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Posted: 8 years ago
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for my sister as it's her birthday today, love you Sachita, even though she doesn't come on the forum lol

Part Four

 Bubbly smiled warmly at Twinkle for her efforts to get ready. It seemed like forever since her Didi was motivated to live her life. Even if this Krish guy wasn't Kunj Sarna, he had created a ray of hope in her sister's life.

 

No matter what happened next, there was hope that Twinkle Taneja Sarna would begin to live her life again.

 

 Chinki and Amrita were busy plotting the day's events since earlier that morning.

 

" Amrita, we don't want to take away your friend, but if he really is who we all hope he is, he needs to be where he rightfully belongs, in Amritsar," Chinki declared.

 

 Amrita gave her cousin a considerate look.

 

"  Krish is going to meet us near  Globe Nexus Mall. We have to indirectly create scenarios so Twinkle can figure out if he can be Kunj. If he is I am sure he will  feel his connection with her," she replied with  confidence.

 

 The four girls headed to the mall to start their shopping. Apparently they didn't have to create too many incidents to bring Krish and  Twinkle to interact.

 

 Twinkle was about to slip off the escalator when the heel of her shoes slipped on the steps,. She braced herself for a large impact , torn skin and major injuries.

 

Fortunately, strong arms lifted her up and soon she regained her balance.

 

As the other girls' voices caught in their throats, they noticed the twosome in an eye lock.

 

Krish felt something familiar in holding Twinkle. It was as if he had caught her like this before.

 

Memories flashed in  Twinkle's mind of each incident that Kunj had prevented harm to come to her. Her eyes welled up and she sprung away from Krish's arms.

 

" Tum theek toh ho?," he asked.

 

She merely nodded.

 

The girls inwardly cheered but realized they needed to ensure their concern was visible to avoid suspicion from Krish's end.

 

" Twinkle toh theek hai?," Chinki and  Amrita exclaimed.

 

" Di aap ko chot toh nahin lagi?," Bubbly inquired.

 

Twinkle tried not to blush.

 

"Main theek hoon," Twinkle muttered.

 

She walked a bit ahead. But she stopped to glance back at him.

 

 Krish felt like he should  crack a joke or say something else to her, but he was at a loss for words.

 

 They all headed off for shopping. Twinkle stopped short at a rack of lenghas and cholis.

 

Krish gazed at her from a distance and suddenly without his own accord, he emerged closer to where Twinkle stood.

 

"Tuj pe yeh rang sabse sundar lagta hai," he  whispered into her ear.

 

Stunned at his own words he backed off before she could fully turn around to confront him for these words.

 

 Twinkle's instincts were further  confirmed when Krish ordered exactly what Kunj would have ordered at the Thai restaurant they stopped at later.

 

Only she knew Kunj wasn't fond of eggs with his noodles.

 

" Please usse mein andhe mat dhalna,"  Twinkle quipped.

 

Krish looked at her surprised.

 

Chinki and Amrita exchanged victory glances. Bubbly wasn't sure how to react.

 

" Just figured he may not like it," Twinkle muttered.

 

"It's fine Twinkle. I don't like eggs with my noodles," Krish quipped.

 

 The next few days passed by quickly. Twinkle realized Krish was most likely Kunj, but knew he would think she was crazy.

 

" Amrita I know you all have tried to bring me and Krish close to see if he is really my Kunj, but I do not want to put pressure on him to remember the past. Kal hum sab jaare hain wapas Amritsar.  I will pray whatever is right for all of us happens soon," Twinkle stated.

 

 Amrita was at a loss of words. She wanted Twinkle to convince Krish of his true identity.

 

 

" Mujhe poora vishwas hai ki Baabaji ne jiju ko bachaya hai," Bubbly declared  after Twinkle walked away.

 

" Haan Bubbly. Ab yeh dekhna hai, kya Krish  Amritsar aaya gaya?," Chinki questioned.

 

 As planned Amrita was to call Krish to thank him for escorting them around Delhi after the girls left.

 

However before she could call him, she received a call from him.

 

" Amrita mujhe batao tumare paas Kunj Sarna ki ek photo hai?," he asked suddenly.

 

" Haan hai, ek second main tuhme bhej thi hoon," she replied.

 

 Krish waited patiently and was stunned at the picture before him. It was then he knew the truth.

 

His real name was Kunj Sarna.

 

He quickly called Amrita back.

 

" Twinkle kahan hai?," he asked.

 

" Woh toh baas abhi Amritsar chali gayi," Amrita stated.

 

Krish was feeling forlorn.

 

 

"Muhje bhi wahan jana chaiye hai," he muttered.

 

" Kyun, woh toh shaadi ke liye..,"

 

" Doorsi shaadi? Lekin uske pati ki body nahin mili abhi tak right?," he asked.

 

Amrita smiled to herself.

 

" Tumare uski saath koi rishta hai kya?," she teased.

 

" Haan, mujhe poora yakeen hai ki woh meri patni hai. Main yeh shaadi nahin hone dunga," he declared before hanging up.

 

 

Amrita  tucked her phone away after messaging Chinki.

 

"Thanks Babaji iss ke liye!"

