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INDEX


Part 1 on page 1

part 2 on page 11

part 3 on page 19

part 4 on page 30

PART 5 ON PAGE 41

TEASER ON PAGE 50

PART 6 ON PAGE 61

PART 7 ON PAGE 75

part 8a on page 90

part 8b on page 95

part 9 on page 108

teaser on page 117

part 10 on page 119

part 11 on page 131

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Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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Character Sketch

Simran Khurana :- is the lady of the house. Being the eldest bahu, she shoulders many responsibilities, of which keeping the family together is her primary focus

Lata Sabharwal Seth


Raj Khurana :- He comes across as a strict disciplinarian, a believer and a staunch follower of traditions

Sanjeev Seth


Jeet khurana : grand father of Maan

Abhijit Lahiri


Savitri Khurana : Grand mother of Maan

Anju Mahendroo


Sonali Khurana : younger daughter in law of Savitri & jeet

Sonali Verma


Shekhar Khurana : younger son of Savitri & Jeet

Sandeep Mehta


Dev khurana : younger brother of maan & son of sonali & Shekhar



Naintara khurana - wife of dev



Vicky Khurana : younger son of raj & simran

Parth Samthaan

pari khurana : wife of vicky


Khushi Khurana : dev & tara daughter



Maan Singh Khurana :-  He is a reserved person with a tough exterior ...He appears to be arrogant and intimidating but has a soft heart.



Geet Handa 

She is educated, pretty and warm. Brought up in the midst of values and traditions, she lives a happy life...



Rano Handa : mother of geet & brij



Mohinder Handa : father of geet & brij 


Brij Handa

Behzaad Khan


Pammi Handa : wife of brij



Shivansh handa : son of brij & pammi



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Part 1

Ye kya babaji

Ye kyun kr rhe hai aap apne favorite bte ke sath

Kya bigada hai maine aapka

Jo shaadi jitni bdi sja de rhe hai mujhe

.

Kyun mein us din in sbke emotional drame mein fs gya

.

You know what

My full family is full of emotional fools

Ek ye sirf mere hi emotions nhi smjhte hai

Us din as usual

Am busy in work

And doing work in hall peacefully

That's only a last day of my peaceful life

.

Bte ye apna daftar ka kaam tu bnd kr

Hum sbko bhut jaroori baat krni hai

He busy in files and he take a look upward and little shocked to see all here...

Maan : what happen

.

Maa

Aap bolo na

Kya kuch huya hai

Maa : kuch ho hi toh nhi rha hai beta

.

My mom and her riddles

Babaji hi bachaye

.

maa hona kya hai

Aur please aap sb phle baith jaaiye

One by one all try to adjust, and fighting on this silly thing too.. I roll my eyes try to concentrate, but how I can concentrate when my crazy family not going to leave me soon...

.

Maa aap kuch kh rhi thi

.

Ye kya bolengi teri maa

Aur kis muh se bole

.

Daada ji aap toh please aurto ki tarah baat mt kro

.

Oye tere matlab kya h khehna ka maan

.

Maan : nothing chachi

.

Aap please batayenge huya kya hai

.

Daadi aap hi bta do

Daadi : tune hume kissi ko mooh dikhane ke layak nhi choda maan

.

Maine mooh dikhane ke layak nhi choda

Ye line toh ladkiyo ke liye hoti hai na

Before I understand her meaning

Daadi : tu sun bhi raha hai humari baat

Maan : ji daadi

Daadi maine asa kiya kya hai

Daadi : kuch sikh aapne chote bhaiyo se

Ek ka beta ho bhi gya

Aur dusre ka hone wala hai

Maan : what

Daadi how can Vicky get pregnant

One slap come on maan head, his mother slapped him...

Daada : Raj ab iske hath pile krdo tum log

Iski maante rhe na tum dono

Toh ye kuwara hi rh jaayenga

Aur hum bin pota-poti ka mooh dekhe swarg sidhar jaayenge

Raj : bauji asa na boliye

What daadu said yellow hand?

Wo toh ladkiyo ke hote hai na

Wo line bhi mujhpe chipka di

And next thing daadu tell about grand child

Jo dev aur tara ke hai

Fir wo kya hai

I have to clear this

Maan : daadu

I want to clear something

Dev aur tara ki jo beti hai khushi

Wo rishte me aapki kya lagati hai

Daada : poti

Maan : granddaughter am right

Daadu : yes

Maan : then why you saying

Hum bin pota-poti ka mooh dekhe swarg sidhar jaayenge

Aur ab toh mini Vicky aur little pari bhi aane wale hai

Daadu : bahu isse ek aur maar

Meri taraf se

Maa : ji

Maan : mom please

.

