akdha ff:Found You(Thread-3) Chapter -25(Thread -3 closed)

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So now we have reached found you third thread guys
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Chapter-19(a & b ) on pg 1

chapter-20 on pg 39

chapter-21 on pg 46

Chapter-22 on pg 78

Chapter -23 on Pg 97

Chapter -24 on pg 122

Chapter-25(Tzr) on pg 130

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Sorry for delay guys actually due to pc problem i was not able to type the ending for last two days but finally update is complete but yesterday due to power cut again i wasnt able to update
i hope u will all forgive ur this friend and now after long lecture here is the update

Recap-After 5 minutes the room gate gets open and light goes off
Assuming it trisha
jodha:What happened to light thank god , u came on time trisha
Now plz can make me wear this pendent;said while sitting on the bed
Jodha:Be careful its really dark here
Taking the pendent the person puts the pendent around Jo's neck
jodha:Why r u so quite Trisha
something happen did u and roby fight
Still no response suddenly the cold hands touch her bare neck which make her realise its not trisha
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Chapter-19(a)
Realising that its not trisha but somebody else jodha immediately distance herself from the person,before she could shout or scream on the person the light went on and the person is none other than our jalal who was looking dashing in the black three piece suit along with red tie
where seeing jalal jodha took a sign of relief there seeing jodha in that sexy red dress jalal just got lost in jodha
Seeing jalals constant glare on herself jodha firstly gets confuse but realising its dress ,jodha immediately turns her back while trying to cover her almost naked shoulder but in this attempt she forgets about her half naked back ,seeing jodhas beautiful back jalal starts smirking
Jalal:Ur back is really beautiful jo;said in husky voice
Hearing his compliment jodha firstly gets shy and seeing jodhas blushing face jalal comes near her now the distance between jalal and jodha is of few inches jalals hot breath is landing on jodhas bare back which results in sending shivers in jodhas span
Jalal:I have bought a gift for u;said in his sexy voice
Jodha:A gift!;asked while turning towards jalal with a excited eyes
Jalal:Yup
jodha:My Christmas gift?
Jalal:May be
but for gift u have to turn ur back again
Hearing this jodha gave him confuse look
Jalal:U trust me
right?
on this jodha just nod
Jalal:Then do what i say
On this jodha turns her back again towards jalal
With this jalal take out the bag from his back which he was hiding and slowly slowly makes jodha wears the gift
Realising that jalal is trying to make her wear something jodha try to open her eyes but stops in her tracks hearing jalals command
jalal:Plz dont open ur eyes now firstly let me do what i want to do then u can see ur gift
hearing this jodha just smile to assure him
Jalal:Done now u can open ur eyes
with this jodha opens her eyes
Jalal:Now see ur replica in mirror
On this jodha moved towards mirror to get a glace of herself and jalals gift
Seeing herself in mirror jodha first gets shock then become happy
Jodha:Thanks a lot jalal for this shoulder cover jacket
but how u know that i need it
Jalal:Bcoz i know u
u dont like to wear this type of dresses and feels uncomfortable with people gazes on u
And seeing u in this dress i dont think boys can stop themselves ogling on u
so to feel u comfortable and relax i bought this for u
jodha:But how do u know i am wearing this dress
On this
jalal:From roby and i dont think i need to tell u from where he gets to know about it;said while giving her his trademark smirk
Jodha:Ohk
Thanks for thinking about me this much jalal
Jalal:Thanks accepted but plz dont start ur thanks song
On this both starts laughing
Jalal:Between jodha there is still a problem
Jodha:What!
Jalal:I havent tie the knots of this jacket
If u want i can tie it but if u have problem u can tie urself
hearing this jodha too realises that its knot is not yet tied
Jodha tries to tie it but every time gets fail
jalal:Like i said i can help u tieing it
On this jodha just nod and withdraws her hand from back to front
The moment jalals hand touch her bare back and his breath land on her neck the shiver again chilled down in her spane due to which jodha clutch her gown tightly
Seeing his effect on jodha a smirk play on jalals lips while putting first knot in the second one jalal deliberately tie them tightly to get back jodha from her shyness section
Jalal:Done;said in his husky voice near her ears
Hearing this jodha opens her eyes,the moment she opens her eyes,her eyed meet his tempting eyes through mirror
Jodha:Th...Thank u;said while stealing her eyes from his eyesight
Jalal:Shall we
everybody must be waiting for us
As u know no party can start without me;said while winking towards jodha making her smile
The moment they turn to go for the venue stops in between as boths bestz were standing in the doorway with a smirking and naughty looks
Trisha:U Both were leaving without us
Thats not fair
i didnt expected this from u jo;said with fake disappointment
Jodha:Sorry trisha
wohh actually we were just
Cutting her in between
Trisha: Chill yaar i was just pulling ur leg between who bought this shoulder cover for u
Jodha:Jalal;replied while looking towards jalal
Trisha: Ohhh
Jodha:How is it looking
Trisha:U r looking perfect and ya of course gorgeous baby;said winking towards jodha
Roby:Now can we go guys
all must be waiting for us
Jalal:Yup lets go Buddy
With this the four headed towards party hall
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At party hall
All r waiting for the one who has organized the party and finally there waits gets over when they hear footsteps of most handsome boy along with him the most beautiful girl which is none other than our jalal and jodha who were looking perfect while descending the stairs,while with them of course there is another beautiful couple that's our Roby and Trisha
Seeing jalal and jodha all just can't stop themselves staring at them where jalal was stealing girls heart there jodha was stealing boys heart but in whole crowd only one was burning in jealousy that was shalini
