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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Wonderful os
I love brothers bonding fics 
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Amazing.
It was both dark yet simplistic and reflected the character types well.
The language you possess is very easy to follow yet very descriptive. Kudos.

Niv
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Loved it
Beautiful
Please continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: swaram

That was very eloquently written. Loved how described every emotion, thought and action. Totally Loved it ! Do write more!👍🏼


Thanks a lot for your compliment.
Since this is my first work, I am grateful for your encouragement.

Niki
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Allyson

Wonderful os

I love brothers bonding fics 


Thanks a lot. It is my first trial. Glad you liked it.

Niki
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: agreatperhaps

Amazing.
It was both dark yet simplistic and reflected the character types well.
The language you possess is very easy to follow yet very descriptive. Kudos.

Niv


Thanks a lot. I am glad you liked it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Thanks a lot.
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Originally posted by: Shivika-forever

Loved it
Beautiful
Please continue


Thanks. But this is an OS😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: cuteariya

superb OS
uff shivay hurt anika to the core 😡
just bcoz his mom show him video against anika 😡
I love the way om talk to shivay whatever he said was completely right 👏
can we get other part dear?
as want to know what anika will do?


Thanks a lot for your encouragement.
Om and Shivaay are such characters that their depth can give many angles. I love writing them,

Glad you liked it.

Niki
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Arshi67

You've captured the essence of the relationship the brothers share so beautifully. There is a profound understanding and respect between them that speaks of a deep bond. 

Loved how you had the very elegant Jhanvi rooting for them. 


Thanks a bunch for your encouragement.
I like Jhanvi in that manner too where she actually supports them.

Niki