Originally posted by: bawaswift
Hey Uma... hope you have read the reviews...π³
Busy with studies... ??/
Originally posted by: 1973deepak
Awesome, wonderful, mind blowing, beautiful, romantic, cute all are small words for this story.
Thank you glad you liked it. These words really mean a lotAll the emotions are well portrayed. Hats off to your your thinking, how you find such a naught, mischievous, cute, and flirtatious scene between Raghav and Trisha. πSomewhere even I am amazed I am actually not comfortable writing these bold stuffs personallyReva was the soul of the story. I love this character the most. Her cuteness was a topping for this story.Really glad you liked her. It feels so good that a character created by you is loved and acceptedNow coming to the update,Trisha was nervous, why not whenever Raghav challenges Trisha he win for sure.Yes knowing Raghav she had to be nervousHis first attempt was fail as Trisha is a smart lady she used Reva to protect herself from Raghav's challenge.After all she is Raghav's wifeThen Raghav's second attempt in bathroom, the kiss scene was well written. But Reva so innocent knocking the door to her mumma and papa.Bathroom shower scene is my favouriteRaghav's third attempt with Reva finally Trisha kissed him.Raghav's forth attempt again in ladies washroom. This time Trisha become clever, smart, and naughty. Trisha played well with him. Thank god no one came in the washroom that time. πNow Trisha know how to deal Raghav so she played along. Swathi resigned so no one to disturb them.Finally Raghav lose the challenge but Trisha don't want him to lose so she herself agreed for marriage.We always see Raghav winning for a change I made Trisha to win this timeThe Marriage was written nicely.The mehendi scene where Trisha told mehendiwali to hide Raghav's name so that he found difficulty in finding it. But how can this possible for A Keen observer like Raghav Trisha knew it well.Thanks glad you liked it it's difficult to hide something from his eyes.Then the marriage and gift given by Raghav i.e. Box of vermilion. Loved it.I think that is the best gift he can give to her. That is indirectly he is announcing her as his wife.Then comes the demand of Reva of a little baby. π³So romantic and cute.A kid at her age it's natural for her to ask for her siblingOn Raghav's birthday Trisha give him his life biggest gift that she is pregnant!!!!. Raghav loves children so his happiness is expected.His best ever birthday gift she could giveThe story was nicely end up.Glad you liked the endingSeriously I love this story and go crazy for each part. Hope you like such story in future for this forrum πI am really happy this story is loved accepted and I was able to involve every one in to this story. Was nervous many timesLovesAnanya
Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Thanks for updating the story. Will read it asap. Will be there with the review by tonight. Kind of busy during the day. I'm sorry for the delay...
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