Kalyug - TS - Part 3 on Pg 5 - Page 5

Karaali

@Karaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96
Oh
My
God

What just happened 😆

My heart was literally beating so fast when i read this
And that happens only in very rare stories
So wow!

Kudos to u man
Amazing writing
Amazing plot
Everything was just awesome 👏

I am glad the story was able to hold you! Thanks for reading and encouraging me.

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Karaali

@Karaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: BubliBag
what the hell happened
No words again just no words

I know!! I start writing a romantic story and then it takes a dark turn before I know it. 😆

Thanks for reading and encouraging me.!!

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950842

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Katori

Will write something after the marriage depending on the turn the story takes. Thanks so much for encouraging me.

Yayyy!! Cannot wait for it :D

Thanks for encouraging me too. You are one of the coolest people I've met on this forum (:

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LiveLoveLaugh96

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Katori

I am glad the story was able to hold you! Thanks for reading and encouraging me.

I encourage u because u deserve it 👏

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sabihaa.

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Posted: 7 years ago

You have honestly blown my mind away with this story. It's so dark and yet it's realistic in a way. Yug is fed up and what better way to punish his love and the cow who's trying to come in between them?

I honestly wish this fic was longer, I would have loved to see Yug taking revenge - he would know who mixed the poison in the drink. That said, it's a perfect ending, Gauri loses & Kali is faced with the consequences of her actions.

I really do want more writing on KaYu from you - you do them such justice and it's such a pleasure to see.

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Karaali

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sabihaa.
You have honestly blown my mind away with this story. It's so dark and yet it's realistic in a way. Yug is fed up and what better way to punish his love and the cow who's trying to come in between them?
I honestly wish this fic was longer, I would have loved to see Yug taking revenge - he would know who mixed the poison in the drink. That said, it's a perfect ending, Gauri loses & Kali is faced with the consequences of her actions.

I really do want more writing on KaYu from you - you do them such justice and it's such a pleasure to see.

I am glad you like it. I appreciate your encouragement. I don't delibrately set out to write dark stuff, but most my stories turn dark anyway. 😆😆. I wish I could do more of a feeling/romantic piece. May be one day.. 😆

Thanks for reading.

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