The Best of Things: Thread II - Part 74 on Page 139 - Page 62

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha17
Awesome update
Loved how Swaragini were making plans on ditching the boys
Can't wait for next part

Haha, they're a Force 😆😆😆

Thanks a lot!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Nice😆

Thank you, glad you liked 😳😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Yay!! 😃😃😃The 1st part was so sweet, simply put, endearing... Even i felt like giving a bear hug to Ragini, she seemed so wistful.. And she really is trying to make it up to everyone.. I like sanskar's way of silent support, its an art really... The SanLak part subtly shows how sanskar being the elder one takes care of the practical necessity and laksh being the younger one is more about the fun part.. Its the same with most siblings.. SwaRagini conspiring to lose their hubbys and shop away merrily😆😆😆 These sisters😃 Dono sahimein bhaari padne wale hai SanLak pe.. Now that they have bonded right back, the poor hubbys might have to woo them again if they want to be dalofied any ghaas.. Ooo that would be hilarious🤣 All in all a cute update Bubble!!🤗
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Akshata😊

Thanks Akshata!!! 🤗🤗🤗

So happy you liked it, since I strengthened the Sanskar - Ragini scene on your request. Ragini is now trying to make up desperately... Sanskaar is something, isn't he? Just turns up silently wherever he's needed. I'll weave up a superhero avatar for him... 'The Listener' he'll just turn up everywhere and just listen to people! 😆

Yah, SanLak - you're very right. Sanskaar is being very responsible - not that Lakshya isn't but he's more ready to clown around if someone else is taking charge 😆😆

The sisters are going to be quite something - these two will have to be sharp to retain their wives' attention 😆 Swaragini are back, yo!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice update..

Thanks! Glad you liked it 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice Update..

Thank you Sneha!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: princess_tara
Nice

Thanks a lot, Tara.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hey bubble, my dear🤗
That was such a sweet update..You always succeed in delighting us even with your short updates, making us smile a lot, after reading them..😃😃

I really loved the way Sanskaar consoled Ragini..😳

Ragini was making fun of the boys' talk😆 and she and Swara started their girls' talk..😉 I really enjoyed those light moments between them..😳

Ha ha and Lakshya's final dialogue was right on spot😆 that managing Swaragini is going to be even more difficult than managing them individually😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

#618

Superb update

Now that swaragini are back sanlak are going to face a tough time.

Loved the girls talk.

And loved sanskaar and ragini's part the old friends are back

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chandra1998

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Posted: 8 years ago

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I'm a very very very big fan of your FF to be very honest. I've always wanted to comment here but I was never capable of finding enough words to describe my emotions. The way you started your story is more than amazing. Lakshya's efforts to redeem Ragini, Swara's fear, Sanskaar's constant efforts to bring the old Swara back, everything has been written just perfectly. And I must say your imagination power is beyond perfection. Not a single word has ever failed to mesmerise me. Moreover, I love this Lakshya. Thank you for this amazingly beautiful story. 😊

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