~:Lost In Hopes:~ Omkaara os

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hola buddies!!! Anshika here...Presenting you all my very first os on Om...I don't even know why i wrote this but i guess you can say this Omkaara Effect.
 
LostIn Hopes
Lies!!!
He hated lies yet he was unknown to the truth.Truth was still hidden from him.His hand moulding a simple clay but failing miserably.His mind wandered off from one direction to other.Everything seemed broken and shattered to him.His family was broken and his mom was shattered.His Dad has done enough to Janvi. He was lost, so lost that it almost felt impossible to come back to reality.He was lost only in his hopes.Hope to see a perfect family.But Alas!!!
Shivay was still fighting for business,it became his sole focus.But their bond was still first priority to him.Rudra on the other had now didn't even want to belief in any commitment or anything but his commitment to them was still fresh.
Over the time so much has happened to them.yet their bond was intact but something was amiss in his life.His father became his biggest enemy, his mother was escorted to live among the shadows.

"Om"
Dadi asserted as she staggered towards him.

"Yes dadi"
He addressed ,a bit apathetically.Irritation creeping upto his neck.
"Everything will be fine"
Dadi whispered to him.She was deeply hurt by Shakti and Tej's behaviour.

"I don't know ,Dadi.Even hate seems a small word now"
He breathed.Things between him and Tej were just intensified.

"Thand Pa"
Dadi chimed in,trying to lighten up his darken mood.
"Now tell me,what happened to my biggest artist"
She asked.

"My mind just can't stop at anything,it keeps wandering off.Can't i have a caring,simple family.Something feels amiss"
He confessed ,expressing every single emotion to her.

"you know like every colour looks faded without its compliment,the same thing happens with human too"
Dadi comforted him.Trying to get all this talk into his silly head.

"Nuh nuh nuh..Not again this Love and Ishq talks.Please"
Om chuckled put his finger in his ear.His mood lighted up a bit.

"Fine don't listen.But when she will come into your life,every thing will fall into its respective place"
Dadi finished and went from their.Her work there was finished.

Om smiled to himself and shaked his head.Dadi and her Ishq talks.Adjusting his glasses he again started to focus on his sculpture.But Alas!! All his thoughts were consumed by riots that were now common at home.He won't let his mom suffer.He won't.He will rebel against his dad, oops Mr.Oberoi.This will mark the beginning of his war.
And this time we won't down without a fight.His hopes will win.
His fingers again started shaping the clay.Slowly dictating all his thoughts in one direction.Focusing.
"When an artist do a mistake,it becomes a new creation"
Dadi 's words lingered in his mind.He stood up and again got ready to make a new creation, the best mistake of his life"
"All set to make the best mistake of my life"
Saying this his hands automatically started shaping up the clay with the soft and graceful touch.Turning the simple clay into a magnificent piece of work.
Omkaara Singh Oberoi never gives up.

How was it???
Feel free to criticize me
Love
Anshi

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omfg this was so perfect 👏 loved it. Beautifully expressed ,perfect blend of dilemma and emotions 😳 please write more stuff *you made me drool for om even more*
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is the Omkara I want to see...
It is simply beautiful
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its soo beautiful yaar..
Loved it a lots..
Keep writing more dear..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful OS. 
This Omkara is what I would always love to watch on the show
Keep writing more
Good Luck!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#6
simply beautiful Omkara's thoughts and his turmoil are written so beautifully
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#7
Aww it was so beautiful and emotional... Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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just beautifull love it superb please more on Omkara
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: crushcrushed

Omfg this was so perfect 👏 loved it. Beautifully expressed ,perfect blend of dilemma and emotions 😳 please write more stuff *you made me drool for om even more*


Thank ya buddy...
Glad that u liked it...
He is already drool worthy..
Will try n write more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice one dear