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Posted: 9 years ago
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There are so many amazing sfenes are happening and one brillant one is coming on monday . So i thought why dont i write smoething . Well actually its one of the forum member post inspired me to write it . Hope u like it :)


OS : BATTI GULL

"ouch .. miss bose ? " dev looks at sona giving all the scare looks that could get any normal person to turn into ashes . What was he suppose to do anyway her no so light foot has crushed his feet for the tenth time from the time electricity has gone off . Even stupid inventor is not working . First he was all planning to avoid after he came to know that she has listened to recorded voice and with speed sonakashi 's mind works it wont be late she figured it all out and dev becomes a dead meet in a second .

" aap ghurte rahiye mujhe koi faraq ni padata waise bhi adhre me khuch dikh ni raha " sona tries to find her mobile but unfortuntel she has forgeten it in the kitchen and it is very far and also quite dark , to top it all our dear friendly sona is not much of friends with darkness . Even this darkness is making her blabber without thinking & hit -bang her head or feet with anything comes in her way well she has never been good at the blind fold game anyway so it make sense that her senses literally run away scared like little girl at time like these . Suddenly she felt herself being attacked on her back with something oh.. no.. its someone and she is falling ...

*thudd*

" ohhh ... god mr dixit get up from me , you are heavy ...wait remmber this time you collied with me ok ... its your mistake " sona made sure this time she not blamed for it actually even after being fall on the floor so hard that she might not be able to sit properly for week - her bum hurts * ( thats happen ok not her fault ) with that the warm sexy hot body of dev being on top of hers uhhh !!@ stop it sona not sexy or.. hot .. it must be the global warming ... ahhh !! What sona meant is that heavy bone breaking obodhor body . but deep inside she is happy that finally he is the one making a mistake .

" stop it miss bose "


" its doc bose"
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...


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" mr d...dixit k..ha h aap ? Aise koi gyab hota h gya .. aapko dar lag raha hoga mr .dixit haina ... so aise gyab nahi hote m hu na ... dono sath m rahte h .. samna karte h adhre ka .. Dont get scared ok " sona gulps on not finding dev in the room where is he vanished all of sudden leaving her all alone . She tries to call dev her voice get very meek at the end . She i hell scared . Oh god who use such scary curtains . She feels like some one is hiding behind the curtains . She takes very slow steps towards the curtain her heart rate increasing with every step . She slides the curtains and see no one there she sighs of relief even a small silly smile makes way out .


" andhera kayam rahe !!! "

" ahhh !!!!!! " sona runs away hearing the scary voice banging with white ghost , bed , table and twice with the door.


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She feels a hand on her shoulder and screms but dev put his hand on her mouth from screaming furture and his other hand holding the candle . Sona heart feel so happy seeing dev where was he gone leaving her alone to deal with the white monster .


Sona hugs dev tight , put her head on his warm chest feelijg relaxed .

" where were you dev i got so scared . Please dont leave me alone like that " sona looks at dev her eyes wet with tears .
Dev brush her tears away with his figners and he cups her cheek in his hands saying in a very deep sweet voice

" i will never leave you alone i promise . " dev hugs sona again brushing her hairs with his hands and a small smile tugging his lips and his eyes looking at the white bed sheet thrown at the sofa in front of him .



=============== the end ==========

I know it was too chessy heee... sry i can come with this only in this short time .

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Choclate... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey its amazing dear
Very beautifully written
BTW what's your name?
Loved 2nd part most, mr. d dixit k kahan hai aap?
Waise didn't get the last part? Can U tell what's it? Pretty Please.

With Lots Of Love,
Anushka

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome OS :)
Superb :)
Loved it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww! I loved it so so much!
Do write more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really enjoyed reading your OS.😊
Its really good, there were a few typos but they were not obvious.
I specially loved and enjoyed the moment of mischief at the end of the OS. That was a good addition.👏
I hope you continue writing stories. If you plan to, tell me, I'd love to read them.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hayeee😳😳
what an os👏👏 lovely
how cute
love that part"I will never leave u alone, i promise"
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sooo sweeet...
Sona was so scared
Amazing one
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Choclate...

Hey its amazing dear
Very beautifully written
BTW what's your name?
Loved 2nd part most, mr. d dixit k kahan hai aap?
Waise didn't get the last part? Can U tell what's it? Pretty Please.

With Lots Of Love,
Anushka






Hi am sonali 😳 in the last part dev was looking at the white bed sheet with wich he covered himself and scared sona . So when sona ran away scared he took that off came bhind her and act like inocent 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Awesome OS :)

Superb :)
Loved it :)




Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LilyPotter

I really enjoyed reading your OS.😊

Its really good, there were a few typos but they were not obvious.
I specially loved and enjoyed the moment of mischief at the end of the OS. That was a good addition.👏
I hope you continue writing stories. If you plan to, tell me, I'd love to read them.😉



Sorry but typos is my second name and too lazy to correct them 😆 anyway i wrote that on my mobile my keypad sucks 🤢

Thanks for liking it 😳

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