Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK
Wow chhavi superb. Kal adi ka naam aaya aur aaj ff ka next part. Too good. Loved d destiny conversation. Excellent update. Waiting for d next part.
Originally posted by: creationschhavi
part-16Aditya chakor standing together in titanic pose one holding handsTheir eyes closedAnd enjoying the rain totallyLost in the thoughts of each otherHasi Bann Gaye plays...Chakor remembers how adi saved her from trainHow they used to eat icecream togetherHow he explained about music playerAnd she get boredSlight smile spread on her face remembering the cute innocence smart adiAdi remembers their hifitheir fighting on every small thingTheir holding hands of each otherWhen chakor hugged him on her birthdaySlight smile spread on his face to after remembering chakorHis everything nowSuddenly wind starts blowing fast very fast and rain stopsBoth open their eyes slowly one after the other and see towards skyAdi :chakor hum...Chakor :haan kya aadi ...boloAdi holds herAdi :chakor hum itni der se yahan pe bheeg rahe theBeemar pad gaye to ...Chakor : to kya ??Hum itne time baad barish ka maja liye ek saath aur tumhe bimar hone ki chinta padi hai? ??Adi :hum aise hi hainKoi problem???Chakor :chakor ko bhalla apne bijli ke dabbe se kya problem hui sakat hai? ??Adi :theek haiAb chalo yahaan seHe holds her hand and starts moving forward...Chakor hold his hand and stops himthodi der aur yahaan pls...Adi:par kyon?Chakor :hume tumse kuch kehna hai ...Adi :haan boloChakor :adi...Humari life kitni ajeeb hai naa...Kismat
Adi:mm destiny...
adi :kisiko hum apne banana chahte hain aur koi kab humara apna ban jaata hai hume pata hi nahin chalta Adi points his finger at her head :are buddhu
Isi ko to kismat kehte hain
chakor :adi... par
adi :chakor hum ye saari baate ghar jaa kar bhi kar sakte hain ...
Chakor :naahin... yahin par
adi :achchha meri maa theek hai ...
Chakor :haan to adi ...kismat kya hoti hai? Tum to humre bijli ka dabba ho naa... tum ko to sab pata hovat hai...
Chakor sits under tree there and asks adi also to sit there and tell
Adi :kismat... Kismat wo hai jo insaan ki soch se bhot dur hai
He holds chakor chin And d
Says :wo...upar dekho he points towards moon Chakor :chandu ..ji...
Adi:haan ...chandu ji Ye tumhari meri hum sab ki kismat ye hi likhte hain
chakor:par...ye to humare best friend hain naa...to ii humka batavat kyon nahin humri kismat...??Adi :buddhu... kimat koi batane ki cheej nahin hoti Ye to bas hume same ke saath hi pata chalti hai Chakor :achchha ii batao humre liye kaun achchha hai kun bura ii kese pata lagat hai...
iske...peechchhe bhi kismat hovat hai naa Agar humri kimat achchhi hai to hum ko pata lagi hai naa
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Adi :chakor!!!tumhe kya hua hai aaj .. itne saare questions ek saath
???
Kuch hua hai kya? ?
Chakor :adi humka kuchchho nahin hua hai bas hum ii janna chahvat hain... She holds her hand Batao naa...
Adi:ye sab samay ke saath pata chalta hai Hum kisi ko achchha sachha samajhte hai Aur hota kuch auur hai
Hume nahin pata ki kaise pata lagaya jaye par
Hum ye mante hain ki jaroori nahin jo jaisa dikje wo waisa hi ho Jaise
Life itni easy dikhti hai
Aur hai kitni complicated
chakor :ek min ...ek min...complicated matlab??
Adi :matlab...uljhi hui ...
Chakor :aur pyaar?
Adi looks in her eyes with love Their hairs start flying...
Adi :pyaar?
Chakor :haan ...pyaar... Adi :humari dictionary mein
Pyaar ka matlab nahin hai Bas itna jante hain ki pyaar wo hai jo hum apne dada dadi mummy aur papa se karte the ...
Chakor :bas...
Adi :bas matlab...??
Chakor :kuch nahin...
adi :aur koi question hai kya madam?
?
Chakor :mm...she smiles Nahin ...shayad Jaab yaad avega tab batayege
adi :to ab hum ghar chalein? ??
Chakor :mmm
How it is frds?π
Originally posted by: 34DAYA56
Awesome story with full on romance. I love this story lot...π
Originally posted by: smiles_uk
nice one ... keep it up (y)
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