TS : KAHANI TASHAN KA,DASTAAN PYAAR KI part 4B updated - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Thank u guys so much for the comments... Really means a lot. Well this update is for all those lovelies who liked n commented on my post...keep it going guys !!!

Part 2

usha ( in anger ) : tumhaari himmat kaise hui yahaan aane ki ... mere mana karne ke baavajoot tum wapas aayi ?? sharam naam ki cheez hi nehi hai kya ??
 (Goes to slap her )
 
Before kunj could intervene, Twinkle holds her hand and brings it down.
 
Twinkle : ( sarcastically ) haww Mummy ji !!yeh toh bahot galat baat hai ... koi itni pyaari nu ko aise thappad marti hai kya ?? tsh tsh...very bad very bad... Aisa koi karta hai kya aur khas kar tab jab ki unki nu 70% stakeholder hai business me ??
 
The entire family stares in shock at her attitude.

Kunj : yeh kya bakwass kar rahi Ho tum ?? Tumhe zara sa bhi sharm nehi hai Aisi harkat karte hue ? Yahaan papa coma me chali hai aur tumhe business ki padi hai ? Aur yeh kaunsa tareekha hai ma se baat Karne kaa ?

Twinkle : Iss me sharm kis baat ki Kunj ? Main toh bas papa ji ke kahe hue baath ka hi maan rakh rahi hoon...aur raha sawaal mummy ji se baat Karne ka,Iss ghar ke maalkin hone ke naathe yeh meri marzi hai main kis se Kaise aur kis tareekhe se baath karoon.

Anita and yuvraj looks at her in shock. 

Bebe,Usha,Kunj,Anand,cherry and mahi all surprised.

Anita ( composing herself ) : maaf kijiye ga twinkle par..

Twinkle : ok maaf kiya... ( playing along)

Anita ( getting angry  ) : dekho Twinkle, apna bakwass bandh karo aur nikal jao iss ghar se... Kaisi besharam ladki hai bhai jo apni saas thak nehi sunthi.. 

Twinkle : ( sternly ) iss ghar se niklegi meri jhoothi... ( smiles and looks around at the surprised faces ) oh...Lagta  hai aap Sab ko Iss Khabar ke baare me nehi Pata... One minute.. ( she takes her iPhone and FaceTimes lawyer ) namaste waqeel sahab... Uncle.. Inn sabko uss clause ke baare me pata nehi hai.. Zaara bata dijiye naa... ( she faces her IPhone towards the family 

Lawyer : jee... Aapki bahu sach keh rahi hai... Manohar ne power of attorney Twinkle ko di hai aur business me 70% stakeholder bana di hai... Isliye jab tak Manohar tikh nehi ho jaate , unki ghair maujoodgi me  saare faisle lene ka poora haaq Twinkle ke paas hai

Cherry: par waqeel sahab Sara property tho mere aur mere papa ke naam pe hai ? Toh phir twinkle bhabiji ko power of attorney kaise mil sakthi hai ?

Lawyer : woh isliye kyunki sirf Manohar ke business aur baaki property pe aapka haq hai.iss ghar aur yeh Naya business manohar ke naam pe hi hai .aur dekha jaye tho Iss business me profit hone ki chances kaafi high hai...jo jo cheez surjeet ke pass hai,unn Sab se bhi zyada keemat hai isliye uss hisab se power of attorney Manohar ke naam pe hai jo ki unhone Twinkle ko de di hain ( Twinkle gives a smirk to Anita and Yuvraj  , turns the phone towards herself )

Twinkle : thank you uncle ... Rakhthi hoon ( smiling at the family , sarcastically comments ) ab agar sab kuch saaf ho chuki hai ya aur bhi sawaal jawab khelni hai ?? ( seeing everyone maintain pin-drop silence ) Good... Ab main andhar chalthi hoon apne kamre me.. ( fanning herself with hands dramatically ) wai guruji ke kasam Bahot garmi lag rahi hai 

Gesturing the band people to leave , Twinkle walks inside in style while the family stares at her , too shocked to say a word.

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Twinkle climbs the stairs and walks into Manohar 's room. She slowly walks towards him and sits in front of him , placing her hands on his feet. 

Twinkle : Papa ji ! Mujeh maaf kijiye ... ( eyes tearing up ) Maine aapse kiya hua vachan pura nehi kar paya... Vaada kiya tha ki iss parivaar aur aapke  izzat par ko aanj nehi aane denge... Par main har gayi... ( crying ; bends her head down touching his feet ) 

Suddenly she feels someone 's hand on her shoulder.


how's it guys ?? plz plz do comment...
 
