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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beloved


He had a girlfriend, I had a boyfriend

 He was my friend, I was his friend

 He was my roommate, I was his roommate

 He was my classmate, I was his classmate

 His girlfriend was my best friend; my boyfriend was his best friend

 He was attracted to me, I was distracted by him

 He said he never loved his girlfriend, I said my boyfriend never loved me.

 He said he had strong feelings for me, I said I had been loving him

 He was nervous, I was frightened

 He hugged me, I felt sparks.

 

His girlfriend had no interest in him; my boyfriend had no time for me

 He wanted to get out of his relationship; I wanted to run out of my relationship

 He was emotionally strong, I was emotionally weak

 He said, if he is not needed then he must leave; I said, I can't because my guilt is all that controls me

 He was angry at me, I was making him understand.

 

He said, he wanted me, but I denied.

He crouched his head, and leaned onto me;

He sealed his lips with mine, and kissed me.

His eyes had tears, so had mine.

He said he wanted me, but I had no choice.

He waited for my answer, but I couldn't reply.

He left me, and I couldn't see his face for weeks.

He might have left the college, I fear.

His girlfriend was busy with my boyfriend, in his absence.

My boyfriend betrayed me, finally!

I realized my love for him, and what he said was true

He was right, and I needed him.

But he left me, all alone.

I closed my eyes, feeling isolated.

 

But when ,

I opened my eyes, and he was there

Lying beside me, playing with my hair

I was glad, that he came back years ago

When I cried my heart out talking to him over the phone,

He said, he loved me, and was always there for me

And that he was just waiting for me,

He came and proposed me, that day,

But I again had no choice, but to agree

It was deep from my heart and soul, and not from my guilt

He gave his heart to me, I gave mine to him.

He kissed me, I kissed him

With the crowd in our wedding, excitedly howling at us

And finally he and I became we,

And ever after, our life is a glee!

 

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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
tried something new again! was a little free, so wrote this up! do give your likes, your reviews!πŸ˜ƒ
don't ask me where's nibir, cuz i wrote it imagining them!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† don't mind this crap! aise jhatke mujhe lagte rehte hainπŸ˜³πŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awww baba this was so beautiful πŸ‘
really different way of presenting a story
good selection of words
I loved it ❀️
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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

awww baba this was so beautiful πŸ‘
really different way of presenting a story
good selection of words
I loved it ❀️


thankoo vaishuu!!😳😳
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

Awww this is so cute πŸ˜†


thankoo niyu!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice try ... a beautiful story πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜³
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Wow amazing fantastic πŸ‘
So so so beautifully written 
Loved it...!!! β€οΈ
Please do write more πŸ˜³
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Originally posted by: poornima_15

Nice try ... a beautiful story πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜³


thankoo punu!😳😳
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Wow amazing fantastic πŸ‘

So so so beautifully written 
Loved it...!!! β€οΈ
Please do write more πŸ˜³


thankoo anmol!😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
beautiful nd different 😳
loved it totally Annie
tumne nibir ko imagine kr k likha aur hmne unhe imagine kr k hi pdaπŸ˜‰

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