D3-Dil Dosti Dance (Swasan-Raglak FF) Ch-31 page 17 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg!!! So Laksh confessed his live to Ragini.. It was too romantic... And lucky asking to stand and Ragini's thought... O god!! πŸ˜†
Now waiting for SwaSan.. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice Update..
Wow..raglak confessed
Waiting for swasan confession
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Thank you friends for reading & liking this story...

Recap : Swasanraglak selection...sanky execute his plan...raglak confession...Shona kissed sanky on his check...

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#Ch-14 :

Shona came in her room after giveing pack on sanky's check & saw raglak hugging eo..she was lil bit red due to blushing...but soon compose herself...she ran towards raglak & hug both of them happily...they hugged her back...

Shona : (happy) Ohh wow...congratulations both of you...omg...i can't believe my lucky boy get his better half...(jump) i m sooo happy for both of you...

Raglak : (smile seeing her happiness) thank u my kiddo...

Sanky joined them after coming out of shock..he huged both...

sanky : (smile)congratulations Lado...lucky...i m so happy for you...u both are officially couple now...

Raglak : (smile) thank u sanky...

Sanky looked at Shona but she was avoiding eye contact with him...and blushing a bit...he smile seeing her...Shona feel his gaze on her & try to divert his attention...

Shona : Ohh...so finally i hv official right to tease both of you now...you both are going to become victims of teasing...

Lucky got bit nervous bz he knew his Shona...she can make anyone embarrassed by her teasing... so he keep mum on her statement..but ragini was unaware about this fact and Spock b4 lucky could stop her...

Ragini : Ohh..we will see Shona..i know how innocent you are..so your teasing will be also innocent only...my sweet lil kiddo...

lucky put his hands on his head nd shook his head towards ragini with expression we-are-gone-now.. Sanky saw all this.. ragsan were confused with lucky's behaviour...

sanlakrag looked at Shona which was fuming with anger as ragini was not taking her seriously.. But next second a naughty smile came on her face...which make ragsan confused & lucky scared...he tried to escape...

lucky : (fake yawning) uuu...Bye guys i m feeling sleepy...good night...(he hurriedly start going 2words door)

Shona : (Call him) (straching) luckyyy...!!!

he stop there & turn nervously...Shona went near him hold his hand & drag him...she made him stand near ragini...

Shona : (naughty smile) Lucky...where were you going ha...(lower tone) bz when i come you both were besy in hugging and looking very happy & fresh...

Lucky smile nervously...ragini blush little on her comment..sanky looks on..she continues..

Shona : (fake concerned face) btw lucky how's your knee now..i must be paining na...(lucky make scared face he know what's coming next )

(TO LADO) (with fake confuse face) Di, when lucky ask you 2 stand up..at that time you become red like tomato..why ? (wink at her) naughty girl, did u thought that he is asking for a KI...? ;)

leave her sentence incomplete..ragini blush hard & also felt nervous..she gave sorry expression to lucky...

Shona : (continue naughtily) Di, don't blush like this or else lucky will loose his control & may end up making lo...

Lucky : (close her mouth with his hand) Shona...plz stop now...you are not at all kiddo in this matter..i think ragini has also understand by now..hena ragini..!??

Ragini : (still blushing) (touch her ear) (agree) i was so wrong dear..i am sorry for taking you granted...i will not repeat this mistake my kiddo...plz spare us now...(puppy face)

Shona : (look at raglak) (broust out laughing) Ohh god..lucky..Di your face...hahhahha..lol..are red like tomatoes...(control) ok ok now enough for today...

raglak : (sigh) thank god...

Shona hug raglak...they look at sanky...he was standing with shock expression...his eyes & mouth were wide open...seeing Shona teasing like this...

lucky : (shake him) Sanky...where r u gone ??

Sanky : ahhh...(gulp seeing Shona) wo...vo...nothing...i was just...

lucky : (complete his sentence) Shocked to see Shona like this hena..?? don't worry you & lado will soon get to know all about her...she is like kiddo but at the same time INNOCENT DEVIL..

Shona look at him angrily..trio smile seeing he expression..then all broust out laughing & share group hug...they sat on the bed talking..

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Suddenly Sanky saw one dairy..its cover page was so beautiful...he went to see that dairy & take it in his hand..

Shona saw that & ran towards him, snatched her dairy from him & hold it tight near her chest in her both hands..Sanky was so shocked as everything happened in few secs only :O ...raglak saw this..

Sanky : (shocked) What was that..??

Lucky : (worn him) hey sanky...don't touch it..its her personal dairy..she even don't allow me to touch it...

sanky got shocked to listen this as he couldn't believe Shona will keep something secret from lucky..

lucky : (tease Shona) that dairy is all about the person whom she is deeply & madly in love with from last 11 years..

Ragini : (ask) About you..???

lucky : (hurriedly) no no no...its not about me..she love me like friend only..the dairy is all about her Love the real that type of love...(smile naughtily) :-*

Shona blush in dark shade red..Seeing her blushing like that lucky smile but Ragsan were shocked...

sanky couldn't believe the one whom he has started loving like mad is already in love with someone... :-( he was very upset..ragini was also sad as she knew about his feelings...

Sanlak went to their room...soon raglak doze off thinking about their confession...Shona also sleep thinking about her moments with sanky...

but our Sanky darling was very sad..upset..jeaulose...angry..thinking about her Love & personal dairy..he was not at all getting sleeps..A small tear escape from his eye :'( ..after sometime he also doze off feeling very jealous & heart broken... :(

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Next morning at 5:30 lucky get up and went to Swaragini's room still in sleepy stat..room was open as he knew Shona will be at rehearsal hall as per her routin..he went inside & closed the door..

he went near bed & ly down besides rag..he gently picked her head up and slid his arm under her head & take her into his embrace...he closed his eyes & sleep again..now both of them were sleeping tightly hugging eo...

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Shona went to rehearsal hall for dance practice...all were sleeping so she was practicing alone...

there sanky also gets up early..he was needed to involve his mind in dance so that he don't think about Shona's dairy..he went to rehearsal hall...

