Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue
Very very nicely written, I loved the undercurrents of emotions in the car when they were travelling back home and it just got better when they reached home..
Realization dawning on Shravan that no matter how much he had loathed Suman earlier he yet cares for her and he needs her too.. I loved how you emoted this part through your writing..The smearing of colors on each other opened a whole new chapter in the book of their lives..You write really well given that you wrote it at 4 a.m. and that too through phone.. It's tough coz I too have to use the phone only.. So kudos to you..Love,Kashmi
Originally posted by: mizzundaztud
This was really very nicely written... My fav color is purple btw
Originally posted by: _Eternity_
Sanika it's beautiful and well.written dear...
Poor Pushkar helps them to clear their mu and grudges and he got...lol...
Their emotions are beautifully written..
Enjoyed..
Looking for more...
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