai dil mein khwaayishein

 Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise, tere liye hi thehra ho jaise

 Hmm hmm hmm hmm...

 

 Phul mehake nahi kuchh gumsum se hai

 Jaise ruthe huye kuchh yeh tumse hai

 Khusgbuye dhal gayi, saath tum abb jo nahi

 Kuchh kum roshan hai roshani, kuchh kum gili hai baarishein

 Kuchh kum lehraati hai hawa, kuchh kum hai dil mein khwaayishein

 Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise, tere liye hi thehra ho jaise

 Hmm hmm hmm hmm...

 

Priya parks her vehicle.. in parking area... removes her... shoes and puts on her slipper,  picks up her diary and pen ... locks her car.. and starts walking towards beach...

Priya... takes a deep breath...  and starts writing...

Hi Diary!

Aaj pehli baar jhooth bola maine...ghar waalon se... boss se...

Aaj phir ek ladke se milna hai...

Pata nahi aaj tak kitne ladkon se mili hoon...Jab shaadi ki umar thi... tab ghar ke haalat kharab the.. toh career bananeka bhoot sawar tha... choti umar me responsibility le li gar ki... ayesha ki padhai ki... papa ki tabiyat jo thik nahi thi us dauran... ab jab sab kuch theek hai toh... umar beet chuki hai...shaadi ki...

Sach kaha hai... waqt kisi ke liye nahi rukta...

Hmmm...kal raat ko...maa, papa aur ayesha ne kaha.. agar ladka mujhe pasand ho toh hi baat aage badhegi...

Lekin... pata nahi kyun... aaj pehli baar.. ek ghabrahat si ho rahi hai... aaj kya baat karu usse... Ashwin ... se...

Ashwin Kumar... umar... 35 years, BE & MBA kiya hai.. Sr. manager hai  MNC me... shayad promote hoga.. is saal... aise maa keh rahi thi... toh.. position barabari ka hoga... mujhse thoda kum earn karta hai..lekin koi baat nahi... kyunki mera manna hai.. paise haaton ka mail hota hai... kab aayega aur kab jaayega kuch pata nahi...

Lekin.. kya who ladka .. I mean Ashwin bhi aise hi sochega? Kahin.. ye rishton main duriyaa... badha toh nahi dengi... agar ego ki baat ho gayi toh...

Jo bhi ho aaj usse milne ke baad hi faisla lungi main...

Lekin... aise kab tak sochegi tu priya... kab tak...

Maa papa.. kabhi kehte nahi.. lekin unki umar ho gayi hai.. unke bhi kahi saare armaan hai... meri shaadi ko lekar meri grihasti ko lekar...

Aur Ayesha... usne.. toh apna rishta tod diya... rakesh ke saath... mere liye... sidha sidha keh diya rakesh se.. se ki jab tak meri dii.. ki shaadi nahi hoti... main shaadi nahi karungi... iss baat ko aaj 3 saal ho gaye hai... aaj toh rakesh ki shaadi ho gayi hai aur 6 months ka baby hai usko... who toh zindagi me badh gaya aage... lekin Ayesha...

Meri wajah se... usne apne armaanon ki kurbani... di... aur mujhe bhanak tak nahi hone di... who tohh maa.. ne baton baton me bata diya...

Aaj ... yakin.. nahi hota ki meri behen itni badi ho gayi hai... ke mere liye.. itna bada... tyaag kar diya.. aur roz mere saamne... haske muuskurake baat karti hai...

Lekin ab aur nahi... ab mere wajah se... main ghar waalon ki khushi nahi cheen sakti... ab aur nahi... and cries... Looks at sky...

Aaj ek hafta ho gaya hai... ayesha ke decision ke bare me jaanke... roz sone ki koshish karti hoon.. lekin... ye guilt... ye guilt mujhe andar hi andar khaye jaa rahi hai... meri wajah se... ayesha ki..zindagi bhi ruki hui hai...

Kya karoon... main... kya karu...

Shayad.. ye rishta... ashwin ka... kuch hopes de jaaye... shayad...

Wish me luck Diary... ke aaj main zindagi ke tarazu me... sahi nirnay le saku...

Wish me luck...

Priya closes her diary... wipes her tear... and sits looking at the waves of the sea...

Dharti ki shobha badhata, saagar ka ye roop suhana

Lamha lamha yu... lehron ka ye viraat roop dikhlata

Saahil se takra saagar ki lehron kaagungunana

Sikhlati hai ye lehre har dard kosehkar bhi muskurana...

(credit: Deepika Jain, Source:Shabd sarovar.blog)

Priya takes one long look at sea... and then at sky... and says ...Wish me luck... and smiles...


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Posted: 7 years ago
ye ashwin Kumar kaun hai??? we want ram. ram ki entry kab hogi. nice part. pl continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mindblowing but mujhe laga ram hoga but ashwin plss bring ram plzz now cant wait for next part
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Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

ye ashwin Kumar kaun hai??? we want ram. ram ki entry kab hogi. nice part. pl continue



Ashwin ka intro de diya ... ;-)

Will have to wait for Ram's entry... It will be say after 13/14th part
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rayaland

Mindblowing but mujhe laga ram hoga but ashwin plss bring ram plzz now cant wait for next part


Thnx...

Ram's entry will be pretty late ... So hold on ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome part...
priya kitni pain me h..
ashwin ye kon h..ram ki entry kb hogi..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
oh nooo... ab ye ashwin ko kyu ghusa diya bich me!! :-/ sh*t... yaar... priya is upset coz of ayesha...are ese mind set me decisions har waqt sahi nai rehte... :-/ oh no...plzz ram ki entrt jald kara do... aur ashwin ko bhagao... next soon plzz and u didnt read SMH ? its ff sirf meri ho and ff takdeer...both of them are really superb.., but sooo emotional... :-( do read them :-)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

oh nooo... ab ye ashwin ko kyu ghusa diya bich me!! :-/ sh*t... yaar... priya is upset coz of ayesha...are ese mind set me decisions har waqt sahi nai rehte... :-/ oh no...plzz ram ki entrt jald kara do... aur ashwin ko bhagao... next soon plzz and u didnt read SMH ? its ff sirf meri ho and ff takdeer...both of them are really superb.., but sooo emotional... :-( do read them :-)



Hi!
Just a clarification ... Priya is not upset because of Ayesha ... But because of her situation ... In this case Ayesha is supporting Priya indirectly by not pressurising Priya ... But it's the time / situation that is effecting everyone ...

I haven't read both the Ff's ... Will surely read it ...


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Posted: 7 years ago
Priya dairy gives very much inlinking of her life and only wanna to help her family and hope so the coming proposal of Ashwin may be fruitful for her and her family and above all i like the way she interacted with her boss seems they are easy with each other.