He went inside and saw Shona dancing there..she was doing straching, spinning & split practice.. she was doing it with so much grace & perfection...sanky stood there watching her smilingly...he forget all about her Love & dairy..just lost in her...

soon she complete her practice and wipe her face with napkin..she drink some water & sat there..as door was at side way & sanky was standing behind the door..Shona could not see him but he can see and hear her...

She takes out her personal dairy from her handbag...She open it..she was smiling & blushing while turning the page..she was crassing photos in between...

Shona : (talk slowly looking at pics ) I love you sooo much my dear...you know i m in love with you from when i was 9 year old...(laugh to herself & continue) at that time i was not knowing the meaning of love...the day i saw you for the 1st time u made place in my heart...(continue) i m open book for lucky but i even don't allow him to touch this dairy...(Blush) i really love you so much...(kissed the photo) Mummmha... :-*

Sanky who saw and heard everything was feeling so much jealous seeing Shona's love for that person...he was feeling very heart broken... :-( he went from there without speaking anything...he went to his room...he was not in his senses..he don't know what will he do now..lucky was not there so he closed the door...

Sanky : (heart broken) why god why this happen with me only..? you know na..how much i love Shona...i can't think my life without her..then y u did this to me...what's wrong i hv done with anyone that u r punishing me like this..i was suppose to propose her...

Sanky open his & Shona's pic in mobile...

Sanky : (angry) y did u do this to me Shona..? can't you understand that i love you... if u were already in love with someone they y u come near me..what was that dance & hug & kiss for...(realize) no sanky may be you hv mistaken her friendship..she do hug & kiss to lucky also..but he is just her best friend..may be she also think u as her best friend only... :'(

Sanky : (jealous) she loves that person only...who is he..? does he handsome then me ? can he dance like me ? does he care about u like me..? Ohh god...Shona i was boiling when u kissed his pic...(hold his head in both hands) how lucky he is that u love him so much that to from 11 years...(wipe his tears) clam down sanky...Shona is not for u..just befriend with her..don't think much... :-(

He somehow compose himself with so much difficulty...he went to take a bath & come out of his room & towards rehearsal hall...he was looking dull & tiered... :-(

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Ragini open her eyes & found herself in lucky's arm..she thought she is dreaming...

Ragini : (smile & murmur) Ohh god..lucky...u hv made me crazy...see i m dreaming that you are sleeping here hugging me..how badly i want this dream to come true..i love you so much...

Lucky who heard her smile & tighten his grip pulling her more close to him...now ragini widen her eyes as she understand that its not dream but reality...she tried to get our of his grip..

Lucky : (open his eyes & smile) Good morning..i love you too my angel..( pack her forehead)

Ragini : (blush & stammer) ggg good morning lucky...what are you doing here..?plz leave me...Shona will come anytime...she will not leave us seeing us like this..

Lucky : (tighten his grip) shhh...don't worry ragini...i hv already sent meg her not to come till the time i call her...

Ragini : Ohh god..now she will tease us like hell...what hv u done lucky...?

lucky : (assure her) don't worry angel...kiddo will not do anything till we don't make her angry or tease her..so now forget about her & concentrate on US...(wink at her)

Ragini blush hard listening to his last line..lucky see her blushing face & lost in his angel's morning beauty...ragini felt his intense gaze on her..

Ragini : (bush) lucky plz don't star me like that...i feel...

lucky : (huskily) you what angel..? tell me...

Ragini blush more..now that was enough for him..he roll over..now ragini was on her back & lucky was on top of her..they were tooo close...

Lucky kissed her forehead...ragini close her eyes...then he kissed her both closed eyes..then her nose...then her both checks..then he kissed on her cheen very near to lower lips..ragini give blushing smile..she opened her eyes..they both look at eo..their eyes were filled with love & passion for eo..lucky look at her lips & ask permission to kiss her with his eyes..she understand..she part her lips and closed her eyes giving him positive signal..lucky smile & leaned to her lips..they both were breathing heavily..they were very closed & can feel their hot breath on their lips..

they were about to kiss when ragini's phone rang...they open their eyes..lucky get up from her & ragini picked up the call..it was ap's call...she was talking on the phone still blushing hard...she looked at lucky who was frustrated bz of disturbance...she complete the call...

Lucky : what a timing yar..we were about to hv our first kiss but...(give naughty smile) anyways lets complete our work...

Ragini : (blush) Lucky..you are so shameless...we will do it latter...let me go and get ready we need go for rehearsal...

Lucky : (make sad puppy face) ya..ok...i m going to my room...

lucky was about to go when ragini hold his hand...she went near him & kissed his right check...lucky become very happy...she blushed..

lucky : (forwarding his left check) plz here also...

Ragini smack his shoulder playfully & kissed his left check also...he become very happy and hugged her tightly...

lucky : (happy) thank u so much my angel...

ragini : (blush) now go...c u at rehearsal hall...bye...

she pushed him out & closed the door..they both were very happy..they were smiling remembering their recent romantic moments...

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Shona hv received lucky's meg telling her not to come to room till he call her..she smile..& happy for lucky & Lado...So after sometime she again start her dance practice...at that time sanky come there...

Shona blush remembering yesterday's kiss but compose herself...she found sanky in deep thought & looking bit dull...she got worried about him...

Shona : good morning sanky (worried) r u all right..?

Sanky : (upset tone) morning swara...ya i m fine...

Shona was shocked bz for the 1st time sanky was addressing her as Swara that to when they r alone...

Shona : (tensed) sanky.. y u r looking so dull...? is anything wrong with you..?

Sanky smile a lil seeing her concerned but then he remembered about her love & become upset again...

Sanky : (firm tone) nothing swara...leave it...

Shona : (hold his hand) tell me sanky what is bothering you...? you are...

Sanky couldn't control himself & become very angry...he hold her hands & pinned her to the glass wall...went close to her...she was shocked with his behaviour...

Sanky : (shouts angrily) i m perfectly alright...swara...you don't need to worry about me...don't interfere in my matters...i don't need your sympathy...

Shona got tears in her eyes seeing his anger... :'( she has not seen him like this before...she start weeping silently...Sanky stop seeing her tears & realized what he has done...he immediately release her grip...

Sanky : (hurriedly ) i m so sorry Shona...i didn't mean to hurt you...Ohh god...i m sorry..plz don't cry...i was upset and...i m so sorry...plz plz forgive me...

he knelt down infornt of her & hold his ears... :-(

Shona was very angry on him due to his behaviour & harsh words but she melt after seeing him apologizing like this..she thought something is really bothering him..

Shona made him sit properly..she give him water to drink...she sat besides him & hold his hand..he was feeling more guilty seeing her care for him & her teary eyes...

Shona : (teary voice) (pat his shoulder) its ok sanky...sometimes its happenes...don't feel guilty...

Sanky : (almost cryiny) sh..Shona...i m sorr...

Shona : (interrupt) shhh..i m fine sanky...i m not angry on you...

She hugged sanky assuring him that she is fine...sanky too hugged her back...tears were flowing from both of their eyes...they break the hug...

Shona : (try to lightn the environment) Ohh god...i didn't think that MR. kadus is so emotional...

Sanky : (smile) and i too didn't think that this lil kid can act maturdly...

Shona : (make fake angry face) don't call me kid...(serious tone) i know something is bothering you...don't tell me now...take your own time...(hold his hand) just remember one thing that i will be always there with you... :-)

sanky was touched by her words and nodes...

Shona : u r feeling dull na...then lets dance...u will surly feel good & fresh... :-*

sanky : hmm...wanna do it as dance rehersal ?

Shona : no yar...its for chilling out...to change your mood...for fun :-* :-P we will do practice afterwards...

Sanky : (feel so happy with her care) ya...ok..the..lets do it...on which song...?? rocking or (in lower tone) romantic...

Shona : (blush a lil but with attitude) off course rocking one..(pout) today we had many sad & emotional talks...so now we hv to come back to our original naughty fighting mood.. :-P ;-)

sanky : (laugh seeing her expression) as you wish dear... (he wink at her)

sanky select one song from his playlist & played it...Shona looked at sanky after hearing song..swasan smirked at eo...they took their position & start dancing...

(friends..plz read SONG lyrics also...u will enjoy it more...) ...

Song : (movie : ladies v/s ricky bahel)

Oh Ladkon ki ungli pe naache hai zamana Simple yeh funda hai ladkiyon ko batana Lute nahi lut jaaye, Jeete nahi pat jaaye Kudiyaan hai jebon mein rakh le Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le Thag le thag le thug le Kudiyaan nu thug le,... (2)

[SANKY START DANCING AROUND SHONA LIPSING THE SONG LYRICS...HE WAS GIVING EXPRESSIONS ACCORDING TO THE SONG WORDS...SHONA WAS MAKING FACES SEEING HIM..HE PUSHED HER PLAYFULLY WHILE DOING DANCE STEP...THEN HE PAUSHED]

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Hey Ladkon ko lagta hai easy jeet jaana Iss baar unko hara ke hai dikhana Badi badi haanke hai Yunhi hawa phaanke hai Jebe bhari khali hai aqle Mundeya nu thug le, thug le Mundeya nu thug le, thug le Thag le thag le thug le Mundeya nu thug le, thug le...

[NOW SHONA START DANCING...SHE WAS DOING LOCKING WITH HER HANDS...SANKY WAS GIVING ATITUDE LOOK...SHE WAS ALSO GIVING EXPRESSIONS ACCORDING TO THE WORDS...AT LAST SHE STAMP ON SANKY'S FOOT SLOWLY]

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Kudiyaa nu thug le (Hey...) Mundeya nu thug le (Hey... ) Ho Kudiyaan nu thug le (Hey...) Mundeya nu Mundeya nu thug le (Hey...) Kudiyaa nu Mundeya nu Kudiyaa nu Mundeya nu Thug le..

[NOW THEY BOTH START DANCING TOGETHER...THEY WERE DOING SIGNATURE STEPS OF THE SONG...THEN AT LAST SHONA DO SPLIT & SANKY DO FLIP & THEY BOTH PUSHED]

song end..

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song completed..both laugh & share hifi...Sanky was really feeling light & fresh...Shona was happy seeing him smiling...

Shona : (happy) wow...it was just awesome..(laugh) ha ha ha...we are crazy...lol.. :-P

sanky : (laugh) ya...we are...i also enjoyed it so much...

She received meg from lucky that she can go to her room now...so she got up and start going from there...

Sanky : (call her from back) Shona..i m sorry once again...

Shona : (smile) its ok sanky...(make cute face) but plz don't do like this again MR ANGRY YOUNG MAN.. :-P :-(

Sanky : (smile & nodes) hmm...i won't...thanks MISS SWEETY GIRL...u can make anyone smile in any situation... :-)

Shona smile & left from there to her room...sanky watch her going out ..

Sanky : (monologue) why i m feeling that you also love me as much as i do from your care.. your concerned..your eyes..your actions...? Ohh god...i m going mad...

Sanky : (jeaulose) no sanky didn't you heard in morning how much she love that person...the villan of my life...ahhh...i m not able to think Shona with someone else... :-(

Sanky : (determined) now i need to find out about that person...i know its wrong to check someone's personal dairy but i badly need to check it...i will...

Suddenly he saw Shona's handbag there...Shona forget to take her handbag...he remember her taking out dairy from that beg...his face lightened...he immediately ran towards door and locked it from inside...

She took out her dairy from the beg..his hands were shivering due to nervousness...he finally open first page...his eyes widened reading the line written on that...

" The one who will read my dairy without my permission will become frog in his next birth "

In his state of nervousness also he smile seeing her childishness reading that sentence..

Sanky : (murmur) (smile) Ohh god...she is just crazy...(confused) should i read ?? (scard) ahh...what if i will become frog in next birth...(console himself) nothing will happen sanky...you hv to find out about her love...so just go for it...