Please you all stop your drama

And tell me clearly what you all want

All screamed together shaadi

Maa : dekh maan ab bhut ho gya hai

Tu HA kr

Nhi toh wrna

Tujhe jabar dasti mandap mein bitha denge hum is baar

Maan : mom

Am not interested

Chachi : where u not interested

Don't tell us

You are gay

Maan : nooo

Raj : then what your problem

Maa : beta aaj tak teri maa ne tujhe kuch nhi maanga

Tu itna sa nhi kr sakta humare liye

Dekh tujhe koi pasand hai toh bol de

Garib ghar ki bhi hongi

Toh hume koi problem nhi hai

Hum dehj ke khilaf hai beta

Daadi : koi badsurat pasand aa gyi hai

Toh koi baat nhi

Hum teri khushi ke liye usse chand pe daang smjhke apna lenge

Chachi : bs is baar tujhe shaadi krni hongi

Byi shaadi ka time chl rha hai

Aur ab humare ghar mein bs teri shaadi bchi hai

Wo toh is baar honi bnti hai

Maan : chacha apne kya mon vrat liya hai

Aap bhi kuch bol lo

Chacha : beta tujhe meri kasam

Tu HA krde bs

Mein tujhe ab aur Single khush nhi dekh sakta

Chachi : kya kaha aapne

Matlab kya tha aapka

Zara mujhe smjhayenge

Chacha : I want to say only this

Shaadi krke tub hi beta

Double khush ho jaa

Chachi : that's better

Maa : maan

Bol na beta

Maan : ok mom

Aap ladki dundiye

Am ready

Daadi : chlo sb apne -apne room mein jaayo

Humane HA bulwa li maans e

Aaj ka program khatam

Hume kal se ladki dundne ka kaam shuru krna hai

 .

Finally today my full family wins over me

Is baar my all family played very well?

Phle single - single krke aate the

Is baar sb tut pde mujhpe

Lo maan singh khurana

Tumhare azadi ke din bs khatam hone wale hai

.

.

Only one week

He fixed my marriage with someone and today is my marriage day...

Yaha tk ki mujhe ladki se nhi milwaya

Kaun hai

Kaisi hai

And when I ask about her

My family says tit for that

Maine UN sbko itna wait krwaya hai

Toh this time my turn come to wait to see her my would be

.

Aur ye kya sidha shaadi

.

Tu gya maan beta

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Are kudiye

Thoda has bhi lo

She stretches the lip little then makes again grumpy face...

Geet ye kya hai

Geet : mom aap sb toh mujhse baat hi mt kro

.

Asa kya kr diya hai mom ne geet

Geet ; bhabhi

Meri shaadi kr rhe ho

Aur puch rhe ho kya kr diya hai

Bhabhi : tujhe kya budape mein jaake shaadi krni hai kya

Geet : am just 24 bhabhi

Bchi hu mein abhi

Bhabhi : tu ab bachi nhi rhi hai

Bache pada krne ke umar ho gyi hai ab teri

Geet : hurr

Mom : geet just stop your melodrama

Tu post graduation krna chahti thi

Hum maan gye

Kaam mein experience chahti thi

Wo sb ho gya

Now your turn come to fulfill your promise

Now put the smile on your face

I don't want anyone says bad about my daughter

.

Pammi beta makes her ready fast

Baraat bs aati hongi

Precap : Marriage 


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Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats on season 2! Superb cs! Where are the Handas n Maaneet cs???? Wonderful update! superbly written! Maan n Geet both dnt want 2 get married! they r forced 2 get married! they crib that nw their freedom is gone! Maan has an answer 2 everything they tell him! Maaneet getting married! update soon Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on season 2! Superb cs! Where are the Handas n Maaneet cs???? Wonderful update! superbly written! Maan n Geet both dnt want 2 get married! they r forced 2 get married! they crib that nw their freedom is gone! Maan has an answer 2 everything they tell him! Maaneet getting married! update soon


now full CS completed 


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CONGRATS FOR SEASON 2
VERY INTERESTING START

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Originally posted by: aparna3011

CONGRATS FOR SEASON 2

VERY INTERESTING START


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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome start...maan family is to good 👏 can't wait to see there marriage after scenes  so update soon