ROSID FF : PHIRSE JANAM LEGA TERE LIYE

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey buddies...A big hi to all of you... So let me introduce myself...Myself Neeraja, you can call me Neeru. You may better know me if I tell my cousin sister's name- Roshni (Neeraja is her official name and mine too). I'm really excited about entering the RoSid world, because I've been a diehard RoSidian all these years though I have been silent all the while. But I'm equally saddened by the fact that I'm joining on a very wrong time when our RoSid is ending onscreen. Actually I'm still to come out of the blow because I came to know about this just a few days ago .I was keeping quiet busy with my works and so wasn't just going through any reports or stuff and even Roshni didn't tell me because we were having exams. But nevertheless, I don't think RoSid is ending or dying or whatever because AviMan has managed to build in me a trust that makes me believe so. I too felt writing very essential because my brain is in an explosion stage and if I don't write anything on RoSid now, it's going to break for sure. So I would try writing some stuff...I don't know if I can entertain you all...But hope you guys will tolerate me...



So...I'm starting my first fan fiction on my favorite couple RoSid. Actually I'm really upset with the way those writers dealt Roli's death and the news of Siddhant falling for Prerna. I really wanted him to die with Roli and didn't at all like the way CVs projected as if Roli is just Simar's sister and not Siddhant's wife...I don't know what you people think about her, but I don't like that creature named Simar. Sorry Rosidians if I hurt you...But I can't help it. So now, I'm writing a story on RoSid which may seem quite illogical. But I just want to justify the fact that Janam janam ki saathi he hum' and of course Jeeyengi tho saath saath, marengi tho vo bhi saath saath...' with my Rosid...Hope you guys won't throw eggs at me...So I'm beginning hoping all hearty cooperation from you friends...



So the concept is this...I'm taking the present story of SSK, that is what happening in SSK right now, in to 1990s. So our present RoSid, is ending in 1990s okay...Now after 26 years...In 2016, we will get to see our RoSid who takes birth again to complete the promise of seven lives...They bump to each other and how will they fall in that love which is eternal...let's see...



I know it's too stupid and I may put my sister to shame...But please adjust...I'm mad on RoSid...I hope you're all okay with my language...if I'm incoherent or unclear, you can tell me with all freedom...So please say your comments so that I can know your hearts...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE



"Roli...please don't leave me...Please don't leave me yaar..." sobbed Siddhant as he held his pinky finger with hers. "Si...Siddhantji...I'm...I'm supposed to leave you now...If I had a choice, I'd never have let my Siddhantji alone...but what to do? It's my fate... But don't weep...please stay strong...Please smile..." she said difficultly. "How can I Roli...How can I?" asked Siddhant. "Don't you remember the promise, jeeyengi tho saath saath marengi tho vo bhi saath saath' then how can you leave me alone?" he asked shaking her by her shoulders forgetting that she's ill. But nothing fell to Roli's ears. She had already started the journey to the infinity. "Roli..." he screamed out as he felt her leaving him. Her pinky finger still in his reminding him of that promise of staying together always. The whole Bharadwaj family cried aloud and Simar almost made it a archetypal soap moment. Now Siddhant couldn't see anything. .he had totally lost his fortitude. His Roli, his life, his jaan is lying lifeless and he couldn't tolerate any drama now. "Stop it...Stop all of you..." shouted him making the room to sink in to a doom of silence. "not a word more...I've lost my Roli...you all have nothing to do with it...Nothing...You always had taken this girl for granted...You always have used her...You all had never cared about us or our relationship...Always...always you people let us separate for your own selfish reasons...And Simar...You had always used this sister of yours as your weapon...For you to fight with your enemies...For you to play with.,..But she, she loved you sincerely...I wish...I wish if my Roli lived her life as my wife rather than your sister, Then she would have lived her life...her heart would have been beating still...But no...she did mistake...I won't slap you because this hands of mine will get spoilt if I do that...My hands are purified by my Roli's now...So...I can't touch any street dog and make myself impure..." now Mathaji had really forgotten that Siddhant was in pain of losing his very life. She started blaming him for shouting at her ladli Simar. But Siddhant wasn't listening. He slowly caressed his Roli's hairs and kissed on her forehead. "Roli...I have promised to be with you always...i can't break my promise...So wherever you go, I will follow you...And now, when death has taken you, it can't spare me...it can't spare me...I'm also coming with you... But listen this Roli...we'll get together in the cycle of time again...And then we'll complete this incomplete story of ours.. We'll prove that Janam janam ki saathi he hum'." He said this and before anyone could stop him, he took the surgical bade that he had taken from the table and cut his neck with it. As the Bharadwaj family looked the scene with dread and pain, Siddhant's red hot blood dropped in to their intertwined pinky fingers and his eyes closed forever indicating that he had started the journey to reach his Roli.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome concept dear n fab prologue
Ur ff is just amazing how we want see rosid in ssk we can see here
Waiting for updates n ur nt putting ur sis in shame dnt worry n continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely concept dear.u will definitely have our suport.so touching .and loved those dialogues of sid against simar.these dialogues will never be given in ssk.waiting for more .and happy to see u neeraja .its ok if avika left ssk its not rosid's end.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely concept dear.u will definitely have our support.so touching .and loved sid dialogs against simar waiting for more .and happy to see u neeru.its ok if avika left ssk its not rosid's end. waiting for nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow amazing concept..infact i luvd each n every word...welcome to rosid world n also simar haters grp😉...n ya they all took roli as granted...such a dumbo bw family...waiting eagerly fr next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome neeraja to Rosid world happy to see one more Rosidian it's just awesome we all Rosidians wanted Rosid to die but these stupid CVS separated them now we will fulfill our that wish through ur ff that simar archetypal drama was funny i just hate her she always do drama only & u r definitely not putting ur sis to shame dear continue soon we can't wait we r greedy people he he
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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome to rosid world neeru fab prologue and awesome concept dear can't wait for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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well come to Rosid aviman world neeru I'm big fan of Rosid aviman
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome /neeru di happy to see you concept update all really beautiful waiting for next eagerly

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