He took courage and finally turned the page &...

Precap : Sanky come to know about Shona's love...small villans entry..

The end

Please share your view about this part...:-)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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O god !!! RagLak moments...😳
And SwaSan dance...πŸ˜ƒ
I think that photo might be some hero... Or something else...πŸ˜† Don't know..πŸ˜†
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Thank you everyone for reading & liking this story...

Recap : raglak romance & Sanskar jeaulosy

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#Ch-15 :

Sanky opened Shona's personal dairy...he turned the page...his eyes widen in shock...he start turning the pages...

In the dairy :

it was full of a guy pics...almost on each page at least 2 pics were there...

She has written some romantic lines or Shayaries under his every pics...

She has written her dreams which she has got in nights about that guy & her...

She has written each & everything about that guy...

Sanky was getting more & more jeaulose by turning each pages...he clearly understand that Shona loves that guy sooo much..he has not time to read whole dairy so he was just turning the pages...

he come at the page where she has written all her night dreams which she has seen abt that guy...Sanky read one dream and become red due to anger & jeaulosy...as that dream was about her wet dream ;) with that guy...he closed the dairy and put it back in her handbag...

He stood up..his face was full of anger & jealousy...but after few minutes...he become extremely happy & start shouting...jumping & dancing like mad... :-D

At that time someone knocks on the door...he compose himself & opened the door...raglak were staring him with confusion...

Lucky : (confused) Sanky are you ok..!? y were you shouting..?

Ragini : (touch his forehead) Sanky your health is ok na..? n y u hv locked the door...?

Sanky : (happily) nothing Lado...i m perfectly alright...lucky, i was just trying one step so i locked the door & then i did it properly so i shouted...

Lucky : Ohhk dude...you scared us...

Ragini : ya lucky is right..(she remember about Shona's love) Sanky are u really ok...?? i mean yesterday after knowing about Shona's love...??

Lucky : (confused) Shona's love..? (then he realized that Sanky feels for Shona...n he may be jeaulose due to that)

Ragini : ya Sanky loves Shona very much..(sadly) but Shona is in love with someone else na..?

Lucky : what...wowww...Sanky you realized that you love Shona...awesome...(hug him) i m so happy for you...(Sanky smiles & thanked)

Ragini : (confused) but yesterday you only told that she is in love with...

Sanlak : (together) (interrupt) SHAHID KAPOOR

ragini : (shocked) What...???!!!!!!!

Lucky : (smile) she is in love with SHAHID KAPOOR from when she was 9 year old...she really do sachi muchi vala love to him... :-*

Sanky : (make faces) she is just crazy behind him...she has collected almost his all the photos...(jeaulose face) she has written I LOVE YOU on every page...(angry) She has also seen romantic night dreams with him... :-(

Ragini : (surprised) what Shona is in love with shahid...she is crazy.. :-P

Lucky : (shocked) Don't tell me you hv read her personal dairy Sanky...?

Sanky : (realize his mistake & bit his tongue) wwwoohhh...actually i..

lucky : (understand) now you are gone Sanky...if Shona will come to know that you hv touched her SHAHID's dairy without her permission...now i m sure she will hate u...& kill u...

Sanky : (scared) ahhh...nooo...plz lucky..Lado don't tell her that i hv read her dairy...plz plz plz...(cute puppy face)

Lucky : ok dear...but she should not come to know that you hv touched her dairy..ok..?

Ragini : ya we will not tell her abt this..(hug Sanky) i m so happy for you Sanky...

Sanky : thanks lucky..Lado...bas now i need to propose her..i will do it after few days...as now i m sure she will also love me & accept me..

(though lucky know Shona is already in love with him..he didn't tell anything to Ragsan abt that)

Raglak : yup..all the best for that...

Sanky nodes & they three started their dance practices...soon Shona also joined them...

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Two weeks passed...

2 contestants got eliminated...1st week Sanky become the performance of the week & in 2nd week it was Lucky who won that title...now 10 contestants were there...

In this 2 weeks Raglak were not leaving a single chance to romance with eo..whereas swasan were coming close day by day...now both almost knew that other one is also having the same feelings...they were waiting for perfect opportunity to confess their feelings...

In remaining 6 contestants there was 4 guys & 2 girls..their names were Nikhil,Tanu,Kartik,kavita,Raj & Kabir...

Raj & Kabir were good friend of swaragsanlak...but Nikhil,Tanu,kavita & Kartik were very jealous of our leads...bz they knew if they will be remain in competition..then there no chance for them to win the show..

Moreover Nikhil was having crush on ragini but ragini was not giving any imp to him...there kavita was also hving crash on lucky...but her condition was also same...

They 4 were close friends & were planning something to harm swasnaraglak...but they were not getting successful in that...

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1st day of Week 3 : 2:00 pm

Swasan & raglak went to Swaragini room after taking their lunch...their next dance session were going to start after 2 hours..

Shona : (to Sanky) i think someone wants to hv privacy...

Sanky : (understand) ya..so we should leave them alone...

Ragini : (blush) nothing like that..lets all spend some time together..

Lucky : (unwilling) ya lets we all hv fun...

Swasan understand their feeling & laugh looking their expression in mind...

Shona: (smile naughtily) don't worry..we are going...

Sanky : (wink at them) you both enjoy...

Swasan left from there...ragini went to close the door..as soon as she close the door lucky pinned her to the door & lean towards her..ragini was shocked at first with his sudden move but then blush & put her hands around his nack...

Lucky lean and kiss her nack romatically..then He kissed near her lips...

Lucky : (huskily) angel...can we..can we hv our first kiss now..? Only and only if you are comfortable...

Ragini was overwhelmed with his gentleness..in spit of many romantic moments between them he still asking permission..she smile & close her eyes..Lucky become happy..he leaned to her lips..

he gently touched her lips with his own without kissing her...he finally packed her lips..this was new feeling for both of them...soon both of them start kissing each other passionately...they Brock the kiss due to lack of oxygen..lucky touched her forehead with his..

Lucky : (whispered) I love you angel..

