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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -Suganthi-

Pree πŸ€— so glad you turned this into an SS.
Loved the way the story is shaping up. Khoon bhari maang, I actually thought that's how she will end up marrying Rudra in the beginning of the show. Nice to see you explore that.
Also Aman bhaisa is in full form. One of my favorite characters.
You ended it with an eye lock not fair. Update soon



πŸ˜ƒ Hey Rithu.. πŸ€—

So happy to know that you are liking the story so far and how it shaping.. πŸ˜›
The way Rudra had marked Paro while filling her mang with blood in RR was intense and so raw.. Like they dont need words or any ceremonial thing to declare they are for one another..
(I tried using bit of that) 😳.
Aman was my favorite too..
Wait is over...Posting the next chapter now.. πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 8 years ago
#82


Hello everyoneπŸ˜ƒ


Firstly, sorry for making you wait long.. I got busy with work and didn't got time to write.


So here posting next part.. Hope you will like it.. πŸ˜‰




PART -  4

 

For a second all she could see was hazel brown eyes and slow spreading of his irises in them as he held her in his arms, his eyes boring into hers.

Her hands felt warmth of his body holding his biceps and it made her feel warm. On the other hand Rudra felt..how soft and fragile she was, holding her.. He could smell the sweet fragrance of her..which was captivating and he involuntarily bended just a fraction closer to her..smelling her fragrance but his phone rang and saved him. He immediately jerked his head straight hearing the phone ring, both of them snatched their hands away from each other and together moved a step back from each other getting self conscious.

 

Rudra frowned.. bothered at his fraction of loss of control on himself.. thought "what he was even thinking?!... or... Actually was not thinking anything at all at that moment!!." Shaking his head a little he pushed such thoughts away and walked to side table to answer the call.

 

Being the soldier means your work can call you at any hour of a day or night. At 9pm.. his duty calls him. Telling Aman he was coming, he kept the phone on table and turned to see her fidgeting with kurta sleeves..he told her to fold them and also pajama ends..if she doesn't want to fall and break her head.

 

Paro tried doing it..pulling the sleeves up loosely. Rudra looking at what she was doing, went up to her, pulled her arm and folded the sleeves of kurta for her, telling to do like this. Paro looked at him in surprise thinking "why he was doing all of this??"

 

She was not able to figure him out.. As the very first time when they met.. he had saved her from the goons, next she got to know he was BSD officer but she had known people in BSD are cruel and kill people mindlessly.. still.. he created a little doubt in her that maybe all BSD men are not the same as he saved her but next she saw him shooting her groom..killing him and whole baraat and that time she knew for sure she was wrong about him..he was the same like any BSD officer.. a Brutal killer.. he captured her, asked her harshly many times to confess what she knew about the "terrorist activity", "arms smuggling".. there were words like these which she heard first time in her life.. It was yesterday only when he fooled her to think that she could escape and he made her run in hot desert till she fainted.. then why now show concern..? why help me?..

she couldn't understand him.. one day he becomes "Protector" and other day "Beast".

 

Rudra changing into his jeans, white t-shirt with brown leather jacket left to his office on his bike.

 

 

...At BSD office...

 

Aman told Rudra about the location of place which their captive confessed infront of Rudra. During interrogation Rudra had shot him on his thigh.. he had accurately shot the bullet that it didn't hit the bone or any muscle but just puncher the flesh and brushed past him.. Rudra wanted to place fear of death in him and it worked...as the man confessed he knows where about of Tejawat's men but he didn't know if Tejawat was also there. He was just a poor man who was paid to keep an eye on Hawelli and what BSD officers were doing there. He had talked to one of Tejawat's man two days back and that time they were hiding in Sikandarabad which was five to six hours away from Chandangarh.

 

They discussed the plan and decided six member team will go.. Rudra, Aman with four soldiers, it was crucial to capture Tejawat's men alive than to kill them. So for that few soldiers were required in this mission.

They decided to leave tomorrow afternoon so that they reach Sikandarabad by evening.

Rudra checking the time in his watch..it was past midnight.. ordered Aman to rest as there is lot to do tomorrow. When Rudra was about to leave..

Aman asked "Sir..what about Parvati?"

Rudra gave him questioning look.. so Aman asked "Where will you keep her?"  

They clearly know this mission/plan to capture Tejawat's men will take at least two, three days or more..they can't be sure as it depend on the mission. Parvati is assumed to be dead by all, so it was necessary to keep her away from anybodies eye..specially now when they know Tejawat has spy's  moving around Chandargarh and they are also keeping eye on BSD. Aman gave him the idea that Hawelli can be safe for her as it was also Rudra's home..! 

