Hiee 😊
Awww this is such an adorable story yaar just loved it! Awsome! Diferent and with loads of cuteness from the kids! Great keep going! 😊
Just wanna give you few suggestions if you don't mind ... Try changing the type of letter you use because it's very big and not very pleasnt while reading, then when there are dialogs try seperating them with "this" hi-funs, that way it will be easier to read.
Apart from that it's a very good work! 👏
Thank you 🤗
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