Hi All,
I am a silent reader of this forum. Aashlok is my favorite jodi. I have attempted to write a story on them. I am a first time writer...all comments/remarks welcome π
Aashlok are forever
Shlok had tried to revive Aastha's memory by recreating all the important events in their life. But still she did not get her memory. He was very dejected. He told Varad" Dada, I have tried to recreate all the important events in my life with Aastha, but still she has not got even a bit of her memory back. She now understands that I am not a bad person and has become my friend. But I want my wifey Aastha back... What do I do?" He was in tears. Varad consoled him and told him " I have an idea. Try and get Aastha to Anjali Nivas for one day. We shall recreate the division of the house event. Hopefully that should revive her memory because that changed all our lives." Shlok said"Dada wonderful idea. I shall confirm a date and tell you. Vahini and you act like me and Aastha". Varad said " Okay done... we shall get our Aastha back... don't worry."
Shlok was thinking how to take Aastha to Pune to Anjali Nivas. He took a walk to the nearest park to think on this. There he met Suman Aunty who asked him about everybody. She did not know of Anjali's death, Shlok's coma or Aastha's memory loss since she had gone to the US for 1 year to be with her daughter's family. When Shlok explained everything to her she got very angry and said "We will help Aastha revive her memory back." She gathered the other ladies of the ashram and went to Aastha's house and introduced themselves as a ladies association who is helping slum children, especially girls to get educated and become independent. Aastha was impressed with their selfless work and wanted to get involved in it herself. Then they said they have fixed a program in Pune in their ashram for two days next week and she can come if she wants. Aastha agreed. Knowing Indrajeet Sarkar Suman Aunty came and talked to Indrajeet and convinced him to send Aastha with them. Accordingly Suman aunty came along with the other ladies and took Aastha with them in a travel van to Pune. Indrajeet had meanwhile checked about the ashram because he wanted to know if Shlok was involved in this also. But Shlok had made arrangements such that Indrajeet was happy that Shlok was nowhere there.
To convince Indrajeet Shlok purposely came to Indrajeet's house after Aastha had left searching for her. And Indrajeet said " Poor Shlok coming in search of his ex biwi and soon to be my biwi. You cant find her here. She is not here." Shlok acts as if he is disappointed and says he will come again tomorrow. But Indrajeet says she has gone out of town and he cant find her. Shlok acts angry but thinks to himself, "Indrajeet count your days... my Aastha will be with me very very shortly. " and leaves from there.
Now Aastha and the team reach the ashram. Suman aunty asks her to rest for a while. In the evening the ladies tell Aastha that they are taking to a house which belongs to a lady who is no more. But she was a very good lady and they have their first meeting in that house. Suman aunty had already informed Shlok about their plan.
The stage was set...The house was divided with a rope with Sojal and Varad on each side of the rope. When they heard Astha and Suman Aunty entering the house, both Varad and Sojal started arguing and fighting. Aastha enters the house with mixed emotions. She feels she knows this house very well. She thinks..."mujhe kyon aise lag raha hain ki yeh mera ghar jaisa hain. Mein yaha both sara vakth bithaya gaya hoon. Meri life ki bahot important events ithar hua tha...kyon mujhe aisa laghta hai" She keeps thinking and enters the house. As soon as she enters she hears Varad and Sojal fighting. Varad shouts at Sojal saying that he made a mistake marrying her...and says "majoboori mein nibha raha hoon yeh rishta...thum mujhe bhoj lagne lagi ho.." Sojal acts shocked and starts crying... Shlok is watching Aastha from the time she entered the house. She does not know he is there. On listening to these words from Varad Aastha faints and falls down. Shlok comes running and tries to wake her up. He carries her to their bedroom and makes her lie down. Meantime Varad calls the doctor to come urgently. Doctor comes and checks Aastha and says she has fainted. "Although nothing to worry we can only say after she wakes up. We will have to wait for her to wake up" and he goes away.
Shlok is sitting on the floor next to Aastha's bed holding her hand. He is half asleep but keeps saying "Aastha please meri paas wapas aa jao. tumhare bina jee nahi saktha...tum hi mere sab kuch ho...tum hamare pyaar ko kaise bool sakthi ho...i am ready to listen to you chapar chapar whole day long... just please come back to me...please" Aastha wakes up and looks around the room...
I shall complete the story in the next part. How is it so far?????
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