SS-Tere mere darmiya last part B updated on pg 82 dated 05/3/2017 - Page 58

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It's quite an intriguing preview.
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wow!!! the sweet end is near!!! and the revelation!! plzz... next soon
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I was sure from start that from beginning that some big secret was hidden behind Priya father's death and hope Ram will be soon out from jail.
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                    LAST PART - A
             
priya thinking about all this and think bas kuch he der ki bat hai priya ek bar koi strong evidence mere hath lag jaye fer toh mai hmesha k liye yha se chli jayungi per ram ko sja dilane k bad...

ram and vikram still setting in ram cabin and talking about some office projects and vikram or neha wedding..

ram - vikram hall book ker diya hai Maine bas ab klse tum logo k sare rituals shuru ho jayenge..or fer tu praya ho jayega and both laugh..

vikram - pagal hai Kya jarurt pdi toh neha ko chod dunga..jeena bhi chod dunga per tujhe nhi chod skta...Tu toh jaan hai mere...tujhse jada is duniya mai mere liye koi bhi jaruri nhi..

ram - yesab btane ki jarurt nhi hai tujhe yar..main janta hu..jada senti mat ho..

priya in her room..and her phn ring..she attend the call...

priya - haan rajat bolo..

raj - priya or koi evidence mila..

priya - hmm ek paper Mila toh hai uski pic bhejti hu tumhe..us per shayed kuch cities or countries k naam hai...Or 2-4 contacts hai...

raj - ok nyc very gud priya..but priya mujhe koi asa proof chahiye jo 100% Proov krde ki ram don hai...ase chote mote proovs toh Vo minto mai juth sabit ker dega...bht hoshiyar hai vo..

priya - lil angry shout on him..rajat mai koshish ker rhi hu na..jitna ho ske ker rhi hu...tum nhi ho yha main hu...mujhe pta hai ki Kya beet rhi hai mujh per..her pal apne papa k murderer Ko apne samne dekh ker kya gujrti hai mere dil per...Or tumhe sirf apne proovs Se matlab hai...mujh per Kya gujarti hai tumhe koi ferk nhi pdta...

raj - rajat ko bht gussa ata hai ye sab sunker but he control his anger or said I know priya tum kis situation se gujar rhi ho...uncle k liye he toh ye Sab ker rhe hain...unko insaf dilane k liye..but tumhe lgta hai ki mai kuch nhi smjhta..ager ab bhi tumhe lgta hai ki mai nhi smjhta toh tum abhi or isi time vha se chli jao..and make angry faces

priya - it's ok rajat...m sry..mai thodi tention mai thi..

rajat - priya mai b utni he koshish krta hu jitni ki tum..Or mujhe kuch important info mili hai tumhe bht help krege..

priya - Kya pta chla hai..

raj - priya ram k Don hone se related jitne bhi kam hai contact hai bade bade criminals k contact unki information Or inki deals sbkuch...ek chip mai hai..tumhe vo chip dhundni hogi...vhi hai main evidence jiski base per hm ram ko fansi tak dila skte hai...

priya was shocked her heart skip a beat ..rajat k muh se ram Ko fansi k bare mai sunker..
she just said ok I try and cut the call..

rajat - ab ise kya ho gya he was so angry on her..ye ladki sach mai kisi kam Ki nhi...ram ram or ram bas...us kmine ne isk bap ko Mar diya fer bhi ise use ki padi hai...but priya my love kuch bhi krlo tumhe usk krib toh ab kbhi nhi jane dunga...

priya was crying silently in her room holding ram photo in her hand...y u do this to me ram...kaha fsa diya hai mujhe..kya kru Kya na kru kuch smjh nhi Aa rha...man toh ker rha hai ki sab kuch btadu apko or apne dil se bhoj km kru..bht chilau Ap per Bht chillayu..apse swal kru puchu kyu kiya apne ye Sab..Mai sach mai yesab apk muh se sunna chahti kyu kiya apne ye sab..kash mai apk samne ro skti..bht derd hota hai mujhe ram..bht taklif..sans lena mushkil ho gya hai dam ghuttha hai mera ab yha..she wipes her tears and said nhi ab or nhi bas..rajat ko jo proov chahiye vo dhund lu fer mai chli jayungi yha Se...

