Originally posted by: MNsTrous
Dekho dekho who is here!
Bimp bimp
Bump jump bump jump..
Hehe..
Ohkay.. Lemme calm down..
And yes.. Unres nahi karunga Previous post.
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Starting se start karte hain.
Hmm sis it was super doopee zooper cute, realistic grippy entertaining, beautiful, amazing and wonderfully written story.
Loved every bit of it.
The bathroom scene of twinkle and her expressions were so real.. Then the bathroom romance and all was so beautifully penned. Wow.
Then the kitchen scene. And bebe..
This story has all three my favorite characters.
Kunj being over romantic was so cute
Then the sofa and hall ticket scene it was so real.
Then Kunj begging the invigilator was so heart touching real loved it.
Then twinkle running towards him omg bought a big smile and that hug to banta hai boss expression when he hugged her before the exam.. Just cute.
Aditi Hmm good gal for giving all the clues and helping our naive twinkly. Yippie amazing plans.
That bunty asking didiji aap pregnant ho.. Rofl answer by twinkle. (oops I over expressed lol)
Then next.. Umm.. Ha.. Story was realistic approach then bebe scene once again it was all mixed and matched brilliantly loved it.
That mirror scene was funny but again real and cute..
Then the reports and twinkle hiding her face under the duvet Hehe so cute.
Lastly the confession. Wow.. That was jhakkas..
I was hoping that Kunj would confess that he already knew it when he saw her secretly throwing the stick in the dustbin.. But chalo realistic approach was awesome to read.
Plz jaldi se 3rd part likho and don't forget to pm.. Me waiting. One of the best story I read. Hehe.
Umm keep writing beautiful stories..
(sorry for delay in Reading.. Firstly I'm very slow reader secondly almost all the time in writing mode.. In fact I never get to read my own FF updates I just push them without proofread or rereading.. Just few scenes only if ppl get mad about them and tell me lol.)
Hmm 10000/10000
Thanks for the pm and changing my mood with this beautiful work. Loved it dil se.
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