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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 59

Awesome update

Finally it's their time to celebrate, to cherish, to make all their dreams come true and I am completely agree with you that it's ARSHI'S "commitment to happiness". You sum up everything in this chapter perfectly and finally they reached their destination. Whole update is indeed like a "jashan", reader can clearly feel the jubilance, camaraderie, excitement, happiness and most importantly peace which both the characters were feeling in the entire update.

Though I don't want to discuss anything other than arhi but the way you gave a fitting closure to lavanya is indeed necessary and it's not about giving a fitting end to lavanya's story but it's all about khushi and her satisfaction right.

Finally they reached Kashmir from where it all started and I am more than happy that it's just two of them. I know it's hard for khushi but as reader I am very happy for this private wedding and it looks more beautiful this way and whole ambience is so fitting for these two which makes this update more magical and beautiful. The way you capture arhi passion and love is simply beautiful and absolutely brilliant.

Thank you jenny for giving us such a beautiful and memorable update.

Chapter 60

AWESOME UPDATE

It was already settled in sujatas mind that arnav is not good enough for khushi, the daughter she is so proud of and take pride in her upbringing that she raise such an all rounder kind a girl, sujata was not expecting anything of this kind where her flawless daughter would choose a man who had so much of baggage, a divorcee, a man whose character was not according to her liking. I think she don't want any black spot in khushi life's and according to her assessment, arnav is the black spot in her daughter's life. I totally agree that its her way of protecting her child (can't blame sujata entirely because she don't know the whole truth) but still she should give khushi a fair chance to explain things to her. In all this she forgets to communicate with her child or most importantly give arnav a benefit of doubt. Again sijata is wrong in her judgment where she thinks that she lose khushi and navin is so right that it sujata who makes things more complicated not just for khushi but for the whole family. Nobody was asking her to change her view point or believes but it would be less complicated if she try to give arnav and khushi a fair chance.

Poor anita my heart really goes out for her but I am loving this new guy he is kinda look cool and perfect for anu.

And jenny I seriously have no words for our lovable couple, they growing stronger day by day and enjoying and relishing every single moment of their married life and their contentment and blissfulness making me so happy and I really want to applaud you the way you wrote it down there lovemaking scene is simply amazing and brilliant.

Sorry I am commenting very late my asli dunya is still super crazy but finally I catch up with the last updates. Happy new year and happy birthday jenny and may this year bring lots of joy, happiness and prosperity AMEN.

Thanks for the pm

Edited by faree - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting teaser.
First one I don't have any idea who are talking.
Second one maybe Anita and Aman.
Third one arnav and Khushi.
Happy birthday to you Jenny. Hope you had blast with your family. Happy new year once again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
No worries jenny..it's one of your beautiful story...
Seriously 2 yrs ..it didn't felt like...


Plese no rush take your time to finish
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Posted: 9 years ago
BELATED HAPPY BIRTHDAY JENN...
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Posted: 9 years ago
1. the plane stranger guy.. i guess
2. Anita... i think

3. newly wed couple... mr n mrs raizada
.. is it ??

and belated happy wali birthday Jen 😊
Edited by awroneema - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
Congratulations for the new thread
Like it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
happy New year Jenny :)

Cannot wait for next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
Jenny...I finally caught up with the story. Seems like ages since I've been here and, boy, did I miss you and all my friends on IF. Happy New Year to you and everyone reading this story.
The last few chapters have been amazing in the depth of emotion and sheer understanding of human nature that you have portrayed. The love, hate, uncertainty, joy and despair that the characters are going through...

Khushi and Arnav have weathered the storm of pain and rejection, criticism and even hate to finally reach a place where their love is stronger than ever and able to withstand the strongest opposition. And by that I definitely mean Sujata. I have never agreed with her behavior, although I have understood where she's coming from, being a mother herself. But to be able to keep up that angst, that sheer "how could she do this to her own mother?" attitude for 3-4 months... But I'm glad that good sense has finally prevailed and that she was able to see her daughter as a bride if not to actually attend the wedding. I doubt I would have forgiven her if she'd continued her silence and rejection even on Khushi's wedding day 😊

Anita and Aman...what a bloody mess. Aman has screwed up big time. And though I did think it would have been nice to see them together, I'm now glad it didn't work out. As Khushi said, there's something better in her future (including, hopefully a better mother-in-law than she would have had if she were to marry Aman😆)

Waiting eagerly to read the next and next and next chapters...😊


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: IPK007

Nobody got all three right so far 😛 This is fun 😃 And whoever gets all three right will get a special custom OS (your choice plot and setting) from me :)

Will be back 🤗

PS: Thank you so much all of you for the birthday wishes❤️ I will get back to each one of you soon.



This is interesting and very tempting! Usually I don't bother with guessing at all as I am absolutely no good at it but I'm willing to try :) anything to make you write more stories:)

The first one I also think it's Aaron as he is new and everyone else is more or less set in their professions.
The second one for some reasons seems to be Lavanya. The only person who can be scared of love. Arnav and Khushi are already in love and Anita barely even touched the emotion to be scared of it.
The third has to Khushi talking to Arnav about his mom?

All wild guess and maybe all wrong but it was fun giving my brain a wee bit workout after the holiday laziness :)
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wish you a very happy new year !! Awesome teaser !! I am wondering if it's khushi's sister Anita and the guy she met in her flight !! Looking forward to the next update and a very happy belated birthday to you. 😳

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