IN EVE..

ram came home priya was is in kitchen cook something..ram look at her and priya look at him and sweet or emotional eyelock..dono Ki ankhe ek dusre se bht kuch Khna chahti hai per keh nhi pati..ram came inside kitchen or said..

ram - something special..

priya - look aside or said nhi bas ase he aj cooking ka mood tha toh socha apk liye kuch cook he krlu..bht din ho gye hena and look at him..

ram - haan Bht in fact ajkl Bht kuch badal gya hai...tumhe nhi lgta and took the spoon or taste pulao which priya recently cooked..

ram - shout..ahhh...priya immidently took spoon from him or said pgl hai Ap gram tha dikh nhi rha apko...jal gya na muh..give him a glass of water..and ram only staring at her...

priya - pani pe lijiye apko acha lgega..ram took glass from her..and look at the glass but not drink and place it on the slab and going from there...priya just look at him to going from there..and think inhe Kya ho gya...

priya - ajkl inhe Kya ho gya hai..bht ajib behave ker rhe hai..and again concentrate  on cooking but think about ram only..

at nyt..

ram and priya both set on dinning table and had there dinner..but didn't said anythink to each other..
priya in heart aj khane ki b tariff nhi Ki..pta nhi kaha kaha ki btao mai dube rhte hai..chlo koi nhi mai he puchti hu vase b I have to b behaved normal..and she look at him or ask..
Mr.kapoor..
ram look at her but didn't said anythink..
p - khana kesa bna hai...apne btaya nhi..

ram just smile a lil or said...tumhare bnayi hue koi chij bure ho skti hai Kya...bht acha bna hai..hmesha ki trah bas ek chij ki Kmi hai..

priya - or vo Kya..

ram - pyar..
p - jii and look at him..

ram - hmm sach mai is bar khane mai pyaar thoda Sa km lga..
priya just look at him without blink her eyes..

ram - cool down priya just joking khana thoda tikha bna hai isliye tumhe tang ker rha tha..

p - smile a lil or said ohh it's ok Maine toh km he tikha dala tha pta nhi apko jada Kyu lg rha hai..both had there dinner...after dinner both going toward there room before going ram said 

ram - priya..

priya - turn and look at him..

ram - Tumse kuch kahu..

priya - hmm..

ram - mai aj hospital gya tha Maine doc Se bat ki hai aunty mai achi improvement hai..vo bht jldi thik ho jayengi..

priya - ohh ok thanks mere liye itna sab krne k liye..

ram - umm priya ager kl ko mai na rhu toh tum..and immidently priya put her fingers on his lips or said..

p - shh...khbardar ager se bat dobara apne muh se nikali toh..and tear role down from her eyes...

ram - ram smile or said priya plzz let me complete ager mujhe kuch ho jaye toh tum or tumhari maa plz yhi rhna isi ghar mai..kyuki mai is ghar ko ase sunsan bikhra hua nhi dekh payunga mere atma ko shanti nhi milegi..toh promiss kro ki tum yhi rhoge mai rhu na rhu...and tear Role down from his dark brown eyes...and she was crying so much..both hug each other and can't control themself for share there emotions there feeling there love for each other...both was crying hugging each other tightly and remembering that moment which they spend together..

after some time both broke hug and said gn to each other or going to there specific rooms..

priya standing in the balcony and think Kyu uski in bato se mujhe itna ferk padta hai..Kyu mera khud per bas nhi rhta...itna sab hone k bad bhi..mai kyu nhi Sun pati Ki use kuch ho..sach toh ye hai ki main...mai nhi bardash ker skti ki use kuch b ho I can't even imagin..toh fer ye ldai kid bat ki hai..kisse lad rhi hu main..usse... khud se...hmare pyar se ... apni nfrat se...apne papa k Katil se. ..kisse ye sare swalo ka jwab sirf ek ram or ram mere mhobbat Mera ishq...mere ibadat use Apni ankhon k Samne kuch hote hue kase dekh skti hu..
bas Ab Bht hua mai Kl he ram se bat krungi or hmesha k liye uski jindgi Se chli jayungi..lakin apne he hatho se use mot (death)nhi de payungi..and tear continusly role down from her eyes..

next morning..
after 2 days vikram and neha Marrage ram was so busy...he chequing the things all ok or not continusly busy on calls..hall is ready rituals ki preparation ho rhi hai...

