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Posted: 8 years ago

NOVEL DIGNITY

The tranquility and solitude that had enveloped the house

Has today evolved into a babies domain

She that languished in loneliness is now  

confronted with sound waves from all directions

Her fascination and admiration for the babes is surpassed

By her attraction to him his scent his half smile to which she succumbs

The nomad that seemed concerned in his work, his book is now

An adept companion to them all

Their prattle evoke a smile a delight and send her to a dizzy state

She responds to them gawking at him yet focused in her mission

An effective and efficient incomparable mom

She goes their way and has her say in firmly setting them right

She contends ceaselessly to draw his attention to herself

Her efforts evoke the patriarch's contentment

The Raakshashan is titillated by her antics

The house has shed its eeriness and sports a vibrant organic splendour


 

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Posted: 8 years ago
II had gathered those long silky curls and tied a giant fountain on top of her head the satin ribbons flowed down her head
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Posted: 8 years ago
Tennis or not...


He noticed his daughter was in love... with reading, she didnt look up from the book until he nudged her to see whats going on outside the window
He animatedly explained a scene to her from his last visit to Stockholm

R&B was wearing his ear buds he couldnt actually listen to what was being said
His wife texted "Dont be mean OK?"
She had turned into a worrier... from a warrior
When paused at the Safdarjung intersection he texted back

He sent a half smile

"Free up next Sat and go play tennis da? please?" she got bolder

"I cant push stuff out so soon II" he argued

She didnt text back

"Dadddee" he heard faint

He pulled his plug out, and looked up at the rear view mirror

"Can I go to Jor Bagh-Golf Links neighborhood fete?" she asked softly

He wanted to say no

He shifted in his seat

"Umm, does Amma know?" he asked

"No... Gregor JUST asked me" she said smiling shyly

"Well.. the kid needs to abandon school and turn into a social coordinator, tennis game with dad, Swedish mid summer with Mom and the neighborhood block party" R&B thought to himself

They pulled up by Greg's house
It was a fantastic neighborhood where almost all homes were either already remodeled or in the process... trying to shed their 1970s 1980s look
Gleaming chrome and glass greeted visitors at most
This house was no different, much smaller than MM
He got off his car, Greg held the door for Nivi

"U can leave ur book in the car"

"Ofcourse! so he can have u all to himself" R&B grunted

The gate opened and Greg's Dad walked out, ready to go out for a jog

"Oh! Hi!! This is great" he greeted warmly

"Hi! Vinod" R&B muttered

The kids were inside, R&B didnt want to go in

He was forced to now

"As u can see I am working on my fitness to beat u at the tennis game"
They talked... well Vinod talked for 30 or so minutes

He finally got his daughter back

"Will I see u again?" Gregor asked Nivi

"Daddee after picking out sequins for the lehanga Amma said I could come back"

"How about we just say "I'll try?" he coached his daughter
She didnt want to disapooint the twerp

"Umm.. I will come... mostly" she reworded it

He wanted to hoist her and take her back to the car and drive off and never come back

"U cant date until u are 30, u know that dont u?" he whispered

Nivi paused almost as if she heard it


He drove to Shabad quietly as she read in the back, II insisted she wear a salwar or a chudidar on days she had to sit on the floor cross legged

She wore a deep blue cotton hand embroidered kurta with a ivory chudidar, her long hair neatly braided the short curls around her face tucked back behind her ears
II let Nivi do what she wanted with her hair usually when she was home, but when it was time for classes, it was tied away

She was tall for 10, Vinod's Swedish wife had commented on how tall he was and how tall Nivi was, Nivi promptly pointed out that II was almost 5'9"

Sahana only seemed to spread sideways

II's fave pastime was to have the baby sit on the rug and watch her fall sideways or back, with no center of gravity she was a blob of jello

"Rakshasi" she would hiss, squishing the fat folds

"People dont believe me when I say u are only breast fed" "My own lil blob of jello"
Sahana was a cuddler, as II snoozed she lay on her belly and did tricks with her arms and legs
He often found II on the first floor lounge, on the floor sprawled with a dozen cushions around her, Sahana's "real world toys"
Kitchen utensils, her brother's mechanical set... wood blocks... she hated barbies
Unless it was time to sleep, she had a ragged Ann... she was quite literally ragged
With one arm hanging loose as the twins had fought over her one afternoon

