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Riya

@Ri21

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 8 years ago

if this what u call is a random then i must say u r an amazing writer.

really amazing 👏
do write more

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

OMG! That was freaking awesome!👏

Sweet and subtle. I could imagine it all happening in front of my eyes☺️

So many butterflies in my stomach

Can't help but add; Sumo needs to learn ballet for that kiss to happen🤣

Please keep on writing😳

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Gunia

@|Persephone|

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Whoa dude. That escalated quickly. Totally didn't expect the kiss, but I'm definitely not complaining and would love it if we could make it happen in the show :P

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Awwweee... Man this was soo sexy and cute... Please keep writing more..loved it

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dancedanceRR

@dancedanceRR

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

So sweet! Would love to read more from you!

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Srushti

@...Srushti...

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

You've written it for the first time...that's what I'm yet to believe...😳
The OS was so simple...yet so beautiful...
Plz write more... ❤️

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dmgomg

@dmgomg

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

I loved this! Please do write more and message me when you do!!

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

IF-Stunnerz

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome dear..
Love it..
Waiting for more work..

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Suruchi

@sheeluneelu

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

nice and keep writing like this ... thanks imaginary world me khone k liye ...thank you 🤗

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

awesome...
beautifully penned...

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