AKDHA SS : EYES WITH OUT TEARS......updated on pg.14

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Posted: 7 years ago
HEY GUYS AFTER GETTING GOOD RESPONS IN MY PREVIOUS STORIES I AM BACK WITH MY NEW SS.
HOPE YOU LIKE IT.





AKDHA SS : EYES WITH OUT TEARS



Sob... Sob... Sob...
There is only sound of Sob in the dark room not a single tear come out from her doe shaped beautiful eyes.
Because being a doctor she knew that she have to cry but... Not a single tear come out from her eyes...
The tiny body of her fully loose her all anergy even she don't have energy to stand up from ground and go in to the bed.
She only crying... With out tear...
And started to unconscious... But before she unconscious say only those words come out from her mouth, " why kanha... Why always me...??? He left me with out any reason...? He gone with out any single word...?? I know when he is with me then only tears are in my eyes but I am happy with those tear... But from when he left me not a single tear come out from by eyes... Not a single one... Why kanha... When he is with me I thought he is the reason of my tear but no he is tear of my eye... He is life for me why kanha why he left me????? He is a soul reason

reason of my life to live... But now I don't have reason to live... "
Suddenly moti come from another room and made to sleep her on the bed and called to jalal and goes to outside of room..


PLZ GUYS GIVE YOUR COMMENTS SO I SHOULD KNOW IF I HAVE TO CONTINUE OR NOT..
LOVE YOU ALL ❀️ πŸ€—Edited by Rajat_loverr - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
Congratulation di fr new ss.intrsting & different cncept.plz update soon if possible today or tomorow.thanx fr pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mashallah what a concept hemu
loved it
jodha is crying but not a single tears escaped from her eyes
and i loved the line "he is tears of my eyes"
waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sad pro πŸ˜•
But update sooon πŸ˜Š

Ty for pmπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey planning to have fiction blast 
Well a sad prologue 
Update soon hemaxi 
Nd thanks for the pm 
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Akdhalover6898

Mashallah what a concept hemu
loved it
jodha is crying but not a single tears escaped from her eyes
and i loved the line "he is tears of my eyes"
waiting for next update


update next soon
Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome concept , Continue πŸ˜ƒ soon and thanks for pm 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats for the new SS buddy, nice conceptπŸ‘
Jo crying and praying God for sending the person back who gave her tears..
Moti is also there with her..
Awaiting the first chappy, post soon...

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Posted: 7 years ago
Heart touching concept.
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm