Only Yours - updated on 23-12-2015 /PG 1

Posted: 8 years ago
PLZ READ THIS NOTE



HI FRIENDS,

Today i am sharing just a small OS which i wrote on the ocassion of my sweet baby's Birthday ❤️


THIS OS IS DEDICATED TO SIMI 🤗

So all silent readers if you dont want to give your view on OS never mind but pls leave a pray/wish for her as she really need that.

Thanks to all in advance. 😊Edited by richa_kapoor - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago



Edited by richa_kapoor - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
ONLY YOURS


"there is she.",doc open the door of forbidden room where a lifeless girl laying alone in a wait for her death as all forgot her long ago. The man with doc signals and he left. He step inside and sat near that almos girl. She was crying and talking with her teddy bear toy. "Geet..." his lips droodle and voice leave seeing the girl in such state. She lost all her charm,only a skelton carrying a thin layer of skin. She glance up hearing her name but not recognise him. She get scared as every new person for her create panic in her heart.

His eyes welled up seeing his love like this. She not even recognising him properly,as she was came here 7 years ago forcibly by her family. 7 years and she lost everything one by one. "Geet its me,your Maan." he trying to remind her and she stare him weirdly.

Same time her nurse came to give medi to her. "no injection... No no injection." she cried and get fussy as it pained alot.

"pls sister." Maan pleads.

"you must be Maan right?" she asked and he stunn how come she knew about him. "dont be shocked. When she brought here she daily calls you. Crying a lot taking your name. But i know its not your fault when you not aware about her." her voice turn heavy as she recalled how Geet died every day in his absence. Maan asked how it all happens. "during some tests her parents came to know that she will never able to concieve so the boy they choose broke the marriage. Later they decide her to get married to some man who is double to her age. She protests and want to contact you. Poor soul get punished for this. They beat her so butually to made her forgot you. She was almost dead when she came here. But dont know why she survived to suffer more. They reliefed not for her but for themselves and threaten her. Even here they beat her so she dont tell their name to police." she was teliing and Maan's every nerve fluffred and fists grippened. Even after so much control his eyes shed tears. "her head had a serious injury and being alone here she went to depression gradually. They even stop visiting her and left her to die alone. Now she is dead soul. She forgot ppl. Sometimes she dont even remember her own name."


"where are they?" he asked in hard voice.

"i dont know,coz this time she was helping by NGO who will take care of patients who dont have their loved ones." she revealed.

Maan stood up and talked to doc. He decided to take her along with him back to India. As per rules only relative can took her as NGO cant take chance. Maan assured them and put his wish of marrying her before them. But Geet wasn't in a state to decide for herself. So NGO first enqired about him and gave him permission. Meantime Geet get friendly with Maan again. In his warmth she start recognising him. Though she forgot but now she dont scared of him. Maan brough her back with him to india after completing all formaloties and do all arrangements at his home. Geet was staring as everything is new for her.

"Maan... We...we live here?" she asked in cute baby voice as her voice is not cleared.

"ha jaan we live here." Maan bend on his knees and caress her with a smile. He kissed on her forehead and smile came on her dried lips.

"maan meko waha achha nahi lagta...waha hospital me. All beat me." she told him again. Though same thing she told him several time but she wants to told her Maan everything.

"i know baby tabi to hum yaha aa gaye. From now my jaan will live here only." he assured her again as she needs his assurance again and again.


"Geet baby live here with Teddy friend." she said with smile and Maan took her to their room.

She needs time to recover but Maan dont give up. He hired best docs for her. Many therpies and sessions with specialist make it possible. Now she start responding to her treatment and this happened only because of Maan. His love and care brought the dead soul to life again. When she get bit alright he legally married to her.


Geet is still weak but she recovering. She strat laughing which she forgot ages ago. One day Maan came late and she slapped him in anger. Maan stunned but he never complain and asked sorry as he knew she cant live without him and how she must be feel in his absence. "you you bad friend. Leave me for whole day." she pout and cried to.

Maan pulled his ears and ask for sorry. He embraced her asked for sorry. Soon she melts in his arms. Their relation is growing still needs a time as Geet went far away...


Handle her is not easy but Maan had trust on his love for her which was bigger than any hurdle. He leave her family coz punishing them was her right only. He was still waiting when she get alright,same Geet who was bubbly and full of life. Their journey is tough but their love figting with all odds and Geet's love for him increasing more than before,that's why even in this state she only recognise him and trust him so easily... Love can do miracle and Maan waiting for that happens...
Posted: 8 years ago
WISH YOU HAPPY BIRTHDAY
GOD BLESS YOU DEAR😊
very nice os
geet was not recognize maan
maan waiting for miracle
waiting for more
Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely story, poor Geet she is been tortured by her own parents how can someone be cruel to thier child. I hope maan will take care of geet and get her back to life. Her parents should be punished which I definetly know maan will do
Posted: 8 years ago
many many happie returns of the day...awesome os...nd emotional too...geet conditiin is worse when maan first see her...but love make everything good..
Posted: 8 years ago
Her own parents did this so disgusting .
thank god maan save her.
her parents should be punshied .
Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it poor geet why did there do that to her and why did Mann leave her all those year ago and then forced to marry old man

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