Fan Fiction! Nafrat Main Pyaar! - Page 104

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Posted: 20 years ago

Guys i dont want to streach this fan fic. So i am gonna end it very soon. Make be another 10 more parts and thats it, i dont know if i'll start a new one cuz i dont have an idea rite now, if u have idea's for a new fan-fic u can PM them to me, or maybe i'll find a story myself. I'm not sure, but this fan fic will come to an end in abt a month for sure.

Enyoj the rest,

Neha

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Posted: 20 years ago
awww!! im gonna miss it!!! newayz atleast u'll entertain us w/ ur other 1!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

i would cont longer, but then i need to creat a new problem. And i am sure u guys will love that, Rite! 😉😆

But dont worry, i'm not going any where before i compleat 200 pages. 😆

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Posted: 20 years ago

Next Part.

Kripa is sitting in her room, Mendhi still on her hands, When Krish comes in.

Kk: Mom, Aapna aapna haat kyun color kiya, aap tho kethi thi ki haat color karna buri baat hai?

Kripa laughs at this.

K: Maina aapna haat nahie color kiya beta.

Kk: Tho?

K: Yeh mendhi hai?

Kk: Aapna kyun lagayi?

K: Aaisa he

Kk: Tho Aaliya bua na kyun lagai?

K: Unki shaadi hai!

Kk: Lakin aapki shaadi tho nahie hai naa?

K: Hai bhi, nahi bhi

Kk: Matlab?

K: Aap nahie samjo ga beta.

Now Krish lies down in Kripa's lap.

Kripa bends down and kisses his forehead.

Kk: I love u mom.

K: I love u too beta.

Now Krish turns and Hugs Kripa around her stomach, and Anagd comes in and sits down next to them.

A: Yeh Kya, saara pyaar apni mummy ka liya, aur mera liya kuch bhi nahie.

Krish looks at Anagd, and then jumps into his lap, Anagd puts his arms around Krish, and kisses his cheek.

Kk: Dad aapko pata hai, mera b-day 3 months main hai!

A: Wow, tho aap kitna saal ka ho jayga?

Kk: Um.... Krish counts on his tiny fingures and Kripa and Anagd look at him sweetly.

Kk: 4 years.

A: Arre wha! Mera beta ki tho counting bhi aati hai.

Kk: Kykuni main smart hoo!

A: Ofcourse u are.

Kk: Kya main aaj aapka saath soo saktha hoo.

A: Ofcourse beta! U can sleep rite here.

Kk: YES!

Kripa laughs and so does Angad.

K: Main abhi aaie.

Kripa comes back drying her hands she sits down back on the bed and then looks at the color of her mendhi, and then smiles.

A: Look at that Million dollar smile.

Krish looks at Kripa and sees her smiling, and then he sees Kripa's hands.

Kk: Mom... aapka haat ko kya hua.... its sooo red, and so dark and soo black.

K: Thats why i'm smiling.

Krish is confused and so is Anagd

Kk-A: What?

Kripa puts her arms around Krish, Beta ketha hai ki jab mendhi ka rang jitna sayda dark ho tho aapka pati aapko unta sayda pyaar kartha hai.

Krish is lost again, and then yawns. And slowly starts to sink into bed, and then falls asleep.

Kripa tucks him into bed nicely, and then looks at Anagd.

A: So are u exicted to get married?

K: Very!

A: Good!

K: Anagd, sach, chaha humari shaadi ho chuki ho lakin yeh meri asli shaadi hai, mera poora pariwaar mera saath hai, saara rasam aur revaaz ka saath meri shaadi hogi, bilkul waisa jaisa main kabhi soocha tha.

Angad smiles at Kripa.

K: Ab aap batayi dulha raja, aapko kaisa lagraha hai.

A: Well, mujhe bauth aacha lagraha hai.

Kripa smiles back at him.

K: Oh.. yaad aaya.

She gets up from her bed and runs to the closet.

A: Kya hua.

K: I bought u something.

A: Kya?

K: Rukho naa.

Now Anagd gets up from his bed and walks to Kripa.

K: Milgya.

Kripa hands Angad a small box wrapped in golden and blue paper.

K: Here u go!

A: Is ma hai kya.

K: Khool ka dekho, kudh pata chal jayga.

Anagd unwraps the gift slowly and carefully.

And then opens the small box, and takes the gift out.

Tears swell in his eyes as he looks at the beautiful gift.

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Posted: 20 years ago
that was really good neha plz continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
oh god!!!!!!!!! itni suspence, yaar mujhe to heart attack hone wala hai, continue soonnnnn

amazing part!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
Wow that was so good! Hmm i wonder what the gift is that it brought tears to angads eyes...pls continue soon!
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow neha it was a fantastic part pls cont soon. man i cant wait to read what the gift is that brought tears in angads eyes. and best of luck for yr next fan fic will be waitin 4 it. 👏👍🏼
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Posted: 20 years ago
Thanks guys, The gift well u'll have to wait a little longer to find out. Well to be honest even i dont know what the gift is, 😆😕 i just came up with the whole part out of no where, i dont know what i am writting until its written. 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
😆😆 very sweet prt!!! can't wait 4 the nxt 1!!!!!!!

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