She made fun of how fat Sahana was, he wasnt amused, he would tell her

"U are cruel" he would say

"Paar nee ivala... I think she will be 10 and 20 inches tall" II would laugh hysterically

He was glad nobody was going to make him choose his fave kid
Phew!!
He ADORED all of them

The boys reminded him of himself
Terrifying!
R&B got goosebumps... he pulled around to the Gurudwara

Nivi picked up her "shabad bag" and stepped down, he held her waist and set her down

She squirmed

"I am a big girl" she claimed

He kissed the top of her head

The granthi and the employees greeted him in Punjabi, and chatted with him in Punjabi

Nivi watched curiously

He went back to his car and picked up the white handkerchief II had placed on the passenger seat, and covered his head, his daughter was in a quiet corner, her dupatta draped over her head
Listening carefully

He sat 20 feet away, and listened to her chant first and sing later

Her voice was husky soft like his
Like if u dont use it much it sounds like a whisper

The granthi corrected errors when she attempted to sing the 3rd song with mistakes despite II's strict order not to try it

She darted a secret look towards his way, to check if he noticed that

He half smiled

He did his email, and IM/chatted with Sukrit

When Nivi was done at 4, the granthi walked over and appreciated Nivi's sincerity in practising and listening skills

They drove back to Sector 1 to paatu mami's house after he bought her a burger french fries and a milk shake at Mc Donald

She  told him about his History Teacher and his animated way of explaining Mughal architecture

"Amma will scold me if I make fun of the teacher" she said softly

He reached and held her hand and squeezed

"Amma said u protected Sahana when she broke Ved's hot wheels car?" he asked deeply

She was too shy to acknowledge  "She is only a baby" she offered her defense

"U are too wise, do u know that?" he sighed

"Amma says "I scare her"" Nivi chuckled

"I get how u must do that" he chuckled too

His wife was so eager to please, she sometimes chose pleasing people over doing the "right thing"

At the paatu Mami's house he was in the same room where she sang, he noticed how Nivi's pronounciation of some Sanskrit words were exactly like how II did it
The Mami spoke sternly in clear Tamil

Nivi responded softly in fluent Tamil

"Amma innikkum student, kettaya?" (ur Mom is still a learner) "Pidikale pidikale sollindu dino paaduvo" (she will claim not to like Carnatic but will practice earnestly) the teacher said graciously

Nivi smiled wickedly, she had overheard Amma argue with Rohini Patti (Mrs Iyer) and how she got a dressing down from Patti

The teacher turned to R&B "She is a good listener" she said smiling

R&B nodded.. she sang out loud, throwing her voice, eyes closed, and lost in the words
It was hard to believe she was only 10.

When she was done she turned to look at him, he smiled

When they got home after 6,
The boys were in the lawn Ranjan throwing the American football at them
They ran up to his car, when he opened the door and handed them the Mc Donald's bag and the milkshake cup holder, they were overjoyed

"Sahana ke liye laaya?" Ranjan asked
R&B chuckled

"Yep, triple cheese" he lied

Nivi showed Ranjan the song Paatu Mami wrote today

"Wah ji wah" he nodded

II lay curled up in bed Sahana sat by her falling as usual, sitting up to play with II's phone

"OH GOOD!! FINALLY... I thought u were never coming!!" Sahana chattered like sputtering mustard seeds

"I hear the boys downstairs, but she wont sit up and feed me, I can go have a good time"
He set his half empty soda cup on the bedisde stand, Sahana shrieked, he reached and grabbed it, filled the straw and released it in her mouth

She choked and coughed and LOVED IT

Wanted more...

II lay on her back and smiled

"Shes a bhooki thing"
He slid in by her

Gently sliding over her and pushing

Sahana played with the straw

"U smell like fries" she licked his jaw

He kissed her hungrily

"And taste like Coke" she gasped as he fed himself on her hungrily

His hand darting under her tee

"Aval enge?" (where is Nivi?)

"Downstairs" he whispered, as focussed as Sahana in pursuing what he wanted "gorging on McD's" he explained
"Podi..." II cooed to her daughter as her daughter approached with mouth open.. mother and daughter kissed each other, he grabbed Sahana and crushed her rubbing his stubbly face on her cheek
NOT A WORD... NOT A WHIMPER she was too busy chewing on his pocket button

"Shes not complaining" he scoffed
"Good for her" II said cynically

He grabbed her as she tried to dodge..

