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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guysπŸ€—
Me is back... This time with a SS... Please do read and let me know if I should continue or not.
 


SS : Short Story - Zindagi 


Krish stared at her lifeless body, he gripped her hand as if to transfer his life into her, to give her warmth of life again, but the life support monitor showed no response, it just ticked slowly.
His life, soul and love was declared in coma, due to lack of oxygen. He cursed himself had he reached in time, he could have saved her.. Radhika was alive but only a vegetable. Tears rolled down his face as he looked upon her and realized his errors, his lack of judgment, his broken trust on Preeti. All his family was dead, only Radhika survived, but she was away from him too.
He promised himself he would find Preeti and avenge the chaos the damnation she brought on his family, and his Radhika.
But first he needed to be strong for Radhika, he had to bring her back into the world of living, he couldn't see her in coma.
Hours passed, days turned to months and it was finally a year. Krish was always present at her bedside. Krish had taken Radhika home after two months in the intensive care of hospital. He bought a smaller but cozy house for them, he knew Radhika would love this house, as he couldn't ever go back to that monster palace that he called home till a year back. It was painful and hurt to even think about it, but he had to forget it all temporarily for the sake of Radhika, he had to devote all his energy towards him. He provided world class medical facilities at home for her, he built an office for himself in that room itself , that even while working Radhika wasn't away from his sight. ... He waited for one signal one indication that she was waking up tirelessly.


               "Aaj tak hai Dil ko Uss k laut ane ki umeed
                 Aaj tak thehri hui hai zindagi Apni jagah"


To be continued.



This Short Story is for Lekha aka Dlsr, she asked me to write up something. I hope you like it deary.

Rocks and chappals are welcome as always.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesomeee lovely start hope we get something like this in serial too
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oh my life saba that was amazing loved it have no words to explain anything saba yaar loved the way u expressed the pain of krish do continue soon cant wait to read the next part
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saba didi apne meri wish puri karke mera life danya kar diya
i love you  saba didi
agr aap mere saamne hoti to main apko kisses and hugs deti par koi gal nai flyink kiss se kaam cala lijiye ga
btw this forum writter's talent is fantastic
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Saba..oh dear..you again did a wonderful job. ❀️
Missing same intensity in show
You are an amazing writer..plzz don't stop it in mid..would love to read next part also.. Wese bhi our forum has become lifeless only holi event is putting some life πŸ˜†
So these amazing writing skill will help us in such low phase.. πŸ˜ƒ
Again..a brilliant take 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeee lovely start hope we get something like this in serial too



Thank you sweta. I am glad you liked it.
As for the show we can only hope. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyrose

oh my life saba that was amazing loved it have no words to explain anything saba yaar loved the way u expressed the pain of krish do continue soon cant wait to read the next part



Aww Rose dear thank you so much.
Next part coming up soon. Keep reading this space πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: DLSR

saba didi apne meri wish puri karke mera life danya kar diya
i love you saba didi
agr aap mere saamne hoti to main apko kisses and hugs deti par koi gal nai flyink kiss se kaam cala lijiye ga
btw this forum writter's talent is fantastic



Lekha dear I am glad you liked it.
Thank you for the love and appreciation 😊

Keep reading this space next part coming soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames



Aww Rose dear thank you so much.
Next part coming up soon. Keep reading this space πŸ˜‰

waiting for it sabaπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you Saba for this amazing ss,good job as always my dearπŸ‘πŸΌ
 i wish we could have the same intensity ane caring in the show
Plz continue soon πŸ˜‰