ram - haan vikram sare guest phunch gye na mai bhi bas phunch rha hu thodi der mai haan...1 hour Mai phunch jayunga...haan priya mere sath he ayegi..ok bye..
priya came to his room or said ram mujhe apse Bht jaruri bat krni hai..

ram - taking out his outfit from  wardrobe  while doing this..he take quick glace at her or said nhi priya abhi nhi darling ryt now I m dam busy bad mai bat krte hai..tum ready ho mujhe b ready hona hai tb tak tum sb kuch dekh lo sare chije gadi mai rakh li hai na..

priya - ram it's urgent..

ram - haan aram Se bat krenge na rat ko now let me ready first..I m going to take bath bye and he take out his watch and put on the table and ran toword washroom..
priya take a deep breath and turn to go..but immidently turn and look at the watch with so much concentration she took the watch in her hand and think 

priya - is watch ka design kitna ajib hai it's not like a normal watches..design the material is so different then she saw red light point in watch and think ye kya ho skta hai..she saw the watch very carefully and find 5 keys side of the watch..unme se 4 watch ki thi and when she press last key then one small micro chip coming out from watch..priya was hell shock to see this..

priya - ye chip..matlab yhi hai vo proof jisk bare mai rajat ne bola the mujhe ...priya immidently take his laptop from side table and took his pen drive and adjust that chip in it ..then slowly slowly  screen is on..she was so shocked to saw the things in front of her..

showing so many contacts...ram photos with so many dons or politicians or his pics in parties with girls..and the whole data of his work..how much money he earned..how many people he shooted..every think..she open the next folder and saw the video she play it and its the video of his father..she had tear in her eyes to see this..ram shoot him and he is die..priya's eyes red with anger..ram ki goli papa ko lgi..mere papa ko Marne wale tum ho ram..mai tumhe kbhi maf nhi krungi..she immidently call the rajat..

raj - hello priya..
priya - rajat mujhe vo proof mil gya hai mai phunch rhi hu tum jaldi se ganpati mandir k piche wali ground mai phunch jao mai vhi Aa rhi hu...then priya hear washroom door open and she immidently remove the pen drive and run from there or jldi jldi mai vo apna phn vhi chod dete hai..ram came out after wearing the cloth he saw laptop on his bed..he immidently cheque it and think kisne rkha yha or ye open b hai..and he find his watch on bed..something stuck in his mind...

ram - ohh my god..he immidently cheque it but not find any think he through the watch on floor...shitt..shitt..he saw priya phn on bed..and open it or find last call to rajat..

ram - shout..priyaaa...asa Kyu kiya priya...he called security or ask priya madam kaha hai...they told to ram that madam car laker baher gyi hai and she drived in so much speed..

ram -  ye sab us rajat ka kiya dhra hai..rajat. ..rajat...rajat use wkhat Kyu nhi Mar diya Maine use...

ram run out from home and set in car or drive very rashly..and call vikram or tell him every think..

ram - I m sry yar tujhe btana toh nhi chahta tha but kya kru..

vikram - pagal hai Tu chinta mat ker mai abhi phunch rha hu..

ram tracing the chip..ram knows the code of chip so he can traced it easily so priya didn't know that chip is traced by ram..ram drive so fast...

priya reach the ganpati mandir and find rajat is there with his police jeep..but he is alone no police man with him..

priya run to him and hug him and he smile so broadly or said priya kaha hai vo proof priya Vo pen drive Jase he rajat ko dene lgti hai...ram reached there or said..

ram - stop priya..khberdar ager ye pen drive use Di toh..common give it to me...

priya - nhi kbhi nhi Tumne mere papa ko mara hai mai ise kbhi nhi dungi tumhe..

ram - priya I said give it to me..

rajat - priya ye pen drive mujhe pkda do ye kuch nhi ker skta hme..

ram - nhi priya ye insan sirf tumhe use ker rha tha mere khilaf nothing else..ye koi tumhara dost vost ya well wisher nhi hai..smjhi tum..isliye bol rha hu b a gud girl ye mujhe dedo...

rajat - priya iska bhrosa mat krna he killed ur father..iski vjah Se aunty coma mai hai..or tum ase insan per bhrosa krogi..priya was confused don't know what to do..but she was angry on ram so she through the pen drive to rajat..now the pen drive in rajat hands..

rajat smile broadly...ram puller her toward him or put the gun on her temple or said..

