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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
amazing os dear... please do write more 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya_12

Nikki only one thing ๐Ÿ‘
This was the best thing read about the brothers till now.
Don't know why but I see this coming in future or maybe am wrong too
Please write some more
-Rev


Thanks a lot for giving this fic a read. I am glad you liked it.
And I actually felt that we would have a situation like this in the future of the show too. So just penned it. I have a feeling that Om would be always trying to destroy MU's between Shivika๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqra.rudra

Woaahhh this just blew me away well done ๐Ÿ‘


Thank You. I am glad you liked it๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for reading it๐Ÿ˜›. It is the best encouragement for a writer๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago
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it's awesome. ..loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

beautifully written i really liked the way you described the leaving of a one brother and shivaay turning cold after anika and the Om's coming home and explaining i really like the way Om snaps and puled the trigger their fight was OMG and the Rudra coming between and his comment was hillarious are we playing bull fighting then bvoth brothers ganged up on him...

I liked the way you described jhanvi's appearence i was confuse first then when you describe her drinking i was awiie you stole my heart seeing her smile i feel like i should cry or laugh both... 

Jhanvi is the character i sympathies the most...


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Thanks a lot for giving it a try.
I always feel that Om would one day leave the mansion. Dunno why? Since he is such a truth loving person, maybe the revelation of something big and sinister would make him leave๐Ÿ˜•

As for the brothers; even though anyone of them leaves, the slightest amount of trouble in another's life would bring them back. So I thought why not a reunion scene, and who better to knock sense into Shivaay's thick skull than OM๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
That was lovely
Please write more
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Wow amazing dear...you wrote so well๐Ÿ‘ I really loved it especially the moment rudra entered ...awesome, do write more๐Ÿ˜›


Thank you๐Ÿ˜›
I just tried to portray an imagination of mine. 
Glad you liked it.
Will try to write more!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: crushcrushed

This was marvellous ๐Ÿ‘ *claps* best thing i have read about the brother's till now. You explained everything so perfectly ๐Ÿ‘ dilemma of shivaay, pain of omkara and of course our cute little binding glue rudra ๐Ÿ˜ณ very well written please write more ๐Ÿ˜Š


Is it me or are angsty Oberoi brothers cuter๐Ÿ˜† 

Anyway, thanks for reading my fic. I will definitely try my hand in more. Got some rough ideas. Let's see๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya.

OMG this is just so amazingly written...*hugs*

Please do write more


Thank you ๐Ÿค—

I am glad you found it good. I will definitely try to pen some more.
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