He didn't answered Aman's question and left office room saying "Leave this upon me.."

 

 

 

 

...Rudra reaching his BSD tent...

 

The first thing he see... Paro sleeping in one corner of the tent...On the floor...covered with shawl given by Aman, she was sleeping with curled up legs as it was cold now at night. He for some reason got angry and felt uneasy seeing her like this..

 

He marched inside the tent straight to her.. he slowly bended down and sat on his one leg beside her..observing her.. thinking in anger "why she is sleeping like this on floor?! When there is a bed here.."

Pressing his lips together he raised his hand and brought it close to her knees to pick her up but he stopped and slowly closed his hand feeling unsure and self conscious, he looked at her face which looked peaceful in sleep but suddenly she shivered slightly with cold and he just... like a reflex reaction.. He put his arm under her knees and other around her shoulders and brought her body close to his chest, she feeling warmth from his body unknowingly turned her face towards him, putting her head in crook of his neck and he forget to breathe..

Slowly he rises with Paro in his arms... and walked to the bed, bending and carefully placing her on bed..not to disturb her sleep. But while placing her on bed his face and lips accidently brushed on her forehead... and he immediately backed off from the bed after placing her, as if he felt some jolt when their skin came in contact..

He just gazed at her for few seconds.. pressed his lips and thought "Whenever she is in close proximity he for some hell of a reason.. lose his senses or what..!",  "Maybe it is because of exhaustion that he is losing his mind". He took a deep breath as if trying to get in control , moved to the chair and placed his feet up on the stool.. he involuntarily looked at her sleeping form and Aman's question pounded his mind..

Gazing at her face he decided what to do next...then putting his head back and closing his eyes..he called it a night.

 

 

 

 

...Next day in morning...

 

Paro woke up stretching her arms, feeling good as she finally had a good night sleep after many days.. she felt comfortable...actually too comfortable to be on floor.. Something was odd!!

 Than next second she felt soft cushion and mattress under her and instantly she opened her eyes, jumped to sit on bed in surprise. Realizing she was actually on bed and not floor...still covered in shawl.. holding the shawl close to her chest, she wondered who shifted her to bed?..Was it HIM?!...

"But when he returned at night?".. feeling conscious that he carried her to bed when she was in sleep. "Was she in such a deep sleep that she didn't feel anything?!"  Maybe..yes!...as in past couple of days she hardly slept.

She continued to think about him.. that.. "She should be angry at him that he carried her to bed.. no... His bed... when she was asleep..couldn't he just wake her up than carrying her in his arms..!"

She doesn't know why it was so bothering her as it was not the first time he carried her.. But yes, like every other time.. she was not in conscious when he carried her.

 

 

In a while Rudra came back in same clothes from yesterday.. and said to her in hurry that they are going from here.. Paro asked "where?", his eyes met hers for a second and replied "I don't have time for your questions" and pulled a bag from his cupboard holding it in one hand than walked towards her and held her arm in his other hand and walked out. She kept asking "Where are you taking me?".

He pushed his bag in back of the jeep and then pulled her to sit in back of the jeep, when she sat there.. he brought some black cloth and turned her back to him to tie it around her eyes... Paro tried to move away from him so he hissed in anger..telling her if she don't listen to him then he will use force and that might hurt her..so it is better for her to listen to him.. she asked "But why are you blind folding me?", Rudra in annoyance.. held her arm then tied the cloth on her eyes.. answered her "So that you don't run away.."

 

After reaching the destination.. he without opening Paro's blind fold, held her wrist and brought her down from the jeep.. he walked toward the house holding her wrist..

At the door of house he stopped...stared at it for few second as few dark past memories flashed infront of his eyes, this was the house where he and Dilsher spend few years after that woman abandoned them. Dilsher had brought him here.. they had left the Hawelli because it got unbearable for them to stay there, hearing painful taunts of Kakisa and neighbors each day...This was the house where he spent his childhood waiting for HER to come.. feeling the pain and anger his grip on Paro's hand got tight and Paro even blind folded could feel change in his emotions.. could feel his anger radiating from his hold on her wrist and it made little afraid.

Rudra gulped down his pain controlling his emotions and looked at Paro and felt little relax as he was here solely for his mission and purpose. He wouldn't let his past effect his work, he brought Paro here for her safety as keeping her in Hawelli would not be safe, where Kakisa and his family would cause hindrance in his work and life making his life more difficult than it was already. This was safe place as nobody knows about this house not even his kakisa's family.