The moment both jodha and jalal stepped out of last stair all surrounds them for wishing merry Christmas where girls was wishing jalal by hugging him there boys was wishing jodha with handshake as we all know guys jodha don't like hugging types of things but seeing girls hugging jalal jodha heart prick but poor girl could not understands her own feelings
With this jodha jalal Trisha Roby all mingled in the party but whole time jodha and jalal were stealing glaces with each other jodha was so lost in jalal that didnt realise a person was coming from front and in her this absent mind ness she bumps into the person before she could say sorry
Shalini:Be careful jodha
Dont get so engrossed in jalal that forgets other people exist too
On this jodha just nod with forceful smile
Jodha:Merry Christmas shalini;wished while forwarding her hand
On this
Shalini:U too jodha
But i am shock u see i mean how come jodha attends a party the very girl who hasn't attended a single party in the whole semester
But ya now the priorities got change
On this jodha gave her i don't understand look
Shalini:Oh so now u want to hear it from my mouth
As ur wish
I know u r attending this party for jalal
Jodha:yes u r right
Wohh actually
Cutting her in between
Shalini:Wohh actually if u didn't came it will hurt jalal and you cant let that happen not bcoz of ur friendship with him but for ur own luxury and special attention which u r getting bcoz of jalal ;said with her wicked smile
Hearing this jodha just want to say something in her defence but could not she feels like she suddenly lost her voice but another voice comes as her answer and that voice is of our Trisha
Trisha: U r right jo is getting special attention from Everyone but that is not due to jalal but bcoz of her own image and nature and about her attending this party that is bcoZ its her fav festival so she is attending it
On this before Trisha could answer back
Trisha:And if have still useless doubts and stories in ur mind then it's ur problem
We don't own u any further explanation
Lets go jo
With this both girls left the speechless and fuming shalini behind
Before Trisha could take a class of her bestie our hero comes on time Roby:Whats up girls
Jalal:So r u enjoying the party; asked while looking towards jodha
On this
Jodha:Ya jalal;said with a fake smile
Trisha:Yup were until that shalini didnt landed and spoiled our mood with her useless talks
Roby: means What she said
With this Trisha told the boys the whole convo
Hearing all this jalal clutch his fest
Jalal:That's all my mistake i should not allow her here
Jodha:No jalal that will rude and unfair to shalini
Jalal:And what she did was not right
On this jodha remains silent
Jalal:But what u did was also not but right
On this jodha gave him a confuse look
Jalal:U should reply back jo
otherwise all will take u for granted
U can see how shalini accuse u and u just remain silent and if i am not wrong u have start thinking on her words too and starts accusing urself
Am i right?
On this jodha lowers her eyes
Jalal:U have to start replying back jo
Promise me from now on u will stand for urself;said while forwarding his hand for promise
Trisha: Come on jo
put ur hand and give jalal this promise
We all r waiting for ur yes
Roby:Yes jodha come on
With this jodha puts her hand on jalals hand and
Jodha:I promise;said with a promising smile
with this both share an eyelock which gets break with the unexpected voice
Aryan(ClG boy and party host):So boys and girls
I hope u all r enjoying the party and now is the time of Christmas cake cutting so all plz gather around the Christmas cake
With this all gathered around cake Aryan:of course the cake will cut by one only and that only person is the thrower of this party,the most dashing and sexy boy of our CLG Jalal
With this jalal comes in the centre of the cake and takes the knife
Jalal:I will cut this cake with jodha for whom Christmas is very special
On this jodha firstly gets shock to hear this unexpected demand cum request from jalal but after trishas push she stands beside jalal
With this both jalal and jodha cuts the cake and jalal makes jodha eat the cake then jodha tries to make jalal eat but trisha snatches the piece from her hand and put in her own mouth,on this jalal gave deadly glares to Trisha which she ignores very Cooley
After this the cake serve to everyone
Jodha signalled jalal who was busy in usual work chit chatting and seeking attention from everyone
Jalal:Yup u need something
Jodha:I want to ask u something
Jalal:Ya go ahead
Jodha:Aryan said in his announcement that it's u who has thrown this party if I am not wrong u told me that all has planned this party
Does it mean u lie to me;asked in a little hurtful look
Before jalal could reply of this
Aryan:So guys to make the party interesting lets play a game
So r u ready guys
On this all cheered and screams with excitement
Aryan:So rules r like this
One by one everyone will come here and take out a chit from this first bowl and go back to his or her place and when all picks up there chits then the real game will start
Trisha:What is in those chits
Aryan:Its numbers which will help us which one will come first then second then so on
When i will announce the number that person will come on the stage and will pick up the chit from second bowl and what ever task will written in it she or he has to do it
I guess all r clear
So can we start
All screams:Yesss
Aryan:So number 7
With this comes Trisha
Aryan:Oh so u r the first one
So pick up ur chit and tell us ur task Picking up and unfolding the chit
Trisha: I have to dance with number 17
Aryan:So number 17 come on stage and join trisha in dance
With this both trisha and the girl complete her task
Aryan:Next is number 10
With this Shalini comes and picks up her chit and read her task
Shalini:I have to serve all with drinks for next 1 hour
What the hell i wont do it
Aryan:Sorry miss shalini but u cant back off
It's against rules
Go and complete ur task
Trisha: Come on shalini u can do it
Right guys
All:Right
With this shalini starts serving others
Jodha:That was really mean of u jalal