Ragini : i love you too lucky.. (hug him)

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Same day at night...

after talking dinner all 10 contestants thought to hv some fun...so they gathered at terrace & decided to play Truth & Dare...lucky spins the bottle & it stop in front of karthik...

Tanu : ok now truth or dare Kartik: (smirk) Dare

Tanu : pick one girl and do close dance with her.. Kartik : (smile) sure y not..

He stand up & went near Shona..

Kartik : Swara can i dance with you plz ?

Shona : (bit uncomfortable) Woh...i m so sorry Kartik..i don't wanna hurt you but i don't like to dance with anyone except lucky & (she look at Sanky)...

Sanlak saw her uncomfortable face & interrupt in between..

lucky : Hey dude...she will not dance with you as she is not comfortable...

Sanky : yah...so plz don't mind & dance with Tanu...

Kartik : (feel insulted but don't show it) sure..its ok..

Shona gave thank you look to sanlak..they assure her..Kartik & Tanu dance...they spins bottle again..its stops at lucky...

Kabir : truth or dare ? lucky : Truth with dare ;)

Raj : Are you in love with anyone ? if yes then tell her I LoVe you infornt of us ?

lucky : (look at rag) yes...i love you so much...(wink at her) (she smile)

Kabir : (excitedly) Who is she ?? call her n tell her I LoVe you infornt of us...

Lucky : (smile) i hv already told her..

kavita : who is she..?

Sanky : (stop her) hey you can't ask another question..he has completed his task...

Everyone thought she is Shona as they both are very close..moreover Swaragini were sitting together when lucky speck i love looking in their direction...next it was Ragini's turn..

Sanky : truth or dare ? Lado : Dare

Shona : awesome..now sing a hot romantic song for someone special..(wink at her)

ragini smile & look at lucky & start singing...

" Tum Jo aye zindgi me bat ban gayi..ishk mazhab..ishk meri zat ban gayi..spne teri chahto k dekhti hu ab kayi..din hai Sona or chandi rat ban gayi...ho..."

Raglak were looking in eo's eyes while whole song...Nikhil & kavita got doubt on them seeing their constant eye-lock...all clapped for ragini...

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Lucky : hey lets make it interesting...we will spin bottle..both the person who will be at each end of bottle direction hv to dedicate a song to eo & dance on it...what's say...?

all : wow..awesome

he spins bottle...bottle is spinning...still spinning...slowly spinning...& finally stoped..its...Shona & Sanky...swasan & raglak both become happy with this... :-P

First Sanky plays the song & start dancing on it around Shona...

(movie : Kismat connection)

"Hooo... Tu Hi Ehsason Mein, Tu Hi Jazbaton Mein, Tu Hi Lamhaton Mein, Tu Hi Din Raaton Mein.. Bakhuda Tumhi Ho, Har Jagah Tumhi Ho, Haan Mein Dekhua Jahan Jab,

[HE START DANCING LOOKING AT SHONA..HE POINT TOWARDS HER..TAKE A SPINS AROUND HER]

Uss Jagah Tumhi Ho, Yeh Jahan Tumhi Ho, Wo Jahan Tumhi Ho, Iss Zameen Se Falak Ke, Darmiyaann..Tumhi Ho, Tum Hi Ho, Beshumaar, Tum Hi Ho.. Tum Hi Ho, Mujh Mein Haan, Tum Hi Ho..Tum Hi Ho.. Hooo...

[HE WENT NEAR HER..HE HOLD HER HAND & MADE HER TWIRLED AROUND HIM..AT LAST LOOK AT HER PASSIONATELY] "

Shona was blushing & feeling out of the world with his confession...raglak were also very happy bz he indirectly proposed her...

Kartik : (suspiciously) but y this song..?

Ragini : (covers) bz this the 1st song in his play list..that's the only reason...

Sanky : Ohh ya..(look at Shona) (smile naughtily) nothing much..(Shona blush)

Tanu : whatever...now its swara's turn...

Sanky & raglak were waiting for her reply...Swara plays the song & start dancing around Sanky...

(movie : Phata poster Nikla Hero)

" Khwaab Hai Tu.. Neend Hoon Main Donon Milein Raat Bane Roz Yahi Maangun Duaa Teri Meri Baat Bane Baat Bane..

[ SHE START DANCING..SHE DO SOME SOFT FOOT STEPS]

Main Rang Sharbaton Ka Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Pani..(2) Mujhe Khud Mein Ghol De To Mere Yaar Baat Ban Jaani.."

[SHE DO BEAUTIFUL MOVES WITH HER WAIST & AT LAST SHE WENT NEAR HIM & STOOD INFORM OF HIM SMILINGLY]

all start clapping for her..Sanky got his answer...raglak were happy with both of their confession..

Raj : wow swara it was amazing...you danced very well..

Swara : thank u...

They all play for some more time..& left for their respective rooms..swasan & raglak were very happy..

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Raglak knew that swasan might wanted sometime alone to confess their feelings directly...so lucky took ragini to sanlak room leaving Swasan in Swaragini's room...

Both were feeling awkward..Sanky took the courage & finally Brock the silence teasing her..

Sanky : (tease her) hey..Miss. PINKY...y r u blushing this much..is any thing special today..?

Shona was expecting him to propose her properly but here he started teasing her..she become angry...

Shona : (angry) you Mr. Mood spoiler...i don't wanna talk to you..you are teasing me...i thought you will...

She left her sentence incomplete & started moving from there..Sanky smile seeing her angry expression...he hold her hand and pulled her towards him..she crashed on his chest..she tried to move from there but Sanky hold her tightly & went more close to her making her blush like red tomato.. :-*

Sanky : (whispered near her lips) tell me Shona..what you thought me to do...??

Shona : (look into his eyes) (breath hevenly) woh...i though that you will...

Sanky : (confessed) I love to fight with you...i love to tease you..i love to be teased by you..i love your childishness..i love your innocence...i love your nautiness..i love your pranks..i love your dance..love your eyes..i love your smile..i love your hug..i love your kiss..in short..I LOVE YOU MY PRINCESS..

