Ishra os : My daughter is alive

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Hi friends😊. I'm back with an OS this time. I've written haven't written an OS after my first ever OS. But this idea came into my mind and I thought of writing it. I don't know whether it's good or not. Please do read and comment. Your comments are very valuable for me. 😊


Ishra os : My daughter is alive



Ishitha was standing numb listening to all Raman's harsh words. She couldn't believe the fact that her daughter was no more in this world. She didn't believe it at all. After Raman was almost finish with his harsh outblow Ishitha shouted "Shut up...Just Shut up. Nooo" she cried collapsing on the floor. "No no no my daughter is alive I know it. My ruhi is alive nothing happened to her"

All were shocked to see Ishitha like this shouting at the top of her voice. They knew she couldn't bear loosing ruhi but this behaviour was so shocking for them. She banged her head around on the walls crying and pleading to bring her daughter back to her.

"You killed her. Now you want her back" spat Raman on her.

"Just shut up. I told you to shut up" shouted Ishitha to which Raman got shocked seeing her.

"I will go find her myself. I'm her mother. Appa, Amma I know my daughter is alive. I will bring her from wherever she is. She must be waiting for me Amma. Mummy ji don't worry. I'll bring her. I'm going now"

Raman was angry at Ishitha but he couldn't bear to see his wife in this state blabbering as a mad woman.

"Ishu listen to me. Ishu look at appa" said Mr. Iyer cupping her face.

"Appa now I don't have time to listen. I'll listen later. My daughter is waiting for me. Don't know whether she's in pain. I must go to her"

"Ishu listen..."

"No no I don't have time. My daughter needs me. My daughter needs me" Ishitha kept on blabbering when Amma slapped her to bring her to her senses.

"I need to go. I need to go" and Ishitha ran out of the hospital. She was running on the road and was about to get hit by a car when Raman dragged her to himself and shouted "What the hell is wrong with you?"

"You stay away from me. Don't even touch me. She's my daughter I'm going to her. She needs me now" shouted Ishitha.

"She's dead" shouted Raman.

Ishitha slapped him hard on his cheek and shouted "She's my daughter. I know she's alive. You stay away from this"

And she ran on the road. She soon reached the place where the car fell off the cliff. She was running towards it when the family came running behind her and held her not letting her go to the direction.

"Leave me. My daughter is waiting for me. I have to go to her. Just leave me"

"Ishitha ji just calm down. If you want I'll take you to the place. You'll see the car is empty. They're no more" said ACP abhishek.

"Take me there. Now. Just now"

"Ok"

"But abhishek what's the point?" asked appa.

"Uncle ji she'll come to know the truth. I'll take her"

"Yeah I know the truth. My daughter is alive. I know the truth" Ishitha was blabbering making the family cry their hearts out unable to see Ishitha like this.

Abhishek took Ishitha to the place and seeing the car Ishitha said "I told you nuh. My daughter is alive. That niddhi must have taken her away from here. I need to go find her. I'll find her everywhere and get my daughter."

"Ishitha ji just get in the fact. Ruhi is no more. You won't get her how much ever you try"

"Shut up. I'll find her" and she ran from there. She started walking everywhere crying like a mad woman trying to find ruhi. She walked and walked and walked but didn't give up.

She tried calling various people to get to know something about ruhi but didn't get anything. She was feeling very weak as her wound was very fresh and it was paining a lot and she felt herself having burning fever but she didn't give up.

After a lot of failed attempts to take her back home by the family Raman came and dragged her and locked her in their room.

"Open this door. My daughter is waiting for me. Just open this door" shouted Ishitha banging loudly on the door.

She called for all to open the door but no one opened the door. She was so exhausted but she felt that her baby ruhi is waiting somewhere for her to be saved.

She looked all around the room and having no other option she went to the window and tied her sarees as a rope and somehow went down with great difficulty.

Simmi who came to the room at the same time shouted for the others but Ishitha was too quick and she soon started driving her car out of their apartment premises.

"Romi you go behind her. She's really weak" said a worried Mr.Bhalla.

"No need to go. If she wants to behave this mad let her be. No one will go behind her" roared Raman and stormed inside the house.

The whole family was so tensed about Ishitha but she didn't return home till very late. Ishitha was travelling all around Delhi like a mad woman crying for her rooh.

All called her without telling Raman but she didn't answer to any of them. Finally when she couldn't find ruhi anywhere she stopped her car and cried her heart out.