"Iru da" she dodged

They wrestled and toppled Sahana over she saw R&B's ear buds pop out of his shirt pocket and slid under her Daddee and grabbed it drooling

"She is very democratic... she loves plastic straws as much as plastic earbuds" II groaned
Their daughter sucked on the cord, soothing her fat swollen gums, drooling a river

They made out for a good 20 minutes and when Sahana began to moan for food he cursed and lay back down pulling II on top

"How did we end up having FOUR?" II whispered on his cheek

"Sunday afternoon sex, I bet.." he said agonized

Sahana climbed over II's back sucking on her tee, as her husband lay beneath her nibbling on her neck

"So did u agree for the tennis game?" she asked sliding back down gently beginning to feed her daughter

He yawned... and groaned

"I am leaving u if dont befriend that family da"

He chuckled

"Do I get the kids?" he asked

"PAAVI" she cursed


Ashu25 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
1000 IT IS

CONGRATULATIONS AUTHOR SAHIBA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nishaaa!!!

👏 🤗

Well i know as per the index this is the 990th post of SoSy but then actually its your 1000th Post!

Congratulations on this feat!!
This is nothing short of marvel

You are That Sun around which we all revolve and co-exist here.

Thanks a lot Nisha for this fairytale!

I am bad with words..
But all i can do is just sit at my computer screen and marvel at the amazinggg talent you posses and how selflessly you each day take out time from even your busiest of days to write atleast one update.

Thanks for inspiring me, being the Super to Woman and above all Thank You Nisha for every chapter of SoSy!

Your crazzzyyy fan 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
NISHA!!
Commendable !!
This is such a good feeling!
I have been associated with this wonderful tale which still allures me and keeps me on tenter hooks for about a year now!
I am overwhelmed...Your commitment, your creativity, the way you churn out each and every word in ALL THE UPDATES!!!!

You deserve a biiiggg treat!
This is really really a great job !
Its not easy for one to hold on and track a whole 1000 updates for a YEAR!
To read, to write most importantly...YOU ARE THE BEST!!!!
The quality you've maintained throughout...The way your characters have evolved!!!
WONDERFUL!

I want to say more...ruko...Thodi angrezi seekhke aayi 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashu25

NISHA!!

Commendable !!
This is such a good feeling!
I have been associated with this wonderful tale which still allures me and keeps me on tenter hooks for about a year now!
I am overwhelmed...Your commitment, your creativity, the way you churn out each and every word in ALL THE UPDATES!!!!

You deserve a biiiggg treat!
This is really really a great job !
Its not easy for one to hold on and track a whole 1000 updates for a YEAR!
To read, to write most importantly...YOU ARE THE BEST!!!!
The quality you've maintained throughout...The way your characters have evolved!!!
WONDERFUL!

I want to say more...ruko...Thodi angrezi seekhke aayi😆



Can i just say DITTO to each word?!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nikitagarwal



Can i just say DITTO to each word?!



Do you have to ask me 😕
Mera dialogue hai yeh 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Author sahiba...Please go TREAT yourself on all our behalf for this FEAT!
You deserve appreciation in EVERY form...
Trust me I am overjoyed and have no words to speak or write right now!
You are FA-NTA-BULOUS is all I can say!
I am still wondering as to HOW i, who gets deviated too quickly am still here on this very forum and am celebrating the 100th update ?!?!
Hats off to YOUR SKILL!


THANK YOU once again!
For enticing all of us readers with your writing which is worth millions ( you are doing it for FREE) !

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashu25

Author sahiba...Please go TREAT yourself on all our behalf for this FEAT!

You deserve appreciation in EVERY form...
Trust me I am overjoyed and have no words to speak or write right now!
You are FA-NTA-BULOUS is all I can say!
I am still wondering as to HOW i, who gets deviated too quickly am still here on this very forum and am celebrating the 100th update ?!?!
Hats off to YOUR SKILL!


THANK YOU once again!
For enticing all of us readers with your writing which is worth millions ( you are doing it for FREE)!



I so agree with each letter Ashu!

I mean to create such a fabulous tale which seems like a scene playing across my living room..such vivid description, so much of emotions..

Talking of being enticed, well i just looovee this addiction!
For once I can proudly say I am addicted to one of the best creations!

Love and hugs Nisha

Just go treat yourself and make sure to send the bill across