Ashok-Vitt TS- Do Bhaiyo Ka Pyaar

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Note:- Inspired by Ashok and Vitt's brotherhood. I present to you 
Ashok-Vitt TS- Do Bhaiyo ka Pyaar 
PART 1

It was a sunny day in Dharma's home. Little Vitt was sad . Dharma notices this.

Dharma:Kya hui hai Vitt? Itna udas kyu Ho?(what happened Vitt? Why are you sad?)
Vitt:Kuch nahi maa. Mei udas nahi hui.(Nothing mother. I am not sad)
Dharma:Tum jut ke rahe Ho Vitt.Kya chupa rahe Ho apne maa se?(You are lying Vitt.What are you hiding from your mother?)
Vitt:Mei jut nahi bol raha maa. Mei thik hui. Mei kelne ja raha hui.(I am not lying mother. I am fine. I am going to play)
Vitt runs away to play.
Dharma: Ruk jao Vitt. Kya karu iss balak ka.Kabhi kabhi yeh apne bade bhai ki tarah vyavahar karte hai.(Stop Vitt. What will I do with this boy? Sometimes he behaves like his elder brother)
Just then Ashok comes

Ashok:Kya baat hai maa? Aap Chintit dikhayi de rahe Ho?(What happened mother? Why are you looking so worried?)
Dharma:Mei Vitt ke liye Chintit hui Chand ( I am worried about Vitt Chand)
Ashok :Kya hua Vitt ko maa?( What happened to Vitt maa?)
Dharma:Vitt ko kuch nahi hui hai Ashok parantu vo bahut udas dikhayi de raha ta.(Nothing happened to Vitt Ashok . He was looking very sad)
Ashok :Woh udas kyu ta maa?Kya apne Vitt ko nehi pucha?(Why is he sad? Did you ask him?)
Dharma:Meine pucha Vitt se parantu unse mujshe jut kaha hai aur phir kelne ke bahane karke bhaag gaya hai Ashok .(I asked him but he lied to me. He made a excuse of playing and ran away Ashok )
Ashok:Vitt ne aisa kiya maa!Kitni ajeeb bat hai!Woh toh kabhi bhi aise nahi karta hai.(Vitt did like this maa!How strange!He never does like this.)
Dharma:Mujhe pata hai Ashok isliye Mei bahut Chintit hui. Vitt ko lekar.(I know Ashok .That is why I am worried for Vitt.)
Ashok:Aap chinta mat karo maa.Mei jakar dekta hui Vitt ko Kya pareshani  hai.Mei uska  udasi ko dur kardunga.Mei apne chote bhai ko udas nahi dekha sakta hui.(Don't worry maa.I will find out what is worrying Vitt.I will take away his sadness.I cannot see my little brother sad.)
Dharma:thik hai Ashok .Mei tum dono ki Pratiksha karungi(OK Chand. I will wait for both of you)

Meanwhile Vitt was sitting under a tree feeling very upset.His Vasusen came to him.
Vasusen:Aao Vitt kelete hai.(Come Vitt.Let's play)
Vitt:Nahi Vasusen.Aaj mera man nahi keelne ka(No Vasusen.I am not in the mood to play)
Vasusen: thik hai Vitt(OK Vitt)

Vasusen went away.

After some time...

Ashok was searching for Vitt everywhere but he did not find him anywhere.He found Vitt's friend Vasusen playing with someone.
Chand:Vasusen tumne Vitt ko Kahi  dekha hai Kya?(Did you see Vitt anywhere Vasusen?)
Vasusen:Meine Vitt ko dekha hai Ashok bhaiya( I saw him Brother Ashok )
Ashok:Meine Vitt ko ek ped ke niche baita hui dekha ta.meine usse saath kelne keliye bulaya tha parantu usne mana kar diya ta.woh pareshan lag raha ta Ashok bhaiya.( I saw him sitting under a tree . I called him to play with me but he refused. He was looking upset brother Ashok)
Ashok:Dhanyavad Vasusen iss suchan dene ke liye.jakar kelo. Mei Vitt ke pas ja raha hui.(Thank you Vasusen for this news.Go and play.I am going to Vitt.)
Vasusen: theek hai bhaiya(OK brother)

To be continued 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice penned down dear!😊
liked it!πŸ˜ƒ
update soon!πŸ˜ƒ
thanx for the pm!😊
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Originally posted by: 155pari

nice penned down dear!😊

liked it!πŸ˜ƒ
update soon!πŸ˜ƒ
thanx for the pm!😊
Me first 


Thank you NamitaπŸ˜ƒ
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Waao its very interesting and excellent writing.Loved two brothers bonding.
And keep continue it.
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Originally posted by: maheshbedant

Waao its very interesting and excellent writing.Loved two brothers bonding.
And keep continue it.
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Thank you for the wonderful compliment Mahesh
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very cute is dear ! Very well written . But you don't pm me  I stalked your index πŸ˜† continu this one soon. 
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Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

Very cute is dear ! Very well written . But you don't pm me  I stalked your index πŸ˜† continu this one soon. 


Thank u Sam . Sorry. I did not know that you will be interesting in this one. I will definitely PM you whenever I update a new story 
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resEdited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago
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First chaps Awesome Nonie...pls update fast waiting for more...you know how I love these bonding based fics...so thanks for writing this...its superb
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Originally posted by: livelyandlovely

First chaps Awesome Nonie...pls update fast waiting for more...you know how I love these bonding based fics...so thanks for writing this...its superb


Thank you TaniπŸ˜ƒ