"Where are you my rooh bachcha? Please come to your ishimaa. Please come my bachcha."

And her phone starts ringing. It was Mihika's call. She answered it. "Akka where are you? What are you doing akka? Please come home akka"

"I lost my home Mihika. My ruhi is not with me who gave everything to me. I checked everywhere. But she's not there. Where did that woman take my child mihika. I can't live without her. I want her. She must be waiting for me. But I'm a bad mother I can't find her" cried Ishitha.

"Akka please understand the truth. Ruhi is no more. Akka please come"

"Why can't all of you people understand that my child is alive she's there. I'm her mother I know about her. I'll find her somehow. Stop calling me" shouted Ishitha and cut the call.

She cried her heart out shouting at her helplessness and loneliness. "No no. I won't cry. I find my rooh. I'm coming my bachcha. I'm coming to you very soon"

Ishitha soon went to Niddhi's office to check and get some information from there. Soon she entered her cabin secretly when she heard her secretary talking to someone through phone as madam. She felt suspicious and she went near her and heard her saying "Yeah madam I'll come there soon with a doctor. Don't worry I won't tell anyone"

Ishitha at once knew that this is the way to go to her daughter and she soon thought that she will follow this girl but got happy when she wrote down the place in a paper.

Ishitha soon switched off the light and hid behind a table and the Secretary went to see what happened. Ishitha took the paper and got to know that Niddhi might be staying in a small place near the jungle. She soon got the address and went from there. She called abhiskek to come with his team and advised him that this time nothing should go wrong.

Ishitha soon reached the place and saw that it was a small hut near the jungle. As soon as she entered there she heard her little rooh crying in pain.

"Ishimaa save me. Ishimaa save me" cried little ruhi.

Ishitha soon ran there but didn't enter as she knew she has to be careful. The door was slightly open and Ishitha saw Niddhi beating little ruhi in anger. Ishitha couldn't wait more she ran inside pushed Niddhi with a great force and shouted "How dare you beat my daughter?"

Ruhi who was frightened hugged Ishitha immediately and cried vigorously. Niddhi who fell down due to Ishitha ran to them but Ishitha slapped her hard and shouted "Don't you even think to come near my daughter. I will kill you here itself. I can do anything for my daughter"

"Really you only gave her to me to take your other daughter. Now what?" said Niddhi smirking.

Ruhi heard this and left the hold in Ishitha and moved back. Ishitha turned back to see Ruhi and held her tight. "Rooh I will explain everything to you. Now we will go from here" and was about to go when Niddhi shouted "Don't think I will let you go like that Ishitha"

"Yes Ishitha ji how can you go without seeing her getting arrested" smirked abhiskek.

"Pol...poli...police...from where did police come?" asked Niddhi tensed.

"Don't think I'm a fool Niddhi. I would learn a lesson from my mistake. But this should be done so I called them" said Ishitha calmly and then shouted "And I will make sure you will rot in jail for torturing my daughter. I will ruin you. Do you get that? You played with a mother's heart which is very bad. Now wait and watch what will happen to you" and Ishitha went away taking ruhi with her.

Ishitha first took ruhi to a hospital and treated her wounds while ruhi was observing Ishitha thoroughly. After the first aid was done Ishitha said "Ruhi come let's go home"

"Why did you give me to her? You don't love me right? You love the new baby now right?"

"Rooh..."

"Don't lie to me. I saw everything"

"Rooh I know I did wrong but please believe me for once. I always loved you and will further do. You're my life ruhi. But I hope you would understand me. In life we're forced to take certain decisions which we don't want to take. This decision is such a one. I had to save your sister's life. She was so small. She needed doctors attention but niddhi took her away. If we kept her more she would have died rooh. We thought that we'll save you somehow that's why I called ACP uncle there also. But I couldn't save you. I know I'm not a good mother rooh. But I love you a lot. That's why eventhough all said you're no more I felt that my rooh is living somewhere waiting for me. And I was right. When I came you were shouting calling for me. I'm really sorry my bachcha. I agree I'm a bad mother. But please give me a chance. But yes if you and papa don't want me for your happiness I will go away from your lives. But remember always ishimaa always loves rooh. Now let's go"

And then they went to their home. All got shocked to see Ishitha bringing ruhi back. All hugged her crying happily. Raman kissed all over her face crying his heart out. Ishitha watched everything and then turned to go away thinking about Raman's words. But before she could leave the door ruhi ran to her and hugged her tight.