Shona start crying hearing his confession..she was very happy..she don't know how to reply him back so she simply huged him tight..

Shona : (crying) I LOVE YOU too my prince...

Sanky also got teary eyes..he smile hearing her reply...they were in the same position for sometime..then Sanky Brock the hug & wipe her tears..cupped her face & kissed her forehead..they both sat on the bed hugging eo.

sanky sat on bed...Shona was abt to sit besides him but he made her sit on his lap.. :-P She blushed...sanky hug her tightly from back & rest his chin on her shoulder...

Sanky : Princess, you made my life beautiful perfect & rocking... :-* i can't imagine my life without u...

Shona : same here...i also can't live without you...u r everything for me...

They both started talking about their feeling with respect to their previous fights, Dance, hugs, kiss & all close moments...They both became overwhelmed after hearing about eo's feelings...

sanky didn't share how he felt after knowing about her personal diary...bz he was not wanting to spoil their special moment...they were talking...

Shona : Sanky thank you so much..

Sanky : (confused) for what my princess... :O

Shona : (smile & blush) for expressing your feeling on song of my SHAHID's movie... O:-)

Sanky : (jeaulose) (monologue) Ohh god...again shahid..no not only shahid..its my shahid... :-( ufff..btw i know u will like it that's y i hv selected that song... ;-)

Shona look at him as he didn't speak anything & saw his jeaulose expression..she didn't understand it..so ask innocently...

Shona : hey .what happened..? Why are u making this face..?

Sanky : aree...nothing princess..lucky told me that you like SHAHID so i select his song...

Shona : ohhkk...but let me clear you my prince..i don't like him..but..i LOVE him.. :-*

Sanky was so much jeaulose by now..but he has seen her dairy and know that she loves him so much..He can't do anything right now..he smartly replied her..

Sanky : i know my princess..you know i also like him..i mean he is a very good dancer so i really like him... B-)

Shona jumped & hugged him tightly after hearing his answer...

Shona : (happy) Ohh wow..Sanky you also like him...i LOVE you..i love you..i love you..i love you sooo much Sanky... :-*

She kissed his forehead then both the checks one by one...Sanky was shocked with her excitement..

he was expecting her to become happy but he was not having idea that he will receive such an amazing hug & kisses...both were hugging tightly..

Sanky : (monologue) aree Wah..thank u bhai shahid... :-D i was thinking you as villan of my love story but now i understand how to encash your name for getting such gifts from my princess... :-P for this i hv to say that I also love you shahid... ;-)

He smile on his thoughts...swasan were happy with their confessions & raglak were happy for their best buddies..

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Next day..morning 9:30 am

All the contestants were present in the hall...Remo sir had come to meet them...and to give them theme for the week...all were very excited...

Remo sir : hello everyone...good morning...

All : good morning sir...

Remo sir : this week you all are going to hv dance face offs...we will select who will do face off against whom on which style...so are you ready...??

All : (nervous) yes sir...

Remo sir : face of will be like this ;

1) Ragini v/s Kavita : classical dance

2) Laksh v/s Kabir : Lyrical Hiphop

3) Raj v/s Kartik : Bollywood

4 ) swara & sanskar v/s Nikhil & Tanu : couple dance free style

Remo sir : the winners will be safe from elimination & we will eliminate the 2 weak performers from losers... ...did you all understand everything ?

All : yes sir...

All contestants start practicing for their face offs which was going to be after 4 days...

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all were happy..except 3..Kavita, Nikhil & Tanu as thy hv to compete against swaragsanlak...they met at night to plan against them...

Kartik : chill guys...do your practice & you will win against them...

Tanu : (hyper) shut up u idiot..you are telling this bz u r going to face off against Raj...but...

Nikhil : we hv to compete with that 4 idiots who dance really well...we hv to think something..

Kavita : i hv decided something...(smile evilly) miss Ragini...this week will be your last week in this show...

She told her plan to other three...they become happy...

Tanu : (evil smile) that's grate..i think after this swasan will be also distracted from dance due to ragini's condition...

They all become happy and share hifi...then they went to their respective rooms...

#Precap : Kavita's plan against ragini...accident... swasanraglak emotional moments..performance day...& elimination...

The end

Waiting for your valuable feedback about this part... :-)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hawww!!!! Evil plan against Ragini...
SwaSan confession was awesome. 😳
RagLak kiss...☺️
I hope Ragini manages to perform and SwaSanRagLak gets selected..  God plzzz help...
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Awesome work. Real awesome. Swasan. Finally confess kiya. Ab aayega maza. But plz dont kill that Swasan name giving Quality or basically teasing part.
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Nice Update..
Waiting for next part
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Thanks everyone for liking this story & commenting...

Recap : Swasan confession, Raglak 1st kiss, kavita planning against ragini...

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#Ch-16 :

After receiving face off challenge :

All contestants were practicing hard...all were determined to win the challenge...swasan were dancing with awesome chemistry...lucky is the best in lyrical hiphop...no one can win against ragini in classical...

Choreography of all contestants were all set & whole day they were practicing their dance Performances...

Kavita, Nikhil & tanu were besy in their planning against ragini...Nikhil was having crush on ragini but he was involved in this one bz he has dought on raglak & second to distract swasan so that he can win...they complete all their work related to execution of their plan...

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At night, dining table...

All contestants were present there except Shona..sanlakrag trio were also there..Shona has received an important call regarding her CS exams..so she was in her room..

Kavita signal Tanu to start their plan...

Tanu : (hyper tone) Ohh god...my ring...i lost my ring...(fake crying) it was given by my dad..its very previous for me...(cry loudly)

Kartik : (give her water) Ohmg..Tanu don't cry..we all will help to find your ring...(all agree)

Lucky : try to remember when you hv seen it last time...?

Sanky : hv you taken it out while practicing..?

Tanu : (act crying) i don't know...i don't remember anything...

Kavita sit besides her & act consoling he..she smile evilly looking at ragini who seems thinking something...kavita remembered the flash back...