ram - vo pen drive mujhe do rajat..vrna tumhare best frend apni Jan gwa bethegi...

rajat - nhi ram ye proof mere hath Bht mushkil se lga hai ye toh tumhe kbhi nhi dunga..

ram - thik hai toh fer ise marte hue dekho..priya was hell shock and look at him or think mai is insan se pyar krti thi jisne mere he ser per banduk rakh di apne fayde k liye or dawa krta tha ki mere liye apni jaan De skta hai..
rajat vo pen drive do vrna mai priya ko Mar dunga..
priya look at rajat with fear..ram on the gun trigger..
ram - rajat mai sirf 3 tak ginuga..ager Tumne vo pen drive mujhe nhi di toh..tum jante ho mai kisi ka sga nhi..mai kuch b ker skta hu..

1 priya look at him with horror..
2 priya look at rajat with plead eyes..with hop that he do something and close her eyes..

3 the voice came from different side she open her eyes and saw rajat said 3..
rajat - common ram goli chlao..mardo ise I dont care mujhe koi ferk nhi padta mujhe jo chahiye tha vo mere hath mai hai..haan but ek bat ka afsos jarur rhega..

ram look at him..
rajat - or vo pta Kya..ki mai priya k sath ek rat bhi nhi bita ska..sirf tumhare vjah se ager tum nhi hote toh priya mere bahon mai hoti..bilkul vase jase kuch der phle thi..

priya can't belive on her ears..ye sab rajat bol rha hai her childhood frend..she look at him or said rajat..

rajat - yes priya my love..priya yar mere ye wish toh Tumne pure krdi ..ek or wish pure krdo..plzz give me ur one night..dekho ab tumhe ram k sath jase rhna hai rho..

ram kyu na hm deal krle..mai tumhare ye pen drive police tak nhi phunchaunga but ye mere pass he rhegi..or ye police tak na jaye usk liye tumhe..priya ko week mai ek bar mere pass bhejna hoga..u know what I mean..
priya was standing like statue..she said nothing..not reacting..

ram - u basterd.. I will kill u..and try to shoot him..
stop ram ager mujhe khroch b ayi toh yad rkhna priya b nhi bachegi and pointing gun toward priya..

ram - Kya chahte ho..

rajat - filhal yha se jana..good bye and set in his jeep..his jeep is lil far from them and ram shoot on his jeep...bhummm...blast..
priya was shivering look at that sence in front of her eyes...and then look at ram..
ram - uski jeep mai bomb Maine he lgwaya tha..jb Vo ye Sab bkwas ker rh tha...or use pta b nhi chla ki uski gadi mai bomb hai or pta hai Maine ye Sab itni der se ye drama Kyu kiya tumhe uski sachai dikhana k liye..vrna mai use kbka mar deta..kya lga tumhe tum mere khilaf proof collect ker rhi thi or kya mujhe pta nhi lgta..mujhe Sab pta tha bas mai tumhe rokna nhi chahta tha..kyuki mujhe lga Maine tumhare sath jo b kiya vo glat tha..or shayed isi se tumhe kuch skoon mile..priya ager tum aker mujhse bolti na ki ram mujhe tumhe sja dene hai Tumne mere sath Jo bhi kiya ..toh I sware priya mai jaan b de deta..mai khud sare proof tumhare hath mai deta..and tear coming down from his eyes..mai khud ko police k hwale ker deta priya..per Tumne rajat..kyu kiya Tumne asa us rajat ko apne pass ane b kase diya Tumne kase Aa gyi uski bato mai..he hold her from her shoulder and shook her..y u do this to me priya...tumhe pta hai Maine use jan se Kyu mara..kyuki usne tumhe chune ki bat ki uski himmat kase hue mere priya k bare mai itni ghatiya bat krne Ki...priya sirf ram ki hai..Maine phle he smjhaya tha use per vo kmina...Mai kuch b bardash ker skta hu bas tumhe mere ilava koi or chahe ye mujhe bardash nhi priya..or fer vo toh tumhara bas..and tear role down to his chicks priya also crying loudly..tumhe nfrat hai na mujhse priya...mere sath rhna nhi chahti or shi b hai..Iwas  not deserv u...mai mafi nhi mangunga priya bcoz i know Maine glti nhi gunah kiya hai or uski koi mafi nhi ..he leave her and Set in his car and drove away...

