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Sonakshi was trying to sleep.but it was impossible for her.Her dreams,it is shattered.Dev's wedding is fixed with Natasha.
It was a shock for her to hear this news.
Apne saare sapne ek second mai thod diya.
After accident she fell in love him unknowingly.
It was not in her hand.she never thought that she will fall in love with him.
At that time she was the most happiest person in this world.Her pray was accepted by god.she got her mr.perfect.
My happiness had a short life span.it was destroyed by Natasha.After her entry in my life my love story take a turn.
But my love for Dev it will never change.i only want his happiness.
But my dreams...
It was a sleepless night for sonakshi.A terrible night.Because dev's marriage is fixed with Natasha.
Elena was trying to console her.please stop it...Iam really worried for you.
Sonakshi was crying badly."mai aise kaise chod sakti hoon.mai sirf unki khusi chahti hoon.unki khusi Natasha ke saath hai"
Elena:but how can you do it.please ek baar meri bath suno.you have to find out the feelings of dev for you.iam sure.he loves you.please believe me.
Sonakshi:But how i will find his mind.
Elena:please listen me carefully.i called one of my best friend Neel.He will help you.he Will act as your boy friend.
Sonakshi:but
Elena:please for me.it is the last way
Sonakshi:iam ready
Next morning
Sonakshi's house
Elena:he will reach here in five minutes.
Sonakshi:Iam really tensed.
That time some one knocked the door.
Elena:Neel...iam really happy that you reach on the time
She pointed her fingers on Sonakshi.she is my cousin who needs your help.
A handsome guy entered and smiled at Sonakshi.
Sonakshi:hi iam neel.i always like to help others.
Elena:he is a great lawyer by profession.he always help his friends.
Sonakshi:iam late.
Elena:i will drop you
In dev's house
Dev:it is 9am and what happened to miss bose.i have a important meeting.ma apna kyal rakiye
Dev reached the outside.at time a a white ferari stopped there.
Neel:shona,take care,i will miss you.
Sonakshi:i will miss you too(oh god!dev is here)
Dev was surprised seeing Sonakshi's act
Dev:miss bose,who is that?
Sonakshi:he is my boyfriend.he dropped me.iam sorry.i am late today.
Dev sits in his car.but he was disturbed.but why?it was a unknown reason.
In office
Teena:sir,the meeting is fixed at10am
Dev:Teena,please cancel the meeting.
Teena:what happened to you.
Dev:i have some important work today.iam leaving now.
In house
Sonakshi:i know it.he loves Natasha
At that time she saw dev
Sonakshi:vo is vakt kya hua
Ishwari:kya hua beta.tum itne jaldi
Dev:tabiyat teek nahi lagi
Ishwari:dr.ko phone karti hoon
Dev:ma.mai teek hoon
Sonakshi was feeling tensed.
Dev was rethinking the morning incident.
Sonakshi knocked the door.
Dev:miss bose
Sonakshi:aapka tabiyat.
Dev:iam feeling better.
Sonakshi was leaving
Dev:miss bose,neel kya kam karti hoon.
Sonakshi:professionally he is a lawyer
Dev:good
Sonakshi aunty ki dawai ka wakt hai.mai chalti hoon.
Sonakshi was feeling a happiness.


Will Sonakshi's plan will work...
Eagerly waiting for your replies.
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Part-2

