ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] - Page 2

An Arnav I know, one of eclectic taste in 90s movies and music, can learn a thing or two about angsting from this one I say!! This is how you do it!

The comparison between childlike innocence and obliviousness is spot on. Innocence is endearing in a child because she knows no better. Reality is messy and dealing with it is the only way to be.

The Aman and Arnav dynamic is interesting. Friendship and romantic love are always just one moment of physical awareness away. Gender has never been a barrier to those - or so I believe... Can't wait to see more of them together.

"Watching" this space now my friend.

PS: It was a tough call between green tea and this little jasmine orange brew you have going...Only time will tell if this is more Rocks or intense Holics

RB...this seems super interesting! Love the name of the Shop for starters...

Will be here to read more, it just has a feel of your many amazing stories!

Thanks for writing...

Liked the first chapter. Anjali seems delusional about shyam like always :-). Lavanya seems sensible to avoid the family and not pressurize arnav as of now.

I could not understand arnav yet. Will wait for next chapters... Nicely written

RES
I love the title of the book ,
Am waiting to read more

New story and that to novel length 👍🏼

The summary was intriguing. So was the first part.

Perfect name for a watch repairing shop. Will it repair more than Arnav's father's watch?

Another perfect in the update was your comparison for innocence and obliviousness. So anjali is the blind one who wants to live in her own build world ignoring the reality. Such cases doesn't make to 'ignorance is a bliss' qoutes. Harsh realities jokt them to wake. Hope she isn't delusional.

Lavanya seems to be sensible one. Is she kn a break feom arnav because of his family?

Aman and Arnav's bond seems interesting. A gay best friend who is falling for Arnav but knows he is in for a heart break.

Looking forward to read more and more.Edited by rk2127 - 8 years ago

Loved the summary along with the chapter...

Very interesting start.  Intriguing. . 

Interesting dynamics between Arnav and Aman 😊. 

Originally posted by: RockBarbie

Not nervous. Not rushed. Nope.

Its intended to be this way.

Sorry, if it was disappointing.

I hope I didn't offend you.. You are one of the authors that touch my heart with your writing..

If it was intended to be like that.. I will just wait for the story to unfold..

You will never disappoint me.. You are amazing..