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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: _Meena_
nice <3

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry
aww cute update <3

Originally posted by: papu24011999
Nice update!!! Cute!! Loved it!!!

Originally posted by: .Ragini.
Loved the update
awesome story
Do continue soon

Originally posted by: hailly
Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: priyanvs
nice update dear
loved it 😃
pls do continue soon

Originally posted by: kusharberry
awesome update dear
just loved it
awww poor twinkle is afraid of love
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear😃

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
awesome start

Originally posted by: 3dancelover
Awesome update!
Continue soon!

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Amazing Updates Griffy
Looking forward to the next part

Thank you sooo much for such wonderful comments... I really didnt think I would get such good response..because the story has totally different background.. Thanks for the encouragement.. means a lot 😳😳🤗🤗

Love ya all

Griffy

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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

PART 3

Part 4

"Chupke se aaye teri yaad yahaan... Sirf main janoon tu hai kahan kahan
Hawa tum fiza tum meri raahaton ka pata tum
Mere aibon ko jo dhak de...wo paak si fiza tum"

I stood outside hearing his voice... he sounded great but for the first time I felt emotion is his voice
But I didn't want to think too much.. still I stayed till he finished the song...applause erupted in the class
Why had I walked out??...ughh I hated this ..
I wasn't clear about my feelings I had been so sure that after thinking about Dhruv and all my plans I would let go of all this and yet again I failed
But it was just the start ..
Somehow I saw him everywhere in the canteen in the hall way.. by the bike stand and now even in the library
What was happening ??? Was he following me around ?
Noh ..somehow I always reasoned my self that he wasn't following me.. I always saw some hot girl or the other.. and I thought he was trying to flirt with them and that's why he was there
And the worst thing was every time he was there my eyes met his...and the tingly feeling crept on me...
I wished it went away ...but...life had other plans for me
I was sitting in the library trying my best to concentrate
But I knew as usual my heart wasn't in it'every time I looked up... he was staring at me...
And then for the 1st time he smiled at me .
My eyes widened
What the hell is going on ????...
I looked down.. angry...gosh what's wrong with this guy ..and worst what's wrong with me .
Why do I have to look at him every two minutes ???

Gosh she got angry now why cant u stop staring at her
I just couldn't stop following her
I just couldn't stop thinking about her
I didn't want to approach her as I knew it would just make things worse

But I had this strong urge to know her
What was happening to me???

I heard thunder..
OH no rain..I better get going...
I took one last glance at her and got up...
Another day gone and still no answer...for any of the questions

...

Oh no Rain ..how will I get home.. I better leave right now
I got up.. and as usual my eyes met his... he was also leaving
Gosh what will I do now..
I heard the rain getting louder
I better get going
I took my bag and walked out of the library

...

She's also leaving now she will think I m following her
But I need to leave ..home is so far it will take time

I came outside the library.. and was surprised
The noise had not done justice to the intensity of rain

But that's not what surprised me..
I saw her staring outside at the rain and once or twice touching the water .
And across her face was a beautiful smile .
that was the first time ever I saw her smiling
She looked beautiful..

I stood there staring at her

She had not seen me yet...she was lost in the rain
Twinkle likes rain ..and I???? well I hated rain .
It was WET and Dirty

but when I saw how happy she was.. I too wanted to play in the rain with her.. stare at the rain with her...in fact dance in the rain.
Dance in the rain
with her
I was lost...in her
She turned to pick her bag and she saw me staring at her ...
Her smile faded...

She bent down immediately to pick her bag and her specs fell off
"Uff what the hell??" she sounded agitated..

Somewhere I hoped if I kept staring
She might try to talk to me..I know that was a stupid thought and most probably she would be thinking me as a creep.. but the fact was I just could not stop looking at her.. This was so not me.. but still

She started walking past me towards the other end...to be away from me.
But maybe rains happen to begin stories .to do what doesn't happen generally .
And she slipped ...and well ...I caught her
She fit perfectly in my arms...
I stared at her..

at her Deep brown eyes..
Scared brown eyes..
My heartbeat skipped
And I got more than one answer that day

" I was ... yes I was falling in love"

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Thanks for your comments and supports..Hope you all like this part 😳
I am posting the next part tonight itself😳

thanks

griffy

PART 5

Edited by griffy.fz - 8 years ago

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anisha

@Anisha-k.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

ohhh griffy tnx for PM and the story ws awesome plz continue soon😃 Edited by Phycho - 8 years ago

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Sherni_Jerry

@Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

awesome update again
loved it

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hailly

@hailly

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.

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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Goldie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Hey Sorry for commentin late..

I jus came across this one and read all the parts in go...

Awesome it ws.. I am it's very different. ..

I am liking it..

And the way u should Twinj separate monologues... too good..

BTW I al so liked the color combinations here..

Pink for Twinkle and Blue for Kunj..

Continue soon...

Tht boy is falling in Love,,❤️

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padma

@papu24011999

Groupbie

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Again an amazing update!!! Loved it!!! Pls do update soon...

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Priya

@priyanvs

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

nice update dear 😊

loved it

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Duumps

@Duumps

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Loved the update
Waiting for what will happen next

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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: 17.sonal
Hey Sorry for commentin late..
I jus came across this one and read all the parts in go...
Awesome it ws.. I am it's very different. ..
I am liking it..
And the way u should Twinj separate monologues... too good..
BTW I al so liked the color combinations here..
Pink for Twinkle and Blue for Kunj..
Continue soon...
Tht boy is falling in Love,,❤️

Aww thanks sooo much for a such a sweet comment 😳😳😳 hehe u noticed the color change?? 😃😃😃 I am updating asap ...😳

Thanks again

Cheers

Griffy

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