Originally posted by: abhiya_12
Nikki only one thing ๐
This was the best thing read about the brothers till now.
Don't know why but I see this coming in future or maybe am wrong too
Please write some more
-Rev
Originally posted by: iqra.rudra
Woaahhh this just blew me away well done ๐
Originally posted by: suhaaana
beautiful
loved it
Originally posted by: dhruvika1991
beautifully written i really liked the way you described the leaving of a one brother and shivaay turning cold after anika and the Om's coming home and explaining i really like the way Om snaps and puled the trigger their fight was OMG and the Rudra coming between and his comment was hillarious are we playing bull fighting then bvoth brothers ganged up on him...
I liked the way you described jhanvi's appearence i was confuse first then when you describe her drinking i was awiie you stole my heart seeing her smile i feel like i should cry or laugh both...Jhanvi is the character i sympathies the most...
Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Wow amazing dear...you wrote so well๐ I really loved it especially the moment rudra entered ...awesome, do write more๐
Originally posted by: crushcrushed
This was marvellous ๐ *claps* best thing i have read about the brother's till now. You explained everything so perfectly ๐ dilemma of shivaay, pain of omkara and of course our cute little binding glue rudra ๐ณ very well written please write more ๐
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