TwiNj FF: The Storm in our Soul (Chp11 Pg22) 03/09 - Page 4

Edited by kusharberry - 8 years ago

Nice update...every single emotion...even the silence to awkwardness... the way how kunj told her that she is important for him...and so is this marriage...loved it...

Brautiful is the only word that comes to my mind... U know i love ur stories ryt? I cant seem to stop when once started... I read the whole ff again... I cant seem to put a stop to myself... I love u for updating... U just made me immensely happy.. 

Unexpected update.
Totally unexpected.
Firstly i expected ki twinkle naraz hogi lekin she was sorry.
Matlab dil khush kar dia yeh update likhke.
I dint expected this from manohar, usha is not good.
Anyways i loved the kisses and true confession. Plz thoda sa or heart to heart talking. Plz.
Plz plz jaldi continue karo.
I am falling in love with this ff
jldi continue

"That unusual thing doesn't like roses." I love the little instances of lightheartedness you put in there. Would love to read more of those :) and the part with Kunj holding Twinkle and kissing her while crying made my heart flutter lol. I wish I could read everything in one go because it's so hard to wait for the updates! But yes, update soon haha :)

Great update...kunj is happily helping her feel comfortable...he is so caring towards her and twinkle is also feeling guilty...the emotions are clearly written, good job

Ohh My god.

This story is so unique.

so beautiful! bittersweet that everyone treats her so badly and at   least Kunj is supporting  her through all this! He was upset he only recalled three of her favorite foods and knew what flowers she liked, that was so emotional and well done!

Amazing update ,well written.
Loved it.
Continue soon plz.