"Ishimaa will you again go leaving me?"

Ishitha turned around and hugged ruhi close to her heart.

"No my bachcha. I won't go anywhere. I won't go anywhere leaving my ruhi listening to anyone. I'll be with you always. I love you"

That day Ishitha slept with ruhi and didn't go to their room. A whole week went. Ishitha didn't talk to Raman at all. Raman was now regretting his words to her and wanted to talk to her but she gave him a complete silent treatment. She never came to their room when he was there. And too knew well that this time it was not that easy to mend the gap between them as he has crossed the limit to a great extent.

One day Raman was about to take breakfast but lied that he has some work and he left. As Ishitha didn't come to the dining table these days when Raman was there she came once he left. Soon after Ishitha came Raman came back and sat beside Ishitha and said he was hungry. Ishitha stood from her place and went away to ruhi's room. Raman felt hurt but knew that he was at fault so he went to the room and locked the door.

"What are you doing here?" shouted Ishitha.

"I need to talk to you"

"I don't have anything to talk to you"

"I have to talk. You're my wife and I have the right to talk to you"

"Really? Wife?. Don't you remember you only broke all those relations. Now we're just parents to our children. You please go. I need to go to the baby. Mummy ji is handling her now. She must be tired"

"Ishitha listen to me. Please try to understand me. You know about me well right. You know well that I didn't mean any of those words. I told them in anger but never ever meant those. You know how much I love you. Ishitha this distance is so suffocating yaar. Please forgive me" said Raman crying.


Ishitha was crying a lot by now. "Am I really a bad omen Raman. Everyone use to say that before. But I felt it that day when you told it to me. And baanj. Yes I really felt that I'm baanj after you said it. Having a baby of my blood doesn't prove that I'm not a baanj. In fact you proved me a baanj. Just leave me alone Raman. You'll be happy. I can't break ruhi's promise. That's why I'm here. Otherwise as you said i would have gone away"

"No Ishitha. Please understand me yaar. Please" said Raman hugging Ishitha. "You can't do this to me. We love each other. You can't forget our love due to my stupid words. Can you?" asked Raman cupping her face.

"I don't know" broke down Ishitha. "I don't know"

"Ishitha I'm sorry please forgive me. Now it's enough. You're mine and I'm yours."

Ishitha hugged him back tightly and said "I love you Raman"

"I love you too Ishitha. I will try my best not to do mistakes but please don't leave me ever"

"I won't Raman. I can never leave you. I behaved rudely with you too. I'm sorry for that. But I had no choice. I had to bring my daughter back nuh"

"Our daughter"

"Yes our daughter"

"I love you a lot Ishitha."

"I love you too Raman"



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful superb amazing os
Vry emotion
Ys ramans zubaan is very dangerous he spit the venom on ishita in anger
Ishita is behaving like mad women-- she loves her rooh vry mch
Nidhi deserves hard punishment - sick lady
Ishita brings rooh bck
RamAn regert his words ishita gving him punishment by ignoring him

Kaash aisa hi hua hota yhm mein 👏
Overall it is beautiful written os
Edited by sweet.Aman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nicely written
ishita was in soo much pain
n raman was also in pain seeing her
but ishita was sure tht ruhi is alive
n she found her
her explanation to ruhi was nice
n raman waa soo happy on finding ruhi
ishita cold behaviour justified
but atlast thy patch up
lovely tht was
Edited by anisha960 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kaash story esa hua hota to maja aa jata...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is too good pooh I jst loved it d heart to heart connection between rooh and ishita made her beleive dat rooh is alive and is waiting for her some where and she was acting like a maniac to find rooh and she used her brain and her luck also favoured her to find rooh and she found her and den ishru' heart to heart talk is really awesome and wen ishita is abt to leave Ruhi stopped her
And den Ishra condition ishita dos right by giving silent treatment to Raman so dat he himself will realize his mistakes and repent his mistake and dat talk between them and confrontation is much needed and I am happy dat she asked him wat bothered her d more and now they are together jst loved it pooh
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kaash story mein aaisa hua hota
Anyways awesome os
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Emotional story
Plz continue soon Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing awesome superb fabulous.
Wish something like this happen in show.
I can't stop imagining myself.
Thanks for beautiful amazing update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really wish
Dis cud have happened in da show..

No need of leap really..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update but climax u slove easyly
Raman KO thoda pareshan karthe hai tho buhuth achha hoga

Edited by madhavimanish32 - 9 years ago

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