Jalal:But i did;asked while pretending as an innocent
Jodha:I know u have purposely choose this task for shalini
Jalal:Me!
How can i do it jo
Jodha:I have seen from my own eyes when shalini was picking her number chit u purposely bumps into her and when her chit got fall u changed it
Jalal:K k as u know all thing i accept i did it
Jodha:But why
Jalal:Bcoz this was second time she hurted u and she deserves it jo
Hearing this jodha could not stop herself from admiring jalal
Jalal:Dont ogle me like that jo i know i am too handsome but still what others will think
Hearing this remark jodha realizes that she was really got lost in jalal and her checks turned into red realising that she was again caught by jalal seeing this jalal gave jodha his sexy smirk
Aryan:Next is number 25
With this roby comes on stage and picks up his chit and read his task
Roby:I have to do 25 pushups
Only 25 that's too easy ;said with amusement tone
After a lot of struggle roby finally completes his task
Aryan:Now number 1
With this jalal comes on the stage not before winking towards jodha and picks up his chit
Jalal:My task is i have to sing a song for some special one
Aryan:So r u ready
Jalal:Yup can i do it with my guitar
Aryan:Ya of course it will be more entertaining
On this jalal just smile and said:According to my task i have to dedicate this song to a special person i am dedicating it to a special person who is present here;said while firstly looking towards jodha making her shy then diverting his gaze on someone else Jodha:Whom jalal is looking at suddenly;said while turning her gaze where jalal is seeing and there she sees a girl in navy blue cocktail Dress but due to darkness jodha could not able to see her face
Jodha:Oh so its jalal gf and he is singing this song for her i thought he is singing for me
But why i am feeling bad of course he should sing for her as she is his gf;she thought
But her chains of thought gets broken hearing jalals song
Don't worry guys it doesn't end here scroll down below

