Ratri TS: kuch toh hai.. Shayad Pyaar Part 3 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Lovely update. Trisha is a brave girl, how nicely she escaped from the trap. The dressing scene is nicely written. So Raghav already had a dress for her, how romantic. Now both of them together, obviously the criminal can't escape. Awesome.
Waiting for next part.

Thanks dear. Right,when both of them works together its impossible for criminal to escape. 
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: 1973deepak


Thanks uma. The question is correct that why raghav has purchased such a beautiful dress for his boss or friend or somethong else. you will know in next update. Uma please update your story I am eagerly waiting for the second part


I have started writing hopefully I will be able to update tonight apparently it's very long
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07


I have started writing hopefully I will be able to update tonight apparently it's very long

Will wait for it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3  

 At Raghav's Residence   

Trisha - "kaisi hint Raghav"   
Raghav - "tumne is letter kuch ajeeb notice kiya"   
Trisha - "Ajeeb!! matlab" 
Raghav - "iske letters"   
Trisha - "Ha! RaGhav me R aur G capital letters me hai"   
Raghav - "yehi hamare liye hint hai RG se kya kya ho sakta hai"   
Trisha - "RG mall ya RG park"   
Raghav - "Trisha killer itni public place par Rishab aur tejal ko nahi chupayega koi purani factory"   Trisha - "Raghav Rai Garevar cement factory"  
 Raghav - "Right vo city ke outer me hai Trisha we don't have time hume turant chalna chahiye"   
Trisha - "ha me Rajbir aur Bikram ko bhi vaha pahoochne bolti hoon"  
 
 Driving  

Raghav -"tum tension mat lo me un dono ko kuch nahi hone doonga"   Raghav holds Trisha's hand to console her.   
Trisha - "I have full trust on you."   

 At The Factory   

Trisha and Raghav entered the factory. It was too old factory so there was lot of dust inside it.   Raghav-"Tejal, Rishab "  
Trisha entered another lonely part of the factory and was shocked when she saw both her siblings teid together with ropes.   
Trisha-" Raghav yaha ao"  
Raghav and Trisha free them and was about to move.
 A person shouted-"kaha ja rahe ho Agent Raghav aur Trisha "  
Raghav and Trisha turn around to find a man standing with some of his gang members.  
 Raghav -" kon ho tum aur hum dono se kya chahte ho"  
Person- "Tejal aur Rishab to bahana the tum dono ko yaha tak lane ke liye. me tum dono ko bus marana chahta hoon."   
His gang members put guns on Tejal and Rishab and force them knee down.  
 Tejal - "Di hume bachao mujhe bohot dar lag raha"   
Suddenly Gas was leaked and soon Raghav and Trisha was totaly unconscious. 
When Raghav opened his eyes he found his hands tied with rope and Trisha was lying besides him. 
Raghav some how managed to get up and came near to Trisha. 
Raghav - "Trisha ankhe kholo apni" 
Trisha felt some hot breathe on her face and woke up. 
Trisha - "hum kaha hai" 
Raghav - "I have no idea about this" 
Trisha - "pehle yeh rassi kholani hogi" 
Raghav was looking at her who was still lying on the ground. 
Raghav (smirk) -"ek tareeka hai?"
Raghav slowy came near to her. Trisha's heart beat increases she was blanked at his sudden reaction. Trisha closed her eyes. Raghav observed all her reactions and smilled. Raghav pick a small glass piece which was lying near Trisha's face.  Raghav made Trisha sit with help of wall. 
 Raghav-"kya soch rahi thi tum "
Trisha -" me.. me kaha kuch soch rahi"
Raghav - "mujhe laga mere itne pass ane se tumhe koi problem to nahi" 
While he was talking he keep scratching his rope with the glass piece and free himself. He quickly jerked on Trisha and she was trapped between him and wall and Raghav's hands behind her. 
Trisha - "kya kar rahe ho Raghav?" 
Raghav-"tumhi ne to kaha tume koi problem nahi mere pass ane se so what"
Trisha was lacking words to say she remain quit. Suddenly felt a jerk in her hand. 
Raghav bring her back of her thoughts. - "rassi khul gayi hai" 
Raghav was still smiling on Trisha's flushed face. 
Trisha and Raghav heard some shoot outs and got worried about Tejal and Rishab. 
Suddenly someone open the door. Both were ready to fight with them but when they saw Rajbir opening the door. They got relief that the whole team had taken situation  under their control. 
Trisha - "Thanks guys accha hua tumdono tim par a gaye varna" 

At CBI bureau 

Bikram-"Trisha us admi ka naam hai Akash abhi kuch din pehle riha hua hai aur use tum dono ne hi pakadvaya tha undercover jake"
Rajbir - "thank God finally ab vo jail se kabhi bahar nahi a payega" 
Raghav - "Trisha tejal aur Rishab kaise hai" 
Trisha - "thode shock me hai par will be fine" 
Swati - "Boss  yeh Red dress bohot sundar lag rahi hai ap par, kaha se kharidi" 
Trisha looked at Raghav with a beautiful smile. 
Trisha - "kisi special ne mujhe di hai" 
Raghav was smiling and understood that Trisha had read the note. 
Kuch toh tha dono ki hassi me shayad vo pyaar tha

Hope you like the story. Please like and review. Give suggestions for improvement. ðŸ˜³

Edited by 1973deepak - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Aww such a cute update really loved it a lot .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Aww such a cute update really loved it a lot .

Thanks Tasha 
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Nice cute update. The rope cutting scene was lovely. All in all a nice story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Nice cute update. The rope cutting scene was lovely. All in all a nice story.

Thanks for complements
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Loved the team work of Ratri the way they found out about the clue was marvellous
Just love the rope cutting scene and the hug so cute
Lovely story as such
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Az07

Loved the team work of Ratri the way they found out about the clue was marvellous
Just love the rope cutting scene and the hug so cute
Lovely story as such

Thanks uma.