OS : A Moment Of Life... - Page 2

OMG Love it...It was your first attempt ? really? Looks like you'r perfect in writing, beautifully written, the choice of words, the situation...I mean Lovely yar. It was amazing really, I enjoyed every bit of it, I have read it two three times by now and you know what I suggest you should write more, you have good skills, use it. 
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Lovely OS... ..

Soo cute yet romantic OS..
bilkul nhi lagta it is ur 1st attempt..
beautiful... pls do write more...

Superb OS
Hot nd romantic
It's doesn't seems your first attempt
Plz do write more

Originally posted by: Rayaland

Awww super romantic n amazing part plss keep writing

Thnqs a lot.. It means a lot 2 me that u r liking it..
And yes I will keep writing I have written one nd will post in few days.. :))

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

sooo superb. don't look like it is ur first attempt.

do write more.

I m glad that u liked... Nd yes I will write more :)).. Thnxs 4 commenting...

Originally posted by: DevajaniG

rmntc part...do write more.

Thnq u ... :)) :-)

Originally posted by: priyanka_rk

Hey!   :DFinally You posted!! ;) Loved it! Your first one na but it doesn't look like your first one!! :P

Hey yes I finally wrote . Its quiet surprising 4 me too. U too should get credit as u were the 1 to make my I'd.Thnxs a lot girl.. :) :)

Originally posted by: bubbleneetu

They danced on Khuda Jane 😆 btw superb os 👏 just loved it! Please write more 😊

Oops Sorry my mistake.
I m glad that u liked... Thnkwe :))

Originally posted by: sssabcd

so hot and romantic

Thank You :))