FB start :

In costume room...Ragini, Tanu, Shona & kavita were there trying their dance costumes...kavita told Tanu to keep her ring somewhere when ragini is watching her...and Tanu kept her ring in dressing table & ragini watched her...

FB end..

Ragini : (excitedly) i know where you hv kept that ring...Tanu i saw you keeping that ring on dressing table of our costume room...(all become very happy..specially kavita...)

Kavita : (act tensed & sweetly) ragini...see Tanu's condition...can u do one favour..as you know where she has kept..will u go and bring it here..??

Ragini : arre..sure y not..

Sanlak also found it normal..ragini got up went towards girls dressing room...Nikhil, Tanu, Kartik & kavita smile evilly seeing eo..

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In that house...all other contestants rooms & rehearsal hall where on 2nd floor..swasanraglak were on 1st floor...kitchen ,dining room & the main hall was on ground floor parted by door...the hall was very BIG..

costume rooms, Prop room & store room are connected to hall...but there was a small soft marble stone path connecting all above rooms to hall...one hv to walk on that to enter any of rooms...

Kavita had mixed many sharp glass pieces with marble stones on path of costume rooms...the one who will put a leg on it will defiantly not able to stand for few weeks..This was their planning against ragini...

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Ragini come out of the dining area..she was going towards costume room...at that time Shona come down stairs..she was facing ragini's right side..she saw ragini going there..she smile & start going towards her..she casually look down at marble stone while walking..she found something shining there...

Shona : (confused) what's that..i hv never seen anything like that..(saw it) omg glass pieces..(look at ragini) Di... :O

Shona saw ragini was very near to the path..she was not looking down bz they hv walked on that path N no of times during this 2 weeks...Shona ran in the direction of ragini...she was about to put her feet on that path..but...

Shona : (Scream) Raginiii...

She pushed her before she put her feet on that path...they both fall down...All heard Shona's screaming...

Lucky : (tensed) it was Shona's scream na...

Sanky : (worried) Shona..Lado...!!!!

Kavita & party was happy...they thought their plan has worked..All ran in the hall...they show ragini & Shona lying on the floor...they reach near them...

Sanlak : (worried) what happened..? (they sits besides them) are you both ok...???

Shona : (breathing heavily) Di...are you ok...???

Ragini : (put her hand on her) ya dear i m ok.. But Shona...y u pushed me like that..what happened..?

Shona : (still breathing hevenly) (point towards marble path) look at there..there are so many sharp glass pices on that marble path...if you hv put your feet on it then...(left her sentence incomplete)

Sanky : what...??? (went towards it & check) yes..its true..there are so many glass pices here..

Lucky : (angrily) that means someone do this to harm ragini...

Sanky : (angrily) so that she can not perform..

Sanlak : (look at eo) we are not going to spar them...

Kavita & party got scared seeing their anger..they were looking at Shona angrily to spoil their plan...

Lucky : (sit near her & tensed) ragini are you all right na...?

Ragini was not responding after understanding the whole situation...she might hv to leave the show if Shona has not saved her...they were still sitting on floor...

Ragini : (crying) Shona (hug her) i don't know how to say thanks to you...you hv not only save me..you hv saved my dreams also... :'(

Shona : (crying) what r u saying Di...i love you so much Di..so how can i let anything happen to you when i m here...

Ragini :(again hug her) i love you too Shona..(she kiss her forehead)

Sanlak were also having tears in their eyes seeing their bonding...at the same time they were angry also...

Sanky : (heavy voice) Shona Lado get up...lets go to room now...

Ragini got up...Shona tried to got up but she was not able to move her right feet...she again fall down..she sit there holding her right foot..sanlakrag become worried & went near her..

Lucky : (worried) What happened Shona..? Are you ok...?

Sanky : (tensed) why are you holding your feet...? Show me...

They checked her feet...her feet was twisted whn she fall on the floor..sanky touched her feet...

Shona : (shouts & cry) ahhh...its paining badly...ahh... :'( :-(

Sanraglak were dying seeing her in this state..ragini was feeling very bad bz Shona is in that condition while saving her..Nikhil & Tanu was happy due to her injury..sanky picked her in his arm & took her to the couch placed in the hall...

Raj : i hv called Doctor & also hv informed the Show team..they will be here in some time..

Kabir : (bring water for Shona) lucky take this and make her drink some water...

Lucky nodes & thanked him..Shona was in deep pain..she was crying...ragini was also crying seeing her..sanlak were having tears in their eyes...

Sanky : (hold her hand) plz don't cry dear..i can't see u like this... :-(

Lucky : (cupped her face) Shona...you are my brave girl...don't cry dear..everything will be all right..

Ragini : (hug her) i m sorry Shona..its all bz of me u got this pain...

Shona : (crying) Di plz don't say like this..its not at all your fault..plz don't blame yourself it gives more pain to me...

Soon doctor & all show team came there..Remo sir & Geeta ma also has come there..Geeta ma sit besides Shona & crasses her hair..swara cry looking at her.. :(

Geeta ma : don't worry swara..everything will be fine..you will alright soon...

Raj told whole incidence to everyone..show team immediately start their work to remove that glass pices..& find out culprits.. Nikhil & co were happy as well as afraid...

Remo sir sent all the contestants to their room except Sanraglak as they knew about their friendship...now only doctor, Remo sir, Geeta ma, sanky, lucky & Lado are there.

Remo sir : Doctor..how is she now ? Does the injury is deep.?

Doctor : we need to take her to the hospital now & do necessary treatments..

Sanraglak : What..?!!! :O

lucky : (teary voice) tell us doctor..what happened..? fracture..? :'(

doctor : no no...its not fracture..but due to twisting her right feet has minor injury...she will be alright in few days..

Shona : (uncertain voice) doctor..will i be able to dance this week...? :-(

doctor keep silence..all were looking at him..he nodes in No...they all become sad..Shona start crying badly...

sanky : (console her) Shona..dear don't think about it now...you will be alright soon... :-(

Remo sir : (sad tone) swara you are personally my favorite dancer..i don't know show producer will let you be in competition or not without performing..

