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Posted: 7 years ago
hello all

this is my first OS!! hope u all like it..
so it goes like now neha"s wedding preparation is on peak nd sona come to dikshit house... after the last day conversation with nuts nd dev, sona is hesitated to com in front of dev, but still she know she has to face dev at a time nd then dev suddenly come from his nd start talking to his sisters.. he told them that do u knw the secret of Dr. Bose, she is having a boyfreind...an unknown feeling grown in him so he didnt understand what was it... suddenly he look at sonakshi who is already watching her from the corner, he want to knw the reaction of her on this but she kept looking at him in surprised manner, so he left for office then the girls start inquiring abt sona's boyfriend nd she start explaining abt dev then suddenly interrupted by nikki as dev bhai, she meant that the guy is just like dev bhai, sona said she knows that mr.dikshit is like that only but he was talking about his boyfriend scene ended there, next scene dev talk to ranveer parents and they agreed for the marriage, then dev talk to ranveer about neha demands firstly he refused but after dev convince him he too agreed to the condtions dev put before him
wedding preprations started everyone is busy in shopping... ishwari is selecting clothes for neha she is confused so she called sona nd ask her to try the dupattas nd she try one nd more dupattas but when she wear orange color dupatta suddenly dev comes is stunned to see her, she is looking so beautiful that for a second he cannot let his off from her, then suddenly came to his sences nd notice that everyone is praising sona that is looking beautiful in the dupatta, he first time different he thinks that miss bose is really looking beautiful in the dupatta, he goes close to her nd said u r looking beautiful in this duppatta miss bose... nd sonakshi is stunned hearing that.. she kept stand still for a moment nd lost in the thoughts of dev ... she is super happy that first time dev praises her looks... nd imagine herself nd dev in the dream sequence of the song of gerua...
end of part 1 hope u all like it.. comeent nd tell ur views on that.
part 2 on first page only.. enjoy
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krystle123 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
wow...its cute and lovely.😳  continue soonπŸ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago
after her imagination she thinks i hope it will come true someday, now dev is in his bedroom thinking what he has just thought about sonakshi, nd suddenly he remembered  the conversation of his nuts nd sona about her boyfriend, he don't know y he kept thinking about sona, somewhere he didnt like the fact that sona has a boyfriend nd she did'nt tell him about it, he was thinking that only suddenly sona made her entry he kept looking at her helplessly she told him that ishwari is calling him, he turned down his eyes from her nd said "ma se kahiye mein a rha hoon" she ask " aap bahut pershan lag rhe hain mr. dikshit??" he dont know y he is sad but told " i m fine miss bose" she said ok ( convo end there)
dev come downstairs ishwari ask him to participate in the purchasing dupatta for natasha nd he again lost in thoughts of sona nd said ma a ye sab cheez mujhe samjh nahi ati tujhe jo acha lage le le mein apne kamre mein ja rha hoon mujhe kuch zaruri kaam hai" he start going then suddenly her sister stop him nd ask bhaiya apni aankhen band karo nd imagine karo natasha dupatte mein nd hume batao kaun sa dupatta acha lagega unpar he then closes his eyes nd is stunned to sonakshi in that same orange dupatta nd open his eyes shockingly nikki insists closes his for some time nd see the love of his life wearing a dupatta again dev close his eyes nd again he saw sonakshi wearing that dupatta he kind of like sonakshi in the dupatta nd then open her eyes becoz of shock again nd told "ma ye orange wala acha hai"... her sister start teasing him about selecting the dupatta which miss bose is wearing... he is in complete shock that he saw miss bose in that dupatta nd again nd again he only saw miss bose whenever he close his eyes...
he is very confused becoz of the feeling nd thought of asking someone about his problem.. nd taht someone is definately not miss bose this time.. so he goes nd talk to neha regarding this indirectly he goes to neha nd ask " jab kis ko har jagah dikhai dene lge toh uska matlab kya hai??( looking damm cute while asking) neha said "bhai aapko kya hua hai kaun dikhai de rha hai aapko har jagah??" he wispered miss bose.. nd then said " tu bta na neha meine toh aise hi puch liya"? neha told her when u love a person u start imagine her/ him everywhere..." bhai jab aap pyaar mein hote ho toh aapko har jagah bas usi ka chera dikhai dene lagta hai, bas usi ki awaz sunai deti hai its magical bhai par aap nahi samjhoge abhi jab aapko pyaar ho jayega kisi se tab samjhoge aur din aapko pta chalega that yahi vo insan hai jo aapke liye bna hai".. he say " kya bol rhi hai neha aisa kuch nahi hota hai" she told him " bhai pyaar toh aisa hio hota hai" he gets more confused nd now start thinking that kya mujhe miss bose se pyaar ho gya hai??
 have to end it there hope u all like it plz comment  will update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
i hope u all like the os... plz comment nd tell ur views on that..
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Posted: 7 years ago
l would love to hear ur comments...
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Posted: 7 years ago
its really awesome dearπŸ‘ u nailed it.πŸ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: krystle123

its really awesome dearπŸ‘u nailed it.πŸ˜›

thanku so much dear.. hope others will like it too.. nd congratulations for the Goldie...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Both d parts were awesome dear..
I wish it were actually happen in d episode...
Truly beautiful OS...
Keep it up nd write more 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Both d parts were awesome dear..
I wish it were actually happen in d episode...
Truly beautiful OS...
Keep it up nd write more 😊

thanku so much dear i will update third part soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful OS... I wish the dupatta selection thing comes true and Dev is all lost in Sona when she wears a Orange colored dupatta.😳