NIBIR FF:hell or heaven updated part 14page 14( 21. 5.16

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Posted: 8 years ago
PROLOGUE 
Kabir Singh rathore I will make your life a living and she burns his photograph
It is nisha gangwal who had lost her family in a fire accident but was it a accident or a cold blooded murder only she and her buaji survived this accident 
B:nisha oh my my kitna time lagaegi ready hone
N:aarahi hoon bua
Nisha's thoughts: your hell has begun tumhe sab kuch heaven lagega par pata nahi chalega kab tumhaare pairon tale zameen khisakh jaayegi and it will turn into hell
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And the ball goes out of the stadium oh my god india has won the match and it is because of kabir Singh rathore 
The crowd has gone wild 
Nisha was the most successful business woman in India and was the one of the best architect of the country but now she was smiling wickedly 
NEXT DAY NEWSPAPER HEAD LINES READ 
KABIR SINGH RATHORE HAS BEEN SELECTED IN THE INDIAN CRICKET LEAGUE 
NISHA'S HOUSE 
ring ring 
Person :Hello 
N:yes 
Person :am I speaking to nisha gangwal the architect 
N:yes par aap 
V:hum viraj singh rathore hai 
N :oh aap toh famous shooter hai na aur aapke bhai famous cricketer hai 
V:haan bilkul sahi pehchaana aapne hum aap ko aaj shaam apne ghar invite karna chahte hai humne aap ko invite bhi bhej diya hai 
N:haan Maine invite dekha main zaroor aaungi 
V:thanks meet you in party bye
N:bye
N:bakra khud chal kar aaraha hai halal hone keliye

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Posted: 8 years ago
I know guys ki I have ended my previous story abruptly but I will try to complete this one upto the mark 
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Posted: 8 years ago
INDEX 
PROLOGUE PAGE 1 
Part 1 page, 1
Part 2 page2 
Part 3 page 4
Part 4page4 
Part 5page5 
Part 6:page 7 
Part 7page 8
Part 8 page 9 
Part 9 page 10
Part 10 page 11
Part 11 page 12
Part 12 page 13 
Part 13 page 13 
Part 14 page 14
Edited by Anasthasia786 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aaila yeh kya tha nisha villain ðŸĪŠ
That is very interesting
Do update soon
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Awesome and interesting ðŸ‘ðŸž
Continue soon in your original speed ðŸ˜‰
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superb ðŸ˜Š
interesting start...😃
do continue soon !!

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part :1
It was evening and they are were in the party venue 
Pe:congratulations kabir yaar tu toh Indian cricket team mein select hogaya 
K:yeah thanks man Saurav 
Saurav was kabirs best friend 
Nisha enters venue wearing a long white gown she was looking like an angel in heaven 
G1:dekho yaar yahaan nisha gangwal bhi aayi hai 
V:good evening miss. Nisha I hope you don't mind calling you that 
N:good evening Mr. Rathore 
V: pls come in
He makes her meet kabir 
V:yeh kabir hai miss. Nisha 
N: pleased to meet you 
K: pleasure is all mine and they both shake hands 
Someone calls viraj 
V:excuse me 
N:congratulations Mr. Rathore for your selection in the team 
K:thank you and please call me kabir 
N:toh bolo kabir kya plans hai aage karne ke 
K: plans toh yeh hai ki I want you to build a house for me 
N:ohk toh hum kal milkar iss baarein mein baat karenge 
K:thank you aur Maine yeh suna ki aap sabko itne jaldi ghar banane ke liye maanti nahi 
N:common kabir pls don't address me as aap I am comfortable with tum
Aur baat aayi aapke iss proposal ko accept karne ki toh Tumhare liye ghar manana is my pleasure 
The party goes on beautifully with no dramas it was like life was as perfect as heaven 
Next day kabirs home 
N:toh bolo kabir kyun banana chahte ho tum ye naya ghar 
K:kuch puraane yaadein hai unkeliye 
N:oh toh location kya hai
K:jaipur wahaan hamara ghar hua karta tha 
Flashes of memories come into their minds
N:karta tha matlab
K:there a fire accident took place and whole place went down along with my family 
Aap ko pata hai Meri dost also died who had same name as yours nisha 
N:oh mujhe kaise pata hoga 
K :yeah right 
N:toh location dekhne kal jaayein 
K:ok main tickets book kardeta hoon 
N:no need hum mere private jet mein jaasakte hai it's more comfortable 
K:waisa hai toh hum mere private jet mein bhi jaasakte hai I thought u would feel uncomfortable 
N:kabir yeh mera kaam hai I don't mind 
K:ohk kal milte hain phir 
Next day at the airport 
N:kabir toh chale 
He turns to see her she was in a beautiful red saree he was just staring at her 
Nisha snapped him out 
N:kya hua
K:nahi woh tum saree 
M:haan actually aaj mere friend ki wedding hai so I asked you to come to jaipur her wedding is at the evening we will see the site and then I will go to wedding 
K:aur main 
N:it's your wish if you want to come in wedding u can otherwise you can go back since I am staying at jaipur for a week 
K:ohk jab ka jab dekhenge 
In the jet 
N:kabir kya soch rahe ho 
K:kuch nahi hamare baarein mein I mean ghar ke baarein mein 
N:oh carry on 
Kabir was continously staring at nisha throughout the flight. 
They reached jaipur and went to the location 
Seeing location nisha was smiling her smile was different it was pure and serene 
Kabir thought that why this smile was different than what he saw yesterday and the day before 
He brushed off his thoughts 
Nisha's thoughts how we used to be friends and now u are my most hated enemy 
Flashes of her playing with kabir come into her mind 
She gets a hold of herself 
N:It is a very good site and it is spacious I will make designs u may choose from them and give any ideas if you wish something special now I have to go it's my friends wedding 
K:main aata hoon Tumhare saath
N:are you sure 
K:yup 
N:like this 
K:right I need to shop and u are going to help me because I am very confused person in selections 
N: okay 
They go for shopping someone clicks their photos 
Kabir goes for trying sherwanis 
He comes wearing a beige sherwani looking dashing 
Nisha stares him for the first time she noticed his features he has grown into a handsome young man she hadn't noticed due to the hatred towards him 
K:nisha kahaan khogayi lagta hai tera wicket bhi down hai 
N:mujhe na sab samajh Aata hai 
K:kya samajh aata hai bata na 
N:tu kitna K hai 
K;aur mere K se know kitna j hai jaanu 
Nisha stamps his feet 
K:aah nisha ki bacchi, nakchadi hai tu jugadu 
N:main nakchadi nahi hoon 
K:tu nak... 
He stops in between 
K:nisha pata hai tu mujhe meri nisha ki yaad dilaati hai I don't know why I feel connected to you tu mujhe apni dikhti hai 
N:kise bhi apna mat banana kabir apne bhi waqt ki tarah hote hai aaj Tumhare saath hai kya pata kal dushman banjaaye 
Kabir was confused but brushed off his thoughts 
PRECAP : NIBIR AT THE WEDDING 

Edited by Anasthasia786 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsome start
different or interesting concept
nice prolouge
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update 👏 
Very interesting... Continue soon!!!!
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Superb update ayesha 👏
Ayseha i want to tell you one think that your first story was awesome but this story is mind blowing and it became my favourite story now ðŸ˜ģ
Seriously now i am loving this alot
I think there is some misunderstanding
Update super soon can't wait