Geeta ma : (hug her) Swara..don't worry...you hv proved yourself..you are indeed one of the best dancer of India..

swasanraglak were broken by this as she may hv to leave the show... Judges left blessing & consoling swara..they told that they will talk with show producer & let them know it 2morow..

they took her to the hospital..Dr did necessary treatment & wrap her leg in medical belt...Dr strictly told her not to put her leg on floor at least for few days..

They come back to "Zara nach k dikha house". sanky has picked her up in his arm & take her to swaragini's room & placed her on the bed..she was sleeping due to pain killer injections...sanlakrag come out of her room..

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They were standing near window of swaragini's room...three of them were having tears in their eyes...they share much needed hug with eo..

Ragini : (crying) its all bz of me only...she is in this state bz...

lucky : (cupped her face & interrupt) no angel...its not bz of you...my kiddo will be more upset if she will come to know that you are blaming yourself...

Ragini : (crying) but what about her dreams..Remo sir told that show producers may not allow her to be in the show...

Sanky : (worried) how will we manage her...? she will be broken after that...(knelt down holding his head) Ohh god...plz do something... :-(

lucky : (sat beside him) (hug him) sanky Shona needs our support..if we will break down like this then who will handle her..

They were crying...then they compose themselves & stand up...they went inside the room & look at Shona sleeping...

sanlak : (together) I will be with Shona tonight...

they both look at each other..Both thought that other one is having more right on Shona...

sanky : (sadly) ok lucky..you stay with Shona..only you hv taken care of her till now...so..tc of MY PRINCESS

lucky : so what..you idiot...but the day you hv proposed her..its your duty to take care of her..so you stay with her..n tc of MY KIDDO

Ragini : (crying ) you both are very bad... :'( you forgot me..i m her Di..she is my kiddo too..its my right to take care of her...you both can't stop me..i will stay with her..

Shona has wake up when they were discussing who will be with her..she smile seeing their care & concerned for her...she was crying.. she sat taking bed support..

Shona : (smile with tears) hey..you all will stay here..you idiots..bz i know non of you will able to sleep if you will not stay here...

Sanlakrag : Shona...!!!!!

They went near her & all sat in bed besides her..they were about to ask her many questions but...

Shona : (smile) b4 you all shoot your questions on me..let me tell you that i m fine...its not paining much..n (sadly) i will accept whatever show producers decision is...so don't worry...

lucky : (hug Shona) ya..that's like my brave girl..

Ragini : (worried) i hope they will take decision in our favour only...

Sanky : (kissed Shona's forehead) (hug her) you hv really done a very good job today my princess...i love you so much.. (with teary voice) nd i m so proud of you MISS BRAVE BEAUTY...

Shona : (smile with teary eyes) I love you too MR. SENTY...

Swasan smile at eo emotionally...sanky again took her in to his tight embrace...Raglak adored them...they also joined them...they share emotional group hug...

Lucky : ( try to change topic) (to swasan) Ohh god...you both are actually Tom & Jerry...even in this situation u r continuing your naming ceremony.. :-P

They all laugh... :-D

still they were upset & scared with respect to Shona's journey in the show...they also knew that all of their conditions r same...

Sanraglak were pretending normal for Shona...& there Shona was composing herself for her prince..her lucky..& her Di.. :-(

Lucky : (angrily) we need to find the one who has planned all this against ragini...

Sanky : (angrily) ya..correct lucky..we will not leave them..bz of them Shona is in this condition...

Ragini : (anger) hmm..i m having dought on kavita...i think she may hv done this to win dance face off..

Sanlak : (thinking) Ohh ya...it can be possible..lets go and confront her..(they were abt to stand up)

Shona : (stop them) no guys ..not now..she will get her punishment..ragini will give her..(to ragini) Di..we all know that no one can beat you in classical...now you need to throw her out of the show with your performance...it will be her punishment...

Sanlak : (oppose) But...

Ragini : (interrupt) Shona is right..this week will be the last week of her in the show...

Sanlak agreed..Then they all share group hug...they greet eo good night..

then sanky went on left side of Shona & took her in his arm & they both sleeps on the right side of the bed & raglak sleeps on the left side in same position..

the size of bed was normal dublebed only...but both the couples were sleeping hugging very tight to their partners as if they are one only...they doze off praying god not to make Shona leave the show...

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Next day in the hall,

all were waiting judges to come and give decision of show producers...Marzi sir, Remo sir & Geeta ma come there..all greet them good morning...all were standing & Shona was sitting on couch...

Marzi sir : i come to know about yesterdays incidence...i m sad with your injury but i must say you are very brave girl..i m proud of you dear... O:-)

Geeta ma : (cupped her face) how are you dear now..? are you ok ?

Shona : (smile) yes mam..its lil better than yesterday...thank u so much for your concerned Geeta ma..

Lucky : (worried) Remo sir...hv you talked with producers..?

Ragini : (almost in tears) plz tell us sir...what's their decision...?

Sanky : (tensed) they will not make Shona leave the show..hena..?

Remo Sir : (with heavy heart) we hv talked with them..we also told them that how strong dancer you are..!! you hv a capability to win the show...

sanraglak were watching him with heavy heart...but Shona seems to be calm..Remo sir look them all & finally said...

Remo sir : (in one breath) Its written in show's contract that if any contestant is not able to perform then they hv to left the show...

Geeta ma : (hold her hand) and doctor has told us that he will not allow you even to put your leg down on the floor bz of your injury...

Marzi sir : (upset tone) i m sorry to say dear but that means as you can not perform so you hv to leave the show... :-(

PRECAP : Elimination...

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Plz share your views friends about this part...

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Awww!!! So now Swara is going to leave the show...but SwaSan had a couple dance challange na... If Swara will not perform then he'll also be unable to perform...
I think Sanky will make some idea to make Swara perform... As it's a couple dance ...

And my Ragini will surely win in classical dance off...

Waiting for the next update eagerly...πŸ˜ƒ