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Dear Nita,
When I first started reading, I was like, no, not tennis (yes I am not a tennis fan, in fact, I do not watch any sports). But there is a certain magic in your writing and I thoroughly enjoyed Swara's surprise (maybe it was the SwaSan spell but I think the enchantment was in your style🤗)
The start quote - The little things that lead you to realise you are in love - how true - we often overlook the small things - a smile, a hug, a text message, remembering little things, doing little things which take no effort and yet mean so much.
The cruise date - Sanskaar gifting the dress which he had noted that Swara liked and Swara worried that Sanskaar was spending a little too much on a relationship which was, still to be firmed up (the little things, once again, their concern for each other - they are quite in love with each other and their unwillingness to acknowledge it adds to the charm) though they already consider each to be family.😊
Casual dance - not this time round - not when he knows that she wants to give this marriage a chance, not when he is no longer immune to her touch. And she feels it too - both her body and heart and part of her mind are surrendering to him.
Yes, She realises that she is halfway to loving him (half way???? - she is still holding out but guess she will soon completely fall for him). And it is love that makes her so worried for him and also gives up going to see the final match live.
Sanskaar, jealous - that is another form of love. And he realises that he cannot live without her and true to his nature decides not to tell her because he does not want to force her decision. God!!!! - these two idiots - in love with each other and scared that confessing it might force to stay in the marriage.
But that glimpse into future - 2 years and they are still together. And that makes me happy.
Lovely update as usual.
love,
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago