Nice update.Who is behind the balraj dead?What is Sultan doing with Lisa?I have lot of question.
Nice update.Who is behind the balraj dead?What is Sultan doing with Lisa?I have lot of question.
Originally posted by: srksimran
Awww...Thank youuu so much for dedicating this part to three of us my Sweet sweet heart β€οΈ π€ love uuu Love you too sim baby! See your surprise and excitement is worth all the waitWohooo Souwmy back with a bangπ Haha Bang Bang πyou updated it after so so long but the comeback was an awesome one..just loved this part.Through out the story i could actually picturise RK in my mind...it was like i was watching a movie...so realistic...love ur writing style souwmy.π Thanks sim!So the case is getting interesting...but who was that girl i am still confusedπ Be confused. That's my plan πN now as sultan has entered the story is getting more and more interesting and also confusing Gosh I like this suspense sooo much...but it's killing me tooAww RK was imagining Madhu that's so sweet...pls pls update soon na...I really want to know how Madhu landed up in Sulu's armsπ‘π‘ . I hope now we will get faster updates. Right??Will see that. Hope I get some idea to write the next part πwaiting waiting!! Thanks baby!Thanks for the PM souwmyπ€ Welcome dear π³Love youkisses!! Thanks for the appreciation! * Feeling so happy*
Originally posted by: vishti4eva
intriguing update
finally balaraj dead.sultan gonna rape Liza. Poor girl.hope someone help her
Awesome Update
Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM,Dear.π Welcome priya π
It was So Interesting Part.π Thank you!One Girl killed Balraj.Who is that?π Guess who it is πSultanπ‘ misbehaving with Lisa,it was so sad.π Yeah. No girl deserves to be in her position.I hope someone will help her.π We will seeRk will fine that Killer,waiting for it.πPlease Update Next Part soon.π Trying π__________________________________(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)PriyaCherry.
Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
Firstly *hugs* u are back.. *hugs*
So goood to have to here souwmiya... !! Aww...thanks aani!
And thanks for dedication of the lovely update. Welcome!
. Seeing the update gave me those feeling of watching suspense filled thriller movies..
Back to update... I made you watch movie free of cost π
Whats an updateπ Thank you!. I am overwhelmed π
They collected the reports & investigation going on..analysis..!!
Wah yaar.. What a brain Rk got..
Full detective brain.. Lol...its my brain π€£
Effectively connecting one dot to another..
Soo good..
Now the murderer can be lady..
Rk said soo..
So who can be that lady other than Madhu.. It can be a lot more of them π³
I mean Rk always think about madhu naa.. Madhu is his lover. He can't think about any other girl other than Madhu π‘
And if hero is superhero , so the heroine should be takkar ki naaπ.. Ahaan π
Hehe.. Sleepy constable, rk did his job too..
Fighting sequence well written..
Hmm Madhu is playing on Rk's mind...!!
Now that suullluu..
I guess he is not ullu in this story.. !! That we will see π
Waiting for next..
Awesome update..!! Thank you!
Thanks for pm soUmiYaaa...!!! Love u...π Welcome! Love you too dear π
My like button works sometimes & sleep all times.. So plz dont mind my like..
Originally posted by: kaustavi
Hello, thanks for pm. Welcome dear!
Amazing, suspense- filled story. Thank you!
From prologue, is Madhu fooling
Sultan?? She loves RK and he too
loves her but she doesn't want to
come in front of him, why?? Suspense suspense
And from other parts:::
Rudra is RK's brother and Madhu's
best friend. So, it is easy for them to
meet. Mohan is dead already. Oh!!!
And Radha!!! She has cancer!!! oh no!!
Loved RK- Rudra's surprise for Radha!!
Cake with Radha- Mohan's photo,
wow!!!! Radha became teary!!
Madhu- Malik's convo- funny!! Haha thank you!
Interesting!! I was guessing she
might be doctor from duty convo
and yeah she is doctor. And RK- a
policeman!! Good pair!!
RK- Madhu's meet- wow!!! how romantic!!
Love at first sight for both!!! wow!!!.
And RK- he was easily saying she will
be your bhabi to Rudra!! how fast RK!! RK never wastes time yaar...
And he wants to go to Madhu as patient
to meet her.
And Madhu- desperate to meet RK and
for that troubled Trishna Lol..
A friend in need is a friend indeed π
Someone took a woman forcefully,
is he balraj? And that woman was
only one who killed him??
And that woman- whose life is hell,
who wants to end her life, 7th attempt???
and 34 attempt to run???, who is she???
And I feel, who was in washroom,
when she was attempting to kill
herself was her saviour. Suspense-
suspense!!
RK's investigation!!! waah!! he is genious!!
Who is that woman??? And RK- thinking
about Madhu, wow!!!
Too much suspense- filled!!! But
that makes it more interesting, awesome!!!
loved it!!! Continue soon!!!! Thanks Kaustavi!First of all thank you so much for sparing your time and reading this story from the first. Glad you liked it π
Intresting part.. Thank you π
Smart rk and uski mind kitna sharp hai re baba..
Balraj ko kisi ladki na mara hai kanhi madhu toh nahi..
Madhu ko yaad kar ka rk ka feelings soft hai joshi ka call sa..
Koi toh bachao usa sultan sa usa ladki ko..
Waiting for next part... Cool dear Cool!
Hey Sumi congratz for your new story π₯³ Thank you π
yeah i am late but its better late than never ..π Yeah fact!read prologue and Part 1 now and interesting it is ..βοΈso Madhu know Rudra and in this way she can meet Rk too..loved how Rk and Rudra celebrated Radhaji's b'day ..πso sad she is suffereing from cancer..kinda mysterious story ..πvery well written dear..π π€ Thank you so much deep πAwesome update ..will comment after reading left parts too. Take your time dear !it will take time but will try to read them ASAP ..π³thanks for pm.β€οΈ Welcome!keep writing more and more.ππΌ Will do π³
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