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Chapter-19(b)
With this jalal starts singing along with his guitar
Bholi Si Surat, Aankhon Mein Masti
Innocent Face, Mischief in Eyes
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Are Bholi Si Surat
Innocent Face
Aankhon Mein Masti, Door Khadi Sharmaaye
Mischief in Eyes, Blushing from Afar
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Sing the lines while looking towards jodha making her blush
Ek Jhalak Dikhlaye Kabhi, Kabhi Aanchal Mein Chupjaye
Sometimes She shows Her glimpse for a moment and then She hides behind the Veil
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Meri Nazar Se Tum Dekho To Yaar Nazar Woh Aaye
If You See from My Eyes, She seems like my Lover
Bholi Si Surat
Innocent Face
Aankhon Mein Masti, Door Khadi Sharmaaye
Mischief in Eyes, Blushing from Afar
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Ek Jhalak Dikhlaye Kabhi, Kabhi Aanchal Mein Chupjaye
Sometimes She shows Her glimpse for a moment and then She hides behind the Veil
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Meri Nazar Se Tum Dekho To Yaar Nazar Woh Aaye
If You See from My Eyes, She seems like my Lover
Bholi Si Surat
Innocent Face
Aankhon Mein Masti, Door Khadi Sharmaaye
Mischief in Eyes, Blushing from Afar
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Sings this lines while looking at jodha who was roaming in the hall in shyness while stealing glaces with jalal
Ladki Nahin Hai, Woh Jaadu Hai, Aur Kaha Kya Jaye
She's no ordinary Girl, She's just Magic that's all I can say
Raat Ko Mere Khawaab Mein Aayee, Woh Zulfe Bikhrayee
At Night She comes into my Dream with her Hair flowing wide
Aankh Khuli To Dil Chaha Phir Neend Mujhe Aajaye
As soon as my Eyes opened, I yearned to go back to Sleep
Bin Dekhe Yeh Haal Hua, Dekhu To Kya Ho Jaaye
Without seeing Her this is My Case, God knows what happens when I see Her
Bholi Si Surat
Innocent Face
Aankhon Mein Masti, Door Khadi Sharmaaye
Mischief in Eyes, Blushing from Afar
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Ek Jhalak Dikhlaye Kabhi, Kabhi Aanchal Mein Chupjaye
Sometimes She shows Her glimpse for a moment and then She hides behind the Veil
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Meri Nazar Se Tum Dekho To Yaar Nazar Woh Aaye
If You See from My Eyes, She seems like my Lover
Bholi Si Surat
Innocent Face
Aankhon Mein Masti
Mischief in Eyes
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Sings this lines while setting out of the stage and stealing glances with jodha and the girl in blue whose face jodha still wasnt able to see
Saawan Ka Pehla Baadal, Uska Kaajal Banjaaye
The first cloud of the Monsoon is just like the Kohl in her Eyes
Mauj Uthe Saagar Mein Jaise Aise Kadam Uthaye
She walks just like the Waves dancing in the Sea
Rab Ne Jaane Kis Mitti Se Uske Ang Banaye
What fabulous Clay has God used to create her
Chamm Se Kaash Kahin Se Mere Saamne Wo Aajaaye
I wish that She appears in front of Me, Just out of Nowhere
Bholi Si Surat
Innocent Face
Aankhon Mein Masti, Door Khadi Sharmaaye
Mischief in Eyes, Blushing from Afar
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Ek Jhalak Dikhlaye Kabhi, Kabhi Aanchal Mein Chupjaye
Sometimes She shows Her glimpse for a moment and then She hides behind the Veil
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Meri Nazar Se Tum Dekho To Yaar Nazar Woh Aaye
If You See from My Eyes, She seems like my Lover
Bholi Si Surat
Innocent Face
Aankhon Mein Masti, Door Khadi Sharmaaye
Mischief in Eyes, Blushing from Afar
Aye Hai
Oh My!
Aye Hai
Oh My!
With this jalal completes his song while standing in front of jodha but looking at the girl in navy blue dress who was standing in the middle of the stairs
all screams and clapps on his outstanding performance