Edited by adventure_gurl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks Jerry!😉
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Amazing update, Loved it.
Continue soon please.
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thanks so much one more update coming up when I get more likes and comments
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wow di 
amazing update 
loved it 
aww so krish is our kunj na 
eagerly waiting for next update 
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This is such a sweet story
Loved the updates.
So awesome that Krish is Kunj
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Originally posted by: priyanvs

wow di 

amazing update 
loved it 
aww so krish is our kunj na 
eagerly waiting for next update 


so glad you liked it dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Duumps

This is such a sweet story
Loved the updates.
So awesome that Krish is Kunj


thanks for reading hope you like next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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here is next part might be last

Part Five

 

He didn't remember how he got to Delhi, in fact he didn't remember his wedding either, but he knew Twinkle was his wife. He couldn't let her remarry  to someone else if he was alive and well. Ok yes he wasn't hundred well. He didn't have any memories of their life together but  he  felt an emotional tug towards her.

 

She was his and he was hers.

 

 Meanwhile in Amritsar..

 

The girls arrived back to their homes and wedding preparations began immediately in full swing.

 

 Twinkle wondered if Krish would get his memory back. Would he return home to her?

 

 In a trance, she carried the tray of haldi for the ceremony the morning before the wedding.

 

She had to climb the stairs  to reach the room for where they ceremony was being held. Suddenly she lost her balance and almost fell backwards but strong arms caught her by the waist.

 

 

Kunj had arrived at the hotel where the wedding was to be held the next day. He saw Twinkle heading up the stairs with a tray. He rushed to catch up to her. Suddenly she tripped and he reached forward to catch her.

 

 He felt the haldi land on his face.

 

Twinkle tried to balance the remaining haldi. The tray dropped and suddenly she fell forward knocking Kunj down with her.

 

"Arre phirse se siyappa !," he yelled at her.

 

 The ladies upstairs heard the commotion and arrived to see what the matter was.

 

They were stunned to see  Kunj covered in haldi and Twinkle on top of him at the bottom of the stairs.

 

" Kunj tum vapas agaye!," Twinkle squealed.

 

 Leela,  Bubbly and Chinki rushed over to them.

 

" Babaji ki kripa hai hum par. Mera damad vapas agaya!," Leela exclaimed.

 

" Kunj tumhe sab yaad agaya?," Twinkle asked as they got up.

 

" Nahin lekin mujhe pata hai ki tu meri patni hai. Phir yeh shaadi kyun kari ho?," he inquired.

 

" Kunj yeh meri shaadi thori na hai," his wife replied.

 

"Phir kiski?"

 

"Meri hai Jiju," Chinki quipped.

 

"Kunj tuhme lagta hai ki tum se zyada acha jeevan sathi , Twinkle ko mil sakta hai? These past three months all she is done is pine for your return. Jeena bol he gayi meri baachi," Leela declared.

 

Kunj looked solemnly at Twinkle. They must have looked a mess right now but he could see the look in her eyes. She had been through a lot these past few months.

 

" Twinkle toh yeh teri shaadi nahin hai," he said inching closer to her.

 

"  I have missed you a lot Kunj," she whispered.

 

Suddenly, Kunj held his head in hands and the world felt like it was spinning.

 

The last thing he recalled before he went blank is Twinkle's screaming his name.

 

 

 A few hours later,

 

Bebe had arrived  to wait for Kunj to wake up. The doctor said there was no gurantee Kunj would recall everything.

 

 

" Lekin mera Kunj laut aya hai. This is what matters most," Bebe declared as she hugged Twinkle.

 

 Twinkle smiled slightly but she was concerned as to why he had fainted.

 

 Finally Kunj regained consciousness as Bebe caressed his head.

 

 He smiled slightly at Bebe. Then realization dawned on him.

 

" Bebe , Twinkle kahan hai?  Who Yuvraj ne muhje marne ki koshish ki phir Twinkle toh theek hai hai na? Main yahaan kaise?," he  exclaimed.

 

" Relax Kunj. Uss baat ko teen mahine ko chuke hain," Bebe said calmly.

 

 Twinkle  arrived in the room and Kunj rushed over to her and took the tray from her.

 

 

" Tu theek haina? I was so worried you were unconscious and then Yuvraj tried to drown me again," Kunj stated.

 

Twinkle's eyes filled with tears and she hugged him close.

 

 He wrapped his arms around her petite figure.

 

Finally Twinkle felt like she was home. Bebe looked on with glee.

 

"Phirse koi nazar na lage mere bachein par!"

 

 

Kunj met the rest of his family at Chinki's wedding the next day. He pledged he would not return to live with them unless Twinkle was accepted honorably as their bahu again.

 

Usha begrundingly agreed.

 

After the reception, Twinkle would  have her ghar parvesh back into Sarna Manison.

 

Twinkle and Kunj stood together  throwing flowers at  Chinki and Aditya as they made their seven rounds around the scared fire. Twinkle recalled how drama filled her own wedding was but was glad Kunj was back and standing besides her today.

 

Kunj was elated that he was back where he belonged.

 

There was something he wished he told Twinkle months ago. Tonight he would tell her and show her how much he loved her.

 

He was back and he wasn't going to let her go ever again.

 

 

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read all the parts now.
It was just awesome.
Unique story.😊