Poem: The Soul's Sweetheart (Sequel Updated)

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Its Beautiful Ramya!!

Hey Ramya!  Beautiful piece . The words used very well suited and rhymed well . You have penned down a real piece of brilliance . Loved the genre also . Obsession is actually a very serious matter and a ghost having a obsession on a human ? Lord save the person . The last two line were a magic . You are Damon good poet . Ramya keep writing such poems . With such different genres 😆 . The genre is really unique I tell u . Never in dream I would think of ghost loving a human . Not even love but obsession . More dangerous re!  The difference you tried to draw out in love and obsession . Well done gal ! 

It's so beautiful!!
Romantic and soulful!!
I am usually nt that much of a fan of poems; but this one touched me. I loved, loved it ❤️.
N the genre!! My Goodness. Never ever imagined a ghost in love with a human; let alone obsessed!!

Fanx 4 the pm dr

LOVE, SidhiEdited by ---awe10some--- - 7 years ago

Ramya di,

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Perfect ghost obsession Rammy 👏👏👏
This is fabulous ⭐️
You write poems as well as you write stories.
Good job. Write a lot more :)
Edited by KrishnaPriyaa - 7 years ago

Hey Ramya

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Hey Ramya

Very good use of vocab and Rhyming was perfect

Intitally , so stupid of Me , I thought you were describing the feelings of a pregnant Lady😆 , till i reached the last 2 para's , i knew i had misunderstood something

A good read Definately.

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

🤣🤣

Shivam Bhaiya haina 😆😆