Seeing jalals gaze on the girl a long tear escape from jodhas beautiful eyes and she immediately leave the hall seeing this a smirk play on jalals and he too leave the hall following jodha but not before signalling aryan of continuing the party
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Seeing jalals gazes on some other girl jodha could not take it anymore and left towards her only peace seeking place and that is terrace
Jodha:Why why why kanha why i am feeling pain in my heart seeing jalals attention on some other girl not actually some other girl its his gf he will look at her and ya of course he will sing for her but why it is hurting me this much;murmuring this jodha continue her walking towards terrace but stop in her tracks hearing the voice of the one whom she dont want to face that time and that person is our jalal
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Seeing jodha going on terrace a winning smile play on jalals lips and he slowly and steadily follows her and call her the moment she steps her first step at the terrace stairs
Jalal:Jo wait
Weeping her Long tear jodha tires to control her emotions and tries to acts like normal
Jodha:Y..a jalal
Jalal:Does my performance that mad that u left the place;said in humorous tone
Jodha:N.No its was really mind blowing i didnt knew u can sing this good and also play guitar
Jalal:Really!;asked pretending like he is not believing her words
Jodha:Yup really
haven't u heard applauses which u received from everyone
U were great
Jalal:Thanks for liking and appreciating it but why i am feeling that u r not happy
Jodha:No not at all
Actually i am a little bit tired u know firstly journey then getting ready for it then party
all was really tiring its just that
Jalal:Oh i see
here i was thinking of seeking ur help in proposing my gf but seems like u cant help me;said with fake disappointment
Jodha:No i can help u
tell me what help u need;said with fake excitement
Jalal:Its k i will manage
Jodha:No i will help u
remember i promised u i will help u
and i never break my promise
Jalal:How sweet of u jo
Jodha:Ur gf was that girl in navy blue dress na
Jalal:How do u know that;pretends as gets shock
Jodha:Trisha told me that she is wearing navy blue dress and i observe that u were looking at her during ur performance
On this jalal just nod with a smile
Jodha:By the way what help u want from me regarding ur gf
Jalal:Actually i want u to give her my proposal on my behalf
Hearing this jodhas heart ache more but she maintain her fake smile
Jodha:But me why
Jalal:I feared what if she reject me on my face i won't able to take it
So plz jo help me in this
i really need u
Hearing her jalals plea how can our jodha refuse it
Jodha:K i will do it for u
where she is?
Jalal:She is at terrace
Jodha:oh great
After walking a while both reach the terrace door
Jalal:Yup but jo before entering in terrace i want u to close ur eyes
Jodha:But why
Jalal:I have a surprise there
Jodha:Surprise for me
its not my day of surprises jalal but of ur gf
Jalal:No Silly not for u but for my gf but u want u to see it too take it as ur surprise too jo
Jodha:Oh sorry i thought for me;said with sadness
Jalal:Its k no need for sorry
So shall we
On this jodha just nod
Jalal:Then close ur eyes
Jodha closes her eyes and jalal opens the terrace gate

