Arhi TS : Nothing - Everything [ Note of Thanks : Page 13 ]

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Another beautiful one. I am a total stay away from sorrow type person. But this one was sadly happy. I love happy endings. And you totally brought out what Khushi might have been thinking while Arnav didn't turn up on time to the Mandap. The anxiety, the fear and mainly uncertainty that finally creeped in slowly shredding her last shards of hope. And finally the beautiful nothing happened. I couldn't have asked for something better. 



Edited by Sadh123 - 8 years ago

You know those moments in the show when Khushi had been staring at the Agni waiting for her Arnavji, I kept wondering what must a girl be going through in a situation as such. And you have captured and written down the very essence of all that she must have felt. Khushi's agony and hurt pierces through you and makes you understand how after having gone through a multitude of emotions did she come down to feel NOTHING. It makes you realize why she thinks that someone had breathed life into her after she felt him his heartbeats right besides hers.
Edited by sk2405 - 8 years ago

simply superb
loved it

Minion, I always think about this, as how beautifully you understand Arnav-Khushi, their hameshaa wala love.Edited by -FriedriceJi- - 8 years ago

Wowww awesome Api...

U are fab.

So many emotions..

There is something in nothing or everything for everyone.

Edited by dv19 - 8 years ago

brilliant written one-shot..it was so beautiful..I could visualize the scenes written playing in front of my eyes...really very good...the first part of the TS showcased Khushi's pain of waiting for Arnav yet her immense trust in him that he will not leave her and making Khushi's trust win Arnav came and with Khushi coming so far, Arnav realizing his Khushi's pain bridges the gap and takes Khushi in the cocoon of his arms...putting Khushi and his own misery to end and for Khushi nothing else mattered...coming to the 2nd part of the os, things were from Arnav's perspective, the way you portrayed his thoughts that him being selfish, he did not want to let go of the women who has loved him selflessly, that was rather very good...though Arnav knows the truth of his past, yet he is not ready to let go of Khushi who is his home, his solace and his everything...in between this 'nothing and everything' Arnav and Khushi walked into their bliss of new beginnings...really loved the two shot... Edited by MysticRiver - 8 years ago

Fantabulous ts
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm