SwaRon Drabble: Of Dances and Bets

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The whole college had been aware of their tango, for everyone tried their best to avoid getting in the middle of it.


She was the college Diva; snobbish, arrogant and totally uptight. He was the loverboy; calm, humble and everything she wasn't. Except the fact that both of them were stubborn. Their bickering was famous in the college premises, the favourite choice of entertainment. One would always find a small crowd inconspicuously gathered around the duo as they carried out their battle of wills. For a silent student, he surely knew where and how to push her buttons.


Their friends were the most pitied. Despite the fact that the animosity between the two teams namely the Dazzlers and the Weaklings was prevalent, nobody wished to get stuck in the great battle of wits. Even if it were their best friends. Especially then.


While some thought they'd rip each others head off, others believed they'd end up together before doing so. Because they could not deny the combustible chemistry those two shared. It was the hottest topic in the college, various bets were placed on them; would they have another fight today? Would she slap him in agitation? Or would they finally see sense and start kissing each other?


Only the first bet reached any conclusion; they fought everyday.


Soon the bets faded away, they simply seemed to go no where. Just stuck in their long, durable battles, till one fine day, to be specific; Rose day.


Everyone was busy trying to woo their 'the one' and passing roses to beauties of the college, when she entered the room her chin high in the air. The effect was instant, every male jaw dropped in awe of her. Her presence always did that, add the fact that she'd dance with one of the boys that night, the effect was tremendous. In a matter of minutes all the boys (the single ones) were lined up in front of the stairs, awaiting the start of the choose-a-partner ritual. Speculations grew in the room as everyone noticed him in the line, a lopsided smirk on his face.


There was no way she would choose him, right?


People were already shaking hands and passing money when she started her inspection. Come on people, care to wager? Fifty bucks say she'll choose him. Deal, I don't think she will. Her pace grew slower as she reached him and half the audience was shocked as she came to a standstill in front of him, casting an appraising look. His grin grew and he forwarded his hand; an inviting gesture. Everyone held their breath awaiting her reaction. Come on! The hall filled with relieved sighs and disappointed groans when she placed her hand on his, a slight smile on her face.


Oh boy.


They danced in the centre of the dance floor, comfortable in each others presence, leaving everyone else baffled. The air around them was surely thickened with tension, but for once, they seemed to revel in it. She seemed to revel in it. Once in a while, she let her head fall back as a scintillating laugh left her, his smile growing wider everytime she did that. No one knew how to process this new development, if it was one. They noticed a considerable distance between them, perhaps an effort to dismiss their obvious chemistry, to emphasize on their lack of a relation.


No one was blind though, they knew what this meant. The bet counter was back in business.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just a random, fun drabble on SwaRon, because I've written enough angst, I think.


This is a different take on how the dynamics between Swayam and Sharon could probably be in college, with all their bickering and all. I don't know how it really is, I didn't think much while writing it. 😆

Hope you like it.

Cheers
Nishi.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved.

^Unreserve^

Sorry! Because this took so long but you already know the reason!

Coming to this note,

because I've written enough angst, I think. I second you here wholeheartedly 😛

Now turning my attention to the original cause of this comment!

Do you know how much fun it was to actually read this as a spectator who just happen to be there at all those moments.

This was so much fun in being the one who actually make those bets. I totally loved this one because it was just so great imagining them bickering and dancing and all.

Lovely work Nishi.

A fellow Sherlock fan.
Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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In the middle of all the angst you have written, this drabble was a sigh of relief. Enjoyed reading it. Not that I don't enjoy reading your other works, but you are too much addicted to angst and that is the last thing I will get addicted to!! Good work here:).
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The journey of Swayam and Sharon towards becoming SwaRon is what I loved watching the most in the show and probably is one of the strongest reasons why I am so addicted to the characters and you gave a glimpse of just that.
It was totally a bliss to read this!
Beautiful:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was something different and beautiful!
Awesome ^_^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved
-Unreserved-

It's been long, I have read a good Swaron OS and light one, without any heavy emotions. It was very refreshing.

You are a very writer good writer, no doubt in it. You've kept the Swaron essence in this. The headstrong diva, and naive Swayam. Their dance and people betting on it. It reminds me of d3.

Good job done.

P.S. Thank you Chitra for the PM.

-Shivani :)
Edited by --Ecstasy-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unreserved at page 1! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Their journey of becoming swaron is well written

Loved it
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The strong headed diva
The naive swayum.. Just perfect together
When they are together ppl jus drool
Undoubtedly another great piece of write up from you.
Their bickering is their trademark..
The way they grew to b two individuals to one is amazing and and you have penned it smartly with such command on the language..
Well your 200% right on writing a light os.
Something much needed is some light and sweet swaron work.

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