At terrace

Jalal:Now open ur eyes jo
Slowly slowly jodha opens her eyes and what comes infront of her was the most beautiful view Everything was decorated there with white and red ballons and lights what makes it perfect was the snow
For a minutes jodha could not able to blink her eyes
Jalal:So hows it
Only hearing jalals voice jodha comes out of the magic of the view
Jodha:Its just perfect jalal
i cant believe it i am seeing and feeling the snow
Seeing this surprise jodha forgets about jalals gf
Jodha:Can i
Can i
Jalal:Can i what jo
Jodha:Can i spine and shout here;said making a cute childs face Jalal:Of course u can
Getting jalals approval jodha starts running here and there like a small child
seeing jodha running and enjoying like child jalal could not stop himself from admiring her
Jalal:She is looking like an innocent Angel who before a minute was sad hearing my words regarding my fake gf and now enjoying like she got whole universe i don't think i can ever understands her completely ;he thought while walking towards jodha
Jodha who was enjoying carefree suddenly feel hands sneaking on her waist This sudden touch forces her to turn the face to the owner who bought her back from her dreamworld
Jodha:J..Jalal what r u doing
Jalal:What u think
on this jodha just turn her head in negative way which means she don't know
Jalal:Simple flirting with u like always;said while winking towards her
On this jodha just keep staring at jalal
Jalal:Just kidding
Actually i was calling u for last two minutes but seems like u got so lost in ur surprise that forgets for what we have came here
Only after hearing this jodha realises her position with jalal and also came back from her sweet dream land and the glow which was on her face fades away
Jodha:Oh ya where is she;she asked while putting stone on her heart
Jalal:There;indicated while pointing towards the place covered with curtains
On this jodha just nod with a painful smile and start proceeding Towards the curtains after removing the curtains a light stuck in jodhas eyes after few seconds she could finally manage to see and what she was more beautiful than before the whole place was filled with heart shaped red balloons, snow,mirrors and in between all mirrors there was place a big mirror and to complete the beauty there was beautiful shine of beautiful moon
For a minute jodha just forgets is she in earth or her dreamland but our handsome hunk take her back
Jalal:So jo hows she;asked while entering the place with his sexy smirk
Jodha:But jalal here is no one
where is ur gf
Jalal:But i can see her everywhere
Hearing this jodha gave a confused look
Jodha:But i am seeing none;said while looking here and there
On this jalal hold her hand and took her in front of big mirror
Making her stand in front if big mirror and standing behind her
Jalal:Now can u see her ;said while pointing towards mirror
Jodha:But thats my replica not ur gf;only after saying this jodha realises what jalal is saying
Jalal:Its u my innocent jo
u r my gf or should i say i want to make u my gf;said while placing his hands on her shoulders
Hearing this jodha just got flabbergasted and with full popping eyes she looks towards jalal through mirror
Jodha:J.Ja.Jalal stop joking
It's not funny;said while removing his hands from her shoulders
Jalal:Who said i am joking jo
i am serious
cant u see in my eyes;said while looking straight into her eyes
Jodha:Then ur gf,proposal and why we r here;said with full confused look
On this jalal smirk and turns jodha towards himself
Jalal:Now i will give u ur all questions answers
Remember u asked me in car I remember ur experience of Christmas with ur family and i said what r u talking about that time i was just pretending
I remember each a every word related with u jo and i do remember our convo on Christmas
Flashback
Jalal was waiting for jodha in her room and starts roaming in the room and his eyes stuck on the beautiful scenery
then jodha enters in the room with pasta and coke then after that both have their dinner with some chit chatting
Jalal:Jo this scenerys are really beautiful but I have a question
Jodha:Ya ask
Jalal:In all the three scenery's there is snow fall
Its really strange seems like u have only choose those scenerys which have snow fall in it;said with humorous tone
Jodha:Actually ur guess is right
Jalal:Means; asked with confused look
Jodha:I choose these scenery bcoz of snow fall
Jalal:It means u like snow fall this much
Jodha:Yes;said with shy
Actually from my childhood i like Christmas a lot and snow fall as we all know Christmas is day of full winter and snow But in Patna snow fall cant happen and its my dream to celebrate at least one Christmas in snow fall;said with Cherry tone
Jalal:But in this photo u r playing in snow fall and from ur clothes it seems like it's Christmas day
Jodha:Yup it is Christmas and it is snow fall but not real one but fake one
Jalal:What
Fake snow fall!
Jodha:Bapusa and bhaisa to complete my this silly wish brought a snowfall machine and u know what when i saw snow for a sec i forgot its patna and how can snow fall here ,i immediately ran outside of my house and start playing with snow But when i was spinning i realise snow was just falling in our house only after that i realise what my family did for me;said with a little teary eyes
Jalal:Ur family loves u a lot right
Jodha:Yes a lott
U know every Christmas eve all entered in my room in early morning and wish me Christmas with presents
Jalal:So every year they produce snow fall for u
Jodha:No i stop them in doing so
Jalal:But why u love it
Jodha:Yes but seeing snowfall at our home our neighbours start laughing at my parents and brothers stupidity of fulfilling the childish wish of mine
and i can't make let my family a laughing stock
Hearing this jalal just keep on looking at jodha
Flashback ends
Jalal:About ur second question that u asked me in party why i lied u that this party is planned by everyone
Jodha:Why
Jalal:Bcoz i want to fulfill ur this dream and if i tell u the truth that i am that i am planning this all for u ,i dont think u ever gonna allow me do it
i mean i dont think u will come
here with me all alone
Will u?
On this jodha just remain silent
Jalal:And above all that lie is not a lie which we speak for someones happiness
Jodha:Then who was that girl in blue navy dress;asked with questioning and painful look
Jalal:Oh that she was just a class fellow who considencely worn out navy blue dress and i just said her to keep standing at stairs when i will sing the song and yes that song was for u as u r really special for me
And sorry to hurt u this much jo;said with pleading eyes and apology look
Jodha:K i agree but why that gf drama and all this preparations;asked with a hurtful and teary look
Jalal:Bcoz i want to make u desperate for me and also to make u realise ur feelings regarding me;said with a smirk
Jodha:Wh..what feelings r u talking about;said while turning again towards mirror
Jalal:Oh so u want to hear it from my mouth
Hearing this jodha just lowers her head in shyness
Jalal:Look up jodha i want to say it while looking into ur eyes
On this jodha starts looking into mirror with heavy breath
Jalal:I love u;said near her ears while looking straight into her eyes and making her heart beat at its fastest rate
Jodhas inner voice
Thats it jodha this is the answer of ur all insecurities
u was not able to name this feelings but see jalal solved ur this problem too and gave name to ur true feelings he loves u a lot and now admit it u love him too Idiot