Sonakshi called Elena for sharing her happiness.because of her she got a ray of hope.
In the living room a flower vase was broken from ishwari's hand.
Ishwari was worried for her son's health.she was walking in the room.Sonakshi saw it.
Sonakshi:kya hua aunty..ap itne tension mai
Ishwari:nutrition,mere haath se ek flower vase toot gayi.mujhe dev ki bahut chinta ho rahi hai.
Sonakshi:aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.shanti rakho ap.mai mr.dixit ko jaanti hoon.vo teek hai.ap apne kyal rakhiyega
Ishwari:mai Mandir ja rahi hoon,dev keliye.khar mei koi hona chahiye.mai vapas aane tak dev ki kyal rakhiye ka.
Sonakshi:(in mind:thanks a lot,aapne meri bath sun li):ji aunty
Khar ke saare log Mandir gayi..
After some time
Dev was searching for his mother.
Dev:ma,ap kahan hai
Sonakshi:Mr.dixit,aunty mandir chali gayi.khar mai hum dono hai.kuch chahiye ho tho.coffee pele gi aap
Dev:ya,sure
In kitchen,Sonakshi was making coffee
Dev:kahan mili ap apne mr perfect ko,kab,kahan,kaise(he questioned in one breath.)
Sonakshi was extremely happy after hearing his questions.but she hide it.
Sonakshi:Mr dixit.please take a breath.this is to much.itne sawal.ek saas mai.you are unbelievable.
Dev:i was just asking about him
Sonakshi:his name is Neel malhotra.he is a lawyer.but our meeting,the real credit goes to teena.her mobile app helped me.i met him through this app.
Dev:unbelievable miss bose.because you selected your life partner from a app.
Sonakshi:why not mr dixit.love is a beautiful emotion.but when where will happen it is unpredictable.
Dev:i don't know this illogical words.love and destiny i don't believe this words..but miss bose you are my friend.i cares for you.please take a decision after thinking.because miss bose it is your life.i had no right to comment on it.but you are my...
Sonakshi:what?i waited so many years for him.he is good person.gentleman.rich.handsome.
Dev:so,you only want this qualities for your mr perfect.i believe you have to find out his nature.his life.all glitters are not gold.
Sonakshi:i don't want to know it.because he is my present and he is my future.the coffee is ready.
She served the coffee.
Dev:how many times you meet that guy?
Sonakshi: only once.today night we will go for dinner.
Dev:miss bose this is childish.
Sonakshi:mr dixit you agreed to marry Natasha.she lived in abroad.you only know her present.i know she is a good girl.but all people are not mr perfect.
Dev:but in your case it is different.
In Mandir
Ishwari:pandit ji.mere bete ke naam mai aap pooja kar va dejiye.
Radha rani:(in mobile):hi Natasha beta
Natasha:kya hua aunty
Radha rani:mai ye kehne keliye call kiya ki dev ki tabiyat karab hai.
Natasha:oh god.i will reach there soon.
Ishwari:hai bhagvan mere bete keliye sahi jeevan saathi dijiye.uski bhagya mai aisa ek ladki hone chahiye.vo jo mere bete se apne jaan se phi syada pyar kare
At this time dev's home
Dev was busy with his work.he was talking with a client .Sonakshi was looking at him.
That time she noticed that a glass piece in the floor.he was walking towards it.
She called his name.but he didn't hear it.Sonakshi ran to there and placed her hand and dev sensed something and he cut the call.Sonakshi's hand was bleeding.
Dev:miss bose ye apne kya kiya.ap ki haath se khoon aa rahi hai.
Sonakshi:ap teek hai na.kuch hua nahi
Dev:what is this miss bose.ap apne bare mei socho
Sonakshi:aunty ji ap ko mere pas chodke gayi hai.ap ko kuch hua tho.mai apne ap ko kabhi maf nahi kar paunga.bilkul nahi
Dev cleaned her wound with water.
Sonakshi 'was suffering from pain.dev changed the topic.
Dev:miss bose today you are going for a date.am i right.
Sonakshi:ya.but it is simple dinner.
At that time Natasha reached there.
Dev:Natasha tum yahan
Natasha:are you alright.
Dev:iam fine.
Natasha:Sonakshi ye chot kaise lagi
Dev:broken glass piece floor pe tha .mujhe bachane keliye usne apne haath vahan rakhi
Natasha:thanks Sonakshi for saving dev.i was eagerly waiting to meet your boy friend.he is a lucky guy.
That time Sonakshi was angry.
Dev:today i saw him.mr neel malhotra.he is a good man.professionally he is a lawyer.
Natasha:good choice.when i will meet him
Sonakshi:today night we are going for a dinner.please join us
Natasha:nice idea
Dev:today..
Natasha:please...
Dev:ok
That time Ishwari and Radha rani reached there.
Natasha Ishwari ki paav cho liya
Ishwari:arey beta(that time She noticed the wound in Sonakshi's hand),arey nutrition ye chot kaise lagi
Dev:ma ye glass ke tukde se
Radha rani:tumhari dyan kahan hai...
Dev:vo mujhe bachane keliye kiya
Sonakshi was feeling protective with his presence.
Ishwari:beta.bhagvan hamesha tum he khush rakhe
Sonakshi:iam leaving aunty.
Natasha:we will meet tonight.
Sonakshi was happy after the incident...will her dreams get it's destination.

To be continued

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Edited by Sakkiyah - 7 years ago
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Thanks sonisweety,krystle and andy for your support.