Hi LM
( this is for the epilogue only surprise of AN is something which I haven't got over with yet m still kind of dazed with it)
Finally the last nail
and with it you left a scar but with no
memories attached to it. at one point of time i thought that the ending will be painting like but only will it be a dream or reality is what i wasnt sure much about.
Sydney its always the lovely place the city which changed all the dynamics of their relationship. You know for the few line I was so petrified to read everything was dreadful to me.
That description which kept the identity of the person in the backseat anonymous was so perfectly described never giving any hint about it. And dusk wasn't this soothing as it is described in this.
In the first part it
was more like a HEA in normal course of events but this is ishveer we are
talking about when anything was normal in their life. So we move to the altered
journey ranveer was planning to have 3 kids yup actually they kissed in three
countries to har country ka souvenir to banta hai. That really a saviour that
they travelled only in three countries effect of globalization you see.
In this chapter you merged their expectations with life and the tragedies attached to it. You portrayed their whole story in it their predictions of the future and where they want each other to be. It was surreal dear totally.
And this was so true had anyone died that night then the other would have willingly admitted to the mental asylum along with the accompanying bed for me.
Honestly this was the long waited fantasy of you and TL to send him to mental asylum and I can see the smile on your face while writing it and actually visualizing it. The line telling that its not the happy ending nor the brutal end was the best of all. It was so positively filled with hope that I cannot even began to tell you.
He in all black really you never leave a chance to make him look sexy ( now for whom we will drool*crying like a kid*)
He accepted the fear and uncertainties of the future living only for the present time. And the description it was really like a dream I am living the dream he saw and painted that night but its realisation in presence is more vibrant and dazing.
Devarsh redeemed himself in much better way then sharman I mean he knew this guy have the habit of dangling and then coming back.
You know every time you mentioned that ranveer said its simple it will you die I die but this is the first time you mentioned that its other way also if she lives he also lives and their heart are latched with each other truly.
But now comes the surprising part when you mentioned specifically that she is alive alright and still in love with him as her eyes said then I thought there is something more to it because ishani can never fall out of love with him. With this came the another bomb but this was the most welcoming one till date she forgot chirag his memories his face everything related to him was a blank. The only thing they wished that day at star night came true.
Chirag was nothing but a black spot in her life but with no visibility in it. You know when she cried in this book about how she wished everytime that her guilt should go away and chirag and his memories should go I always wondered this should happen but then I knew this was not possible unless she does something like that of eternal sunshine of a spotless mind which I knew was very much impossible. But my genie can make anything possible and that too with so perfection she didn't forgot anything just the right amount of thing that had the essence of ranveer with the face of chirag she forgot what happened because of unveiling of ishani the enigma and the fear of her life her nightmare. This was the best thing dear it was a total surprise dear I just so loved it. She remembered everything that had ranveer in essence as well as in presence but all the part that made her guilt were black. Its like the black of her heart shifted to the black of her past and made it invisible. Replacing her heart only with the red of love that she had been witnessing from the presence of ranveer in her life to satisfy her quench of love.
You know what with this you made the parting easier I clearly had no idea that when you told about the surprise that I have in waiting. I so so so much love you for this. This was the best surprise although AN was the baap of all the surprises till date. Its good that she didn't remembered his assaults that itself was pukeworthy. And then start the healing everyone paid a visit and everyone reunited again and for a moment we shift from aashiqui to hum sath sath hai.
He recorded the scuffle that went. Isne bachpan me kaunsi chakki ka aata khaya tha how come he can be so smart and perfect and sexy and loving and innocent and cute and everything that we can think of as an adjective to define his qualities.
But then now they have made peace with everything even with the fact that they had an dark past which they will tackle when it resurfaces for the time being now its only their relation and love matters the most.
Baa died and she cannot redeem herself more than giving the last rites authority to ranveer. And all is better in their life. Its good they moved to Sydney because something from parekh mansion would have reminded them of the past.
Hawk and CBM were back but now they were more ranveer and ishani and that line of life always giving them chance they weren't holding it was so apt for them.
And who have time and need for the other vices when they have each other. This wasn't an end to their story it was the happy beginning leaving their sad past.
These were the life goals to achieve for never waiting for happy ending nor expecting sad either just living every day and trying to making it happy from their own side no wait for the destiny to make it a happy ending.
she might remember everything but he will help her to overcome with it and for now that part remains untold.
With this they both got what they wished with the shooting star each others happiness and presence in life.
Extraordinary totally dazing chapter.
Finally end but the farewell speech will take a while to come because this was my emotional extreme to write all this without mentioning about the end so please pardon me for that.
Originally posted by: LadyMeringue
DV, I've unreserved my post on Page 138. 😳😳 I'll come back to the reviews for this chapter by the end of this week for certain since I'll be travelling back again. 😊😊
Hi LM this was pending though when i started typing i was speechless and it turned out disaster hope you like it. I am very bad in farewell speeches
You know when I first visited the forum it was because of you I was just searching about novels to read online when I stumbled on India forum and out of everything the only thing caught my fancy was your writing.
It was NC which made me a member on this forum which of course helped me make some great friends like you and elvish. When NC ended it was really difficult because that was the only reason for me to come to this forum daily and enjoy this awesome writing of yours. Ishveer were appealing to me in promo but it was your writing that made them so dear to me.
You don't know ishveer of show and the one which are your creation looks completely alien to me in essence because yours ishveer were the one who I liked so much.
When you started with US after writing pearls of love I was so damn happy that I actually shouted when I got the pm. The journey with US was nothing but a real life like experience for me whether its many thoughts expressed by you in this ff or the 26 july nightmare I never ever felt so connected to any story as I felt for this. You don't know but there were many days of sadness and stress in my life that were made less burdened because of your chapter at the end of the day. I waited for them like crazy.
I was a HEA type person and it was your capacity to display the pain so beautifully and purely that made me hooked to it and don't say about the blood filled display I actually felt for them only through ranveer's journey towards his mayka. And now I am angst sucker.
Book 5 I was able to tolerate because you have written it otherwise chishani zeher de do mujhe.
You redefined everything pain,love,angst, anger, hatred to another level. Never I felt so attracted to solve the ystery of dreams as I felt because of your writing.
You are the most surprising and mysterious fella in my life. And you have turned my genie also for this FF. I love you so much and you are such an amazing friend.
You are such an amazing writer you can make me smile, blush, cry buckets with your update. I think even 100 adjectives fall short to describe your writing. I would wish to have a best seller from you in my shelf in future and I am not at all exaggerating because I know you can do it. You are a magician dear who can stupefy make every emotion expressed through the power words.
all the thought and facts and philosophies of life you have expressed in this FF have really taught me a lot and i will be always thankful to you for this.
The dedication, effort and all the hard work you put for this story made me love you a little more and I really idealise you for your juggling skills specially being the best in everything and giving your 100% in everything you do.
This FF ending is the saddest thing but at the end of the day it gave me a friend like you to cherish throughout.
Thank you dear and this dedication was really surprising thing and it acted as a better ointment for the FF ending and thank you making my birthday week so special.
Love you so much more dear.
PS: this wont be last post from me because every time i read this FF i will come to praise you here a little more.
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