 

Entering the house Rudra stayed for few mins. as he had look after some work before going on mission but before leaving he told her that she will stay in this house, showed guest room to Paro which she can use. Before she could ask any question he left.

Leaving her alone in the house... she wandered around... there were two bed rooms and one guest room, kitchen, hall where all the furniture was covered with cloth, Paro pulled the cover from sofa to unwrap it.. it was antique teak wood sofa. She walked in kitchen which was vacant, seeing dust covered kitchen shelf.. sensing this house might be closed for years, walking behind the kitchen there she found an iron gate and opening it she stepped out in small backyard which more or less looked like junkyard, in corner she saw stairs which most probably were for the terrace.

 

 

...After half an hour...

 


Paro heard sound of main door opening.. expecting it might be HIM...

She continued to remove the cover from the bed in the guest room but then she heard a loud voice calling "RUDRA..."

And the person pushed the main door so hard that it banged on the side wall loudly.. Paro trembled hearing it and the cover slipped from her fingers.

Thinking  "who can be here?..calling HIM?.."

The man shouted again and this time more loudly... "..RUDRAA..."

Paro winced at it.. fidgeting with hands.. thinking "What to do?", "Who was he?".

She slowly started to walk towards her room door and waited...she could hear even from closed door that the man has walked inside the main door.

Taking deep breath she opened her rooms door slightly and peeked out and saw the man's back...


But hearing the sound of door opening...


The man turned to her and Paro eyes got wide...





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So how was it?? πŸ˜›


Would love to know your thoughts..  Do share..

Thanks for reading it.. πŸ˜‰


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Edited by pree_28 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Loved part 4 πŸ‘
Rudra made paro comfortable, worries about her even though in denial πŸ˜ƒ
He has brought her to the old place where he grew up, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Lovely Update Dear..
Its really Awesome.,
If d phone s nt disturbed thm.,Rudra ll kiss her definitely..
Loved Rudra's worries for Paro& Made her sleep in comfortable bed..
Rudra leaves her in his old house bt who s d man calling for Rudra..
I think its Dilsher who s d 2nd person kno abt Tis House...
Thx for Update..
Eagerly Waiting for Nxt Chapter..
 
Love
Bhavya
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
You have left it at a cliff hanger ! It is a beautiful story and you write so well. Paro and Rudra are such wonderful characters and I am so happy you are writing this story on them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Both are drawn towards each other against their will.
They are not able to understand their reaction to the other. 

Waiting to see who the visitor is. Hope he does not pose any danger when Rudr is away. Could it be bapausa.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
Very nice Pree πŸ‘. I was happily caught in the web you were spinning until HE showed up. I really hope it is Bapusa and not Sumer/ Samrat or Danveer. (mainly because I always wondered how things would have turned out if it was just the three of them living under the same roof 😊.
I am very happy to read your work. It's remarkable the amount of details you add when you write each update.
Waiting for the next part eagerly πŸ€—

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Posted: 7 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved part 4 πŸ‘
Rudra made paro comfortable, worries about her even though in denial πŸ˜ƒ
He has brought her to the old place where he grew up, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm πŸ˜ƒ



πŸ˜ƒ Thanks buddy..
Yes, he cares, get worried for her but according to him its because she is his witness.. lets see how long
he go in denial πŸ˜‰
Yes, this house is which in one episode Rudra take Paro and tell her his past and how he grew up
there and confess about Laila.. I used this house in my story 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: -BhavyaEsther-


Lovely Update Dear..

Its really Awesome.,
If d phone s nt disturbed thm.,Rudra ll kiss her definitely..
Loved Rudra's worries for Paro& Made her sleep in comfortable bed..
Rudra leaves her in his old house bt who s d man calling for Rudra..
I think its Dilsher who s d 2nd person kno abt Tis House...
Thx for Update..
Eagerly Waiting for Nxt Chapter..
Love
Bhavya



Thank you Bhavya πŸ˜ƒ
Glad you liked this chapter..
Phone brought them out of their state πŸ˜‰ thankfully.. or Rudra would have regretted his
action later πŸ˜† as at this point of time Kiss is not possible!!

To know who is this man?!.. you need to read next update.

I have started writing next part.. so hopefully will try completing it soon πŸ˜›

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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
Thanks for PM dr!
Awesome Superbly awesome so is he Rudra's father Dilsher?