priya set there on ground and cry her heart out..kyu mujhe her jgah dhokha mil jata hai..Kyu sab mere sath asa krte hai...jisper bhi bhrosa krti hu vhi insan mujhe dhokha de deta hai..Maine itne bhrose se rajat se sb kuch share kiya or usne mujhse he dhokha kiya..itna glat sochta rha mere bare mai or main paglo ki trah use per bhrosa krti rhi...

ram meet with vikram in half way..both going together in wedding hall..

ram - vikram ek bat khni hai..

vik - haan bol na..

ram - tu or neha aj he shadi krlo..jindgi ka koi bhrosa nhi yar pta nhi kl mai rhu ya na rhu...

vikram - shut up ram bkwas mat ker asa Kyu bol rha hai..kya hua hai..

ram - kuch nhi tu bta krega ya nhi..

vikram - Tu jesa chahta hai vesa he hoga..main or neha aj he shadi krenge..

neha and vikram get married only that day in evening...only bcoz of there best frend..

ram hug both of them and blessed them..

ram - aj mai chain se so payunga mera best frend aj family wala ho gya..finally ur settled in ur life...and his eyes got moist..to see them together and happy..
there is call on vikram phn..vikram attand it and shocked..

ram - kya hua vikram..ram was worried..

vik - priya is kidnapped..

ram - shocked...what ? kisne kiya ye...he was so angry..

vikram - singhaniya or shaye..tumse badla lene k liye..

ram set on chair and close his eyes..ohh my god..pta nhi mere kis kis glti Ki sja use milegi..god y u do this to her..plzzz mere gltiyo ki sja use mat dijiye...

again vikram phn ring and singhaniya said phn speaker per Dalo and vikram put on speaker...

singhaniya - ram kapoor The underworld don..nikal gyi sare hekdi...tumhare jaan mere hath mai hai..uff ram she is so beautiful..

ram shout singhaniya ager uski traf dekha b na toh tum jante ho mujhse bura koi nhi hoga...ager mere jaan ko khroch b ayi toh ...mai tumhare jaan lene se phle ek min b nhi sochunga ...u know me better..

singhaniya - yhi problem hai tumhare ram tum kam ki bat bht late krte ho..or isi bat per fer mujhe gussa ata hai..

ram - kya chahte ho..

sing - yes...that's my boy..haan ab jb tumhe smjh Aa gyi hai toh..mujhe tum chahiye ho..apne purane farm house per Aa jao or haan akele ana bina kisi hathiyar k smjhe..or vo hmare data ki chip laker aoo. ..

ram - vo rajat k pass thi or vo uski gadi mai bomb tha..vo chip b usk sath he jal gyi...

singhaniya - hahaha...ram tumhe Don bnane wala mai he tha..tumhe yad hai na..ager tumhe yad hai toh ye b yad hoga ki tum apne her ek file or her ek data ki copy rkhte ho..toh us chip ki dusre copy leke aao..

ram - nhi mere pass koi copy nhi hai..

sing - I think u miss some one...sherra Don sab ko kisi ki awaj sunao..he slap very hard on priya face..

priya - shout...aaahhh..and cry very loud..

ram - priya...ram was literally shivering hear her crying voice..and he shout plz singhaniya use kuch mat kro mai abhi aa rha hu..tumhe jo chahiye mai sab le ayunga bas use kuch mat khna..

sing - good ...well done my boy..aj rat ko party hai farm house per..I was Wating for u..akhir tumhare bina party mai ronak kase ayegi..and cut the call..

vikram - kya hua ram..

ram - mujhe jana hoga vikram..sare proofs laker singhaniya is up to something..we have to plan something as soon as possible priya ko vha Se nikalna hoga...neha I need ur help..afcos ram y not..btao mai Kya Ker skti hu..hmm suno..

continue...


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Wow..  What a thrilling update!!!!!!!!!!
Hope ram and priya are safe. 
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Waiting eagerly and please continue soon. 
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Beautiful and interesting... hope nothing will happen to our raya... waiting for last one
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nice update..  Ram and priyas emotions are portrayed well..  Update soon 
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Rajat ji true intentions Priya Ko pata chala... now she is kidnapped...
hope both ll be safe...
very interesting update...
eagerly waiting for next... plz update soon... thanks for pm.
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finally you have updated awesome loved it