Jodha got so lost in her inner talks that forgets about the handsome hunk who was waiting for his answer
Seeing jodha mum jalal shake her a little from her shoulders and turn her towards himself again
Jalal:Jodha u can dream about me later at least give me my answer; said with a naughty smirk
On this jodha just cant able to say a words she feels like she lost her voice and got too shy that lowers her eyes in shyness
Jalal:Say na;asked in husky voice while holding her chin up
But still jodhas eyes r low
Jalal:Jo look into my eyes
i want to hear ur answer while looking straight into ur eyes as ur mouth can speak lie about ur feelings but ur eyes always speaks truth
Hearing this jodhas meet jalals eyes
Now both r looking into each others eyes intensely
But before the convo could proceed further a sound disturbs there romantic moment in between due to which boths intense eye lock gets break Taking it as a chance jodha runs away from there jalal tries to catch her hand but she was too fast
Jalal:How far will u run away from me jo
U have to say i want to hear;said with smirk
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Precap-Jalal while removing jodhas shoulder cover gives a peck on her neck which results in sending shivers in her whole body
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congrats for new thread sherry
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update soon
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congrats for new thread sherry di...😳
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Congrats for new thread Sherry 
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Congrarulations for new thread dear 
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MANY MANY CONGRATULATIONS FOR NEW THREAD SHERRY😃🥳
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