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Wow beautiful.
I loved twinkle's attitude here. 
Very well written!
Twinkle ne sabki bolti band karva di!!
Who was that person jisne twinkle ke shoulder PE haath rakha kahin bebe to nahin? Ya phir kunj?
God you left us on a cliff hanger.
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Wow fantastic di...👏😳😃
Twinkle seem soo confident!!! 😛
Loving it...😳
BTW thanks a lot for PM!🤗
And yah continue soon di!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Read both parts in one go!
Very beautifully written with a captivating plot line!
Do continue soon!
I can't wait to see what happens next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
It was damn amazing,I like this twinkle and I loved how she was with everyone.
and she apologised to mono Awww,I know the person will be bebe who touched her shoulder.
Do Update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
love Twinkle's sherni attitude
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Wow! This twinkle is just mind blowing 😆 good 😉
The update was fab😳
Plz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Guys... All those who want a pm post a comment so that I know...
This update s for all those darlings who have commented and liked my ts 😃


Part 3

Twinkle climbs the stairs and walks into Manohar 's room. She slowly walks towards him and sits in front of him , placing her hands on his feet. 

Twinkle : Papa ji ! Mujeh maaf kijiye ... ( eyes tearing up ) Maine aapse kiya hua vachan pura nehi kar paya... Vaada kiya tha ki iss parivaar aur aapke  izzat par koi aanj nehi aane denge... Par main har gayi... ( crying ; bends her head down touching his feet ) 

Suddenly she feels someone 's hand on her shoulder.

Twinkle slowly lifts her head up and tactfully frees her face of tear stains... That touch.. The one she could recognise even in her sleep.She stands up and turns around to face the person , her arms crossed across her chest.

" Not bad baby ... I 'm impressed. Itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi tum ne vapas iss ghar me kadam rakhne ki joorath li... Taliyaan haan taliyaan.. "

Twinkle : ( smirking )  aakhir baazi palatna tho main ne tumse hi seekhi hai Mr Yuvraj Luthra !!!!

Yuvraj : ( laughing ) waise toh tum aajkal  jokes kaafi ache maarne lage ho..

Twinkle : ( sarcastically  )  hain na... Bilkul tumhari hawa mein mahal banane ki aadat ki tarah .. Nehi ??

Yuvraj : hayee ... Issi ada pe me main humesha marti thi...
using a tone as if he was explaining something to a little child ) Par baby yeh confidence kaafi nehi mujseh jeetne ki kyuni tum sirf Twinkle ho... Tumhe sirf chamakna aur uss chamak se logo ko andha karna aathi hai par main YUVRAJ hoon aur YUVRAJ LUTHRA KABHI NEHI HARTHA... ( does his signature nose swipe  )

Twinkle : ( smirking ) tumhe challenges bahot pasand hai na Yuvi..Toh tikh hai... aaj main tumhe challenge karti hoon... Tikh ek mahine ke andhar main aur kunj tumhare samne hi ek honge aur tum kuch nehi kar paoge kyunki tum honge iss ghar ke bahar  ( Yuvi smirks at this challenge ) aur raha sawal business ka woh toh main successful banakar hi rahenge aur woh bhi Kunj ke madat se ...

Yuvi : ok... Dekh lete hain... ( does his signature nose swipe and leaves )

Twinkle watches yuvi leave the room and upon his departure heaves a sigh of relief.

Twinkle: thank god usne mujeh rote hue nehi dekha warna meri saari plan flop hoti ...

Saying this she goes and sits next to Manohar.

Twinkle : waise Twinkle tu ne chunauti toh de di par usse nibhaungi kaise... Aur aaj jo kuch bhi hua hai uske baad toh pakha woh mujhse baat kya shakal takh nehi dekhna chahenge... ( absentminded , places her hand over Manohar 's hand. ) aur business... Kudh ki shadi plan karte karte mera yeh haal hai ab dusro ke shaadi kaise nibhane me madad karungi.

Suddenly she feels a swish on her hand. She looks down and upon lifting her hand , finds Manohar 's hand slightly move. Eyes tearing up , she looks at Manohar s face and finds a drop coming out from his eye.

Twinkle : papaji... ( getting happy ) main sabko jakar bathathi hoon.. ( gets ready to leave but stops ) nehi... Agar yuvi ko pata chalega toh woh kuch na kuch ulta seedha karenge thaaki mera aur kunj ke beech me aur duriyan kada kar denge... ( sits back ) papaji aap bilkul chinta math kijiye... Jab aap ne ummed ki ek kiran dikhayi hai toh main aap ko sahi salamath karake hi chodenge... Aur business bhi sabhalenge... Aur raha sawal aapke bete ka... Amristar ke saare ladke mujh par fida hai toh phir yeh Kunj kya cheez hai !!! Kal holi hai aur kal kisi bhi tarah main kunj ko iss business me meri madad karne vaaste mana hi lungi...

I noe it s a short one but brace yourself coz Next update s going to be a holi related one... Might run into two updates though
 
howzz it guys ?? plz plz do comment...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Amazing di...Loved it to the core!!!👏❤️
Loved Twinkle's challenge ...her confidence n attitude is outstanding!!!👏
Yeay a holi related update can't wait for it!!!😛
Plzzz update the next part soon...😊
Btw can u send me a PM!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Dear the update was fab😳
Plz I want the p.m.. . Plz do p.m. me whenever done the next parts 😃😳
Plz continue soon 😳