Buenos tardes folks...
thanks for the love and😉 appreciation you have given my previous ff ISHQ HAI VO EHSAAS ...
i am here to share one more fiction on LAKSHMILA 😆😆😆... i just cant get enough of them
karan and yukti are nailing as laskhman and urmila👏 cheers to them
well i am a bit disappointed by how they showed lakshmila accepting their marriage so easily... i was expecting some drama, intense scene, lots of tears and then a confession... but then i recalled that SKR is a mytho 🤪
so guys it is completely fictious,,,,as fictions mein toh kuchh bhi ho sakta hai na 😛😉
so please bear with my grammatical as well as typing mistakes
i'll complete it in two parts one is below and second i'll try to upload soon... 😛
JEALOUS LAKSHMAN
R- kya hua lakshman tum aise kyun chale aaye vahan se
L- bhaiya ye kya keh diya pitaji ne... humse poochhe bina hi hum sabke vivaah ka nirnay le liya... bharat bhaiya or shatrughan to bahot prassann hain pehle se hi pasand jo krte hain rajkumari mandvi or shrutkirti ko, kintu mai or rajkumari urmila...
R-tum or urmila kya... tum pasand nahi krte urmila ko
L- n..nahi bilkul nahi, unke sath rehna dharya ki pareeksha dene jaisa hai bhaiya, har baat pe tana marna aadat hai unki
R- ye tum kya keh rahe ho lakshman , urmila to bilkul sita ka pratibimb hai
L- bhaiya (with a disgusting look) ye kya keh rahe hain aap, kam se kam unhe sita bhabhi ka pratibimb to na kahein mai janta hu aajkal aapko mujhse adhik apki saali priye hai kintu sita bhabhi or urmila ek doosre se bahot bhinn hain
R- theek hai, agar tum nahi chahte vivaah krna to mat karo (he said turning away from him with a smirk, as he knew his little brother is in love and just hiding the unexpected happiness)
There sita and urmila were in garden sita knew that urmila is happy from the proposal but she was tensed at lakshman's expressions ... she shrugged off her thoughts thinking urmila will also get tensed seeing her sad.
S- urmila tum khush to ho na
U-mai to khush hoon didi par lagta hai rajkumar lakshman khush nahi hain is prastav se (she said making a sad face) maine dekha vo krodh mein vahan se chale gaye. Kdachit unhein ye prastaav sweekar nahi hai.
S- aisa kyun lagta hai tumhein urmila lakshman bahot samajhdar...
U - didi aap to jab dekho apne devar ka paksh leti rehti hain, nahi karna hai vivaah na Karen, mai koi adheer nahi hue ja rahi unse vivaah karne ke liye, bas mai to khush thhi ke hum sab behnein ek saath rahengi vivaah ke pashchat bhi kintu...
Sita giggled seeing her little sister lying
U - mai mandir se pooja samagree lekar aati hoon (she said in a husky tone and left from there making sita sad again)
Sita...
She turned to find ram standing there locking his hands behind his back
Aapke mukh mandal par ye chinta ka karan kya hai sita "he asked in a concerned voice"
She looked at him with admiring eyes "mujhe dekhte hi kaise jaan lete hain aap mere man ki baat" she thinks
Sita...
Ji (she came out of the trance)... vo mai urmila ke bare me soch rahi thhi
R - sita aapko urmila or lakshman ki chinta karne ki avashyakta nahi hai, ve dono ek doosre ko jatana nahi chahte k v ek doosre ke liye kya mehsoos karte hain
She smiled at him that again he gets to know that she is actually tensed about lakshmana
S - parantu agar ye dono aise hi karte rahe to ye vivaah kaise hoga
Ram gave her a consoling smile and said "sita ek aavashyak karya mein mujhe aapka saath chahiye, aap mera saath dengi?"
S - ye kya keh rahe hain aap, mai sadev aapke sath hoon, aapke har nirnay mein aapka sath dena mera dharma hai, or yahi mera saubhagya bhi hai raghunandan "she said locking her eyes in his"
R - ab aap dekhiega kuchh hi samay ke pashchat kaise aapka laadla devar bhaagta hua urmila ke peechhey jata hai
In temple
Lakshman was lost in his thought when he heard Ram's voice
Sita mai bahot hi prasann hoon ke aap chaaro behno ka vivaah ek hi mandap me sampan hoga, aapke pitaji ki ichha ke anusar
L- kya, aisa kaise ho sakta hai, maine to vivaah ke liye mana kar diya bhaiya ko, kya bhaiya ne mera nirnay pitaji ko abhi tak nahi bataya... (he frowned talking to himself, confused whether he should be happy or sad)
S - satya kaha aapne jo vivaah prastav urmila ke liye aaya hai, vo bahot achha hai, vaise to mujhe atyadhik prasannata hoti yadi urmila ka vivaah bhrata lakshman k sath hota parantu agar lakshman ye vivaah nahi karna chahtey to unhe badhya nahi karna chahiye na
Or ye jo rajkumar ka vivaah prastav aaya hain vo bahot hi kushal hain, bahot yogya hain, humari urmila ko bahot pasand bhi karte hain
Lakshman closed his fist tightly
L - pranam bhabhi (he hurriedly came infront of them) kis bare me vartalap kar rahe hain aap
S - pranam bharata lakshman, hum urmila ke var ke bare me baat kar rahe thhe (she said walking besides him with a grin)
R - haan laskhman , tum to vivaah karna nahi chahtey thhe or ekaek rajkumar girish ka vivaah prastav aaya to sab mana nahi kar paaye or isiliye unka vivaah bhi humare sath hi sampann hoga, urmila ne bhi svikriti de di hai.
L - kyaaa
S - kya hua bhaiya koi pareshani hai (she asked with concerned)
L - nahi... bhabhi... mai keh raha thha, aap aise hi kisi ke bhi haath me apni behen ka haath kaise de sakti hain (he said scared at the thought that she will get married to anyone else)
S - kintu bhaiya rajkumar girish bahot ache hain, anek yuddh jeete hain unhone, bahot swabhimani, aur ache vyaktitva ke swami hain ve (she said teasing him more)
Lakshman shook his head in anticipation of that fact that sita is not even listening to him and busy praising the so called rajkumar who so ever it is
L - bhaiya aap samjhaiye na bhabhi ko, rajkumari mandavi ka vivaah bharat bhaiya ke sath ho raha hai or rajkumari shrutkirti ka shatrugn k sath or bhabhi ka vivaah aapke sath, aap sab kitne yogya hain pata nahi vo rajkumari ke yogya dikhta bhi hai ya nahi,rajkumari urmila kitni sunder...mera tatparya hai bina use dekhe aap sab ye nirnay kaise le sakte hain ke vo rajkumari k layak hai
R - sahi keh rahe ho tum lakshman
Lakshman sighed at his brother's words that now he will think again about the proposal but her happiness turned into shock again when Ram continued that they have sent a portrait of the prince... lakshman slapped his forehead making sita giggle at her naughty brother- in- law's reaction
By now sita knew that lakshman is head over heels in love with her sister
S - haan dekhiye na bhaiya kitne sunder dikhte hain, (showing him the portrait but he is in no mood to look at that prince's portrait who wanted to marry her urmila)bahot aakarshit karne vali chhavi hai unki, unchi kad kathhi, gehri kaali aankhen, gora chehra... teekhe naak naksh
L - mujhe nahi dekhna, aur bhabhi aapko kaise pata ke vo urmila ko khush rakhega ... ye to galat hai na koi bhi aayega or aap us se urmila ka vivaah karva denge
S - kyun ki prem karte hain vo urmila se, ek kshan unka chitra dekhiye to sahi aapko swateh hi gyat ho jaega ke kitne adbhut dikhte hain ve
L - mujhe koi ruche nahi hai inka chitra dekhne me (he said in an angry tone)
Ram and Sita were having hard time controlling their laughter
Sita vaise urmila kahan hai ... (asked ram raising his brows)
S - vo pitaji ko vivaah ki swikriti dene gayi hai
L - kyaaa... kaha gayi hai
R - vivaah ki swikriti dene gayi hai lakshmannn ... (he said in a tone)
(Lakshman bhaag, rok use, agar urmila ne maharaj janak ko jakar vivaah ke liye haan keh diya to keval VIDHIKAR banker reh jaoge tum,,,, nahi .,,,, yeh nahi ho sakta, urmila aisa nahi kar sakti) he scratch his neck and the very next moment jumped out of the garden
Sita was amazed to see his excitement ,,, and she recalls the words Ram said to her
S - arre bhaiya kya hua, kahan ja rahe hain aap
L - bhabhi ek bahot aavashyak karya hai , agar nahi kia to aapka devar aajeevan vivaah ka vidhikar banker reh jaega (saying so he ran away hurriedly to find urmila)
Sita